Well his is a RECORD! I have 10 stories to think about….. wonderful huh? Well I had to get this out of my head, because it was bugging me to death! I've had this idea for AGES! Well this story will be one with songs, and my OC. Okay, R and R and I absolutely hate criticism, I know I'm a bad writer so don't rub it in! well here's the story…
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I walked along a quiet beach thinking about my new game, Jak 3. This game was going to be quite the challenge, at least that's what I thought. The first game was really easy, too easy for my liking. The second one was boring it had the worst missions and characters were kind of stupid, but this game has been fun so far. Walking through a harsh desert as a sand storm approaches or chasing down giant metal heads for the king, either way it was all good. I looked down at my Charter Club watch and noticed it was half past ten, so I slowly made my way home…

!Next morning!

I woke up, sun shinning into my eyes and a soft breeze coming from my open window. I looked over to my alarm clock, "Oh great, 6:00am how wonderful…" I thought while slowly lifting myself out of my warm bed. My feet touched the cold hard wood floor, with no heat coursing through my body. I made my way to the door and touched the ice cold door knob turning it, and slightly pushing the door open to reveal an empty house.

"I guess mom went to work early again," I said walking around the chilled house.

I found a small note on the table; it was mom's duty to leave me a note, telling me what to do during the weekend, so I didn't have to listen to her blab. I just put the note back down and walked into the living room.

This was the only rugged area of the house, and might I add the only warm place in the house. I could hear the playstation running and the fan powering the machine. I had forgotten to turn it off last night, but that doesn't matter, the longer it's on the better it runs. I picked up the controller and got into a comfortable position on the floor and got ready for the game to start.

I felt the controller vibrate, signaling the game was ready. I looked up and saw the starting screen, but something wasn't right. Usually the background was a desert and just sand flew by, but Jak was walking towards the screen, with Daxter on his shoulder. I slowly backed away from the TV, but was stopped short by the couch behind me. The screen colors started to blend around Jak and Daxter, creating a vortex of bright lights and dark colors. Jak stopped and looked to my eyes, and I felt a chill run up my spine as his eyes tore at mine. I suddenly became dizzy and a little tired. I fell sideways while looking at the screen and watched as the scenery known as my home fade away…

I woke up feeling heat bearing down on my body. "uuuuuh my head," I said slowly moving my hands to my head, no even noticing the foreign object under me. I sat up focusing my eyes to see where I was. I put my hands down feeling hot sand churn through my fingers. I looked ahead seeing nothing but a baron wasteland and behind me a soft looking oasis. I got up, even though my legs argued, and inched my way to the oasis. I fell down on my knees right in-front of the clear blue water and my whole body gave away. I fell asleep after that, as the sand bared down on my body covering me up like a death blanket…

Short, I know but go with me people, it's the first chapter! So you don't like, flame me then, just to let you know I will shun you. If you like review and give me some of your ideas. Also I have decided to accept 2 OC's from anyone. ONLY 2, so first come, first serve! The next chapter is in progress, but don't expect it up right away.

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