this is my first time writing a story (fanfic) but i do want to improve because when i finish college and finally get my own place i want to work on becomeing a comic book artist so tell me what you think*
narrator: the story starts with the four girls of hanzo academy asuka, yagyu, katsuragi, hibari and ikaruga takeing a history lesson from kiriya sensei
kirirya: ok girls today we are going to discuss the history of good ninja and evil ninja
katsuragi: ahh comon we know this already, we know about the yin and yang and how good ninjas and evil ninjas are part of the same coin
asuka: yeah sensei katsu has a point we've been over this
kiriya: yes but you haven't heard of the two great ninja families that gave birth to both good ninja and evil ninja
ikaruga: two great ninja familys...
narrator: all of the 4 girls are now intrigued
kiriya: yes many sentries ago there where two families the yamika family that gave birth to all evil ninja and kazekara family that gave birth to good ninja. these two familys where the original creators and holders of the yin and yang scroll and they both have there own ninja arts whith the yamika family being the masters of yang and the kazekara the masters of yin however most of there ninja arts where discarded because some of there ninja arts can only be masterd if you are from there blood line
yagyu: is it possible for there blood line to still be around sensei.
kiriya: NO
hibari: why not?
kiriya: because long ago there where two ninjas from both family's that fell in love
asuka: sounds like a love story
kiriya: well it aint the kind to have a happy ending when these two fell in love a child was born with a unique and powerful power
katsuragi: powerful power
kiriya: yes it was the power of yin and yang and with it the child was able to do lots of things such as heal others and have super regeneration and that was only the power of yin but yang could absorb nature energy of the spirit beats that you girls summom and much more however the child couldnt control it and lost control and the power of yin and yang some how took a form of a beast of black and white they called it the kazeyami beast
hibari: that sounds really scary
kiriya: yeah at the time good ninjas and evil ninjas where enemy's and they orderd the execution of the parents and the child however it wasnt easy the child wasn't going to let them kill his mom and dad so he faught off the kazekara and the yamika familys however he was not strong enough and ended up loosesing as a result the parents and child was executed.
ikaruga: wow thats a sad ending so what happend after that
kirirya: well after a few years after that many other good and evil ninja familys spawned over time from the yamika and kazekara and no one has heard of the the geat ninja familys ever since
asuka: wow what a story to think we good ninja come from the kazeyami
kiriya: well yes and no
Narrator: all of the girls gave a confused look
kiriya: you see the only thing good ninjas and evil ninjas inherited from the two familys where some of there ninja arts however there bloodline is lost and gone
yagyu: oh i see
kirirya: well girls that about wraps it up class is now finished
narrator: kiriya sensei dissappears useing his infamous smoke bombs that always makes others around him choke when he uses them
hibari: hey yagyu to you think that the child of the two families could have survived the execution
yagyu: who knows and even if the "kazeyami" blood line was still around i think that person wouldve been found out by now
narrator: katsuragi out of nowhere jumps out behing hibari and starts fondling her breats
katsuragi: ooooh i think youve grone a cup size or two
hibari: eeeeek stop it katsu your being too ruff
narrator: yagyu wasnt haveing any of that she grabbed katsuragi by her head and flinged here across the room, she tends to be very protective over hibari
katsuragi: owww hey you didnt have to throw me that hard you know
yagyu: anybody who touches hibari in an inappropriate manner will answer to me
asuka: comom guys no fighting comon lets get something to eat
katsuragi: fine i was hungry anyway
narrator: the girls go out to eat and then runs into hunzo the legendary shinobi who is also asuka grandfather
hanzo: hello girls what are you up
asuka: oh hey grand father we are just looking for a really good place to eat why dont you come and join us
hanzo: as much as i would love to join you i have to meet up with kiriya however there is a great sushi restaurant to your next left
asuka: ok thats grandpa
narrator: the girls left and just right after they left hanzo heard a loud scream coming from down te streat
unknown kid: gaaaahhhhh!!!!!!!!!!
narrator: hanzo turns around to see it was just a kid being chased by a bunch of street thugs
unknown kid: SOMEBODY PLEASE HELP MEEEEE!!!!!!!!
narrator: the kid bumps into hanzo
unknown kid: ouch... omg im sorry sir i didnt notice you there let me help you up
street thugs: hey there he is get him
narrator: the street thugs surround hanzo and the kid
street thug: get lost old geezer our business aint with you
hanzo: my my there are six of you and you want to attack just on person tisk tisk tisk what a bunch of loosers
street thug: i warned you old man
unkown kid: hey you cant just beat up a elderly person
street thug: STFU
narrator: he kicks the kid in the gut causeing him to fall but the moment he opens his eyes he sees all of the street thugs beaten up and he looks really confused
unknown kid: w w w-what just happend
hanzo: i took care of them when you blacked out a few seconds ago
unkown kid: wait really awsome japanese people sure do kick ass
hanzo: "Japanese people" hmm i take it your not from around here
unknown kid: no im actually from over sees im American and my name is shura
narrator: hanzo takes a good look at him and notices his features even his hair, it stood up looking similar to flames and its pitch black with the tips looking silver even his eyes where bright silver
hanzo: i see, you speak fluent Japanese for somebody from america
shura: yeah my mom and i came here im gonna be starting school tomorrow so i better get going and thanks for helping me sir
narrator: shura runs home waving good bye to hanzo but then suddenly hanzo senses a unatrual flow of energy from shura, either way he tried to not think so hard on it and walk off to meet kiriya however it still peeked his interest
shura: mom im home
narrator: shuras mom name is maya and she just comes out of the kitchen
maya: welcome home shur...
narrator: she stops talking suddenly and notices a black footprint on shuras shirt
maya: omg what happend to you did you get hurt
shura: no mom im fine somebody helped me and beaten up those thugs you should've seen the state they wher...
narrator: she had an angry look on her face
shura: oh... you look pissed
maya: thats because i am, look me and you came here to start a normal life here you need to stop getting into trouble or else there will BE TROUBLE
shura: im sorry they where picking on this girl before so i thought i could help but it didnt turn out so well
maya:" *sigh* your a spitting image of you father always trying to play the hero. you didnt... you know, loose control did you
shura: no mom dont worry see
narrator: shura exposes his sixpack to his mom and shows her the seal that has been placed on him
maya: you know youve trained in martial arts shura so it doesnt hurt to defend your self
shura: yeah but i dont want to repeat what happend 2 years ago i just wanna be a normal kid
maya: i know anyway dinner is ready we are eating saltfish tonight
shura: hell yeah
narrator: shura finishes his dinner and heads to his room
shura: goodnight mom
maya: good night dear
narrator: shura slomps himself on his bed and looks to his side looking at his family photo
shura: i miss you dad
narrator: he then drift off to sleep with the photo in his arms. its now morning and shura wakes up and notices the time
shura: damn im gonna be late on my first day of school
narrator: he quickly showers puts on his navy blue uniform and heads out however he doesnt go to a hanzo academy he goes to a public school called ark academy
narrator: in hanzo academy hanzo meets up with kiriya in the training grounds where the 4 girls are training there ninja skills
kiriya: master hanzo its great to see you
hanzo: its good to see you to
kiriya: yesterday you where late to our meeting did something happend your not normally late
hanzo: yes about that i need to speak with you in private
narrator: they both walk off and the girls notice something fishy however they continued with there training
hanzo: yesterday i ran into a child and there was something abnormal about him
kiriya: "him?"
hanzo: yes and i sensed a unatrual flow of aura from him like something leaking out of a seald treasure chest
kiriya: is he someone that we should be worried about
hanzo: no he looks like a good kid however theres something not normal about him
kiriya: what does he look like?
hanzo: his hair stands up shaped like a flame his eyes are bright silver and the tips of his hair is silver also his name is shura
narrator: kiriya gave a confused look however he knew hanzo wouldn't have brought this to his attention if it was not important.
kiriya: alright ill keep a look out for him
narrator: he leaves to the training grounds to assist the girls with there training
kiriya: alright girls i have a mission for you
narrator: all the girls surround kiriya with a excited look on there faces
katsuragi: alright what do you want us to do sensei
kirirya: pertrol the area, apparently there are still alot of street thugs around
katsuragi: whaaaaat talk about a bumber i thought we could infiltrate a secret base or something
yagyu: we are just students we are not ready for that
narrator: katsuragi gives a very unsatisfied look, the girls head out petroling there area then suddenly they here a police chase and it seems a bunch of criminals are trying to escape the police however they had a plan, they had a bunch of C4 explosives and through them at the nearest building which caused a fire to start there men came however the fire got out of control and a child was stuck on the 5th floor scream the girls couldnt go after them cause it would risk there identity and ninjas are supposed to always be in the shadows. shura just finished school and noticed a huge fire from afar he goes towards it and notices a kid in there and the mother is out side screaming saying "someone please save my daughter" there where tears in her eyes
fireman: hey this is dangerous get back kid
shura: why isnt anybody going after the girl
fireman: we are handling this situation get back
narrator: kiriya arrives and notices the fire
kiriya: what happend:
hibari: a bunch of bad guys where being chased by the police and then the through some bombs at the building then a huge fire started
asuka: we wanna help but...shes on the 5th floor and our identity might get exposed around these people plus we have never been trained on this situation if we just suddenly jump to the 5th floor with all there people around there is gonna be some problems
narrator: then suddenly shura got flashback of his dad when he was younger
shura: hey dad why did you risk your mission and decide to help someone else arent you always supposed to follow what your superiors say
shura dad: shura over the years of me being jutsu master i learnd one thing if you have the power to change something for the better you do it cause if you dont it will be your fault for doing nothing
narrator: after that shura pushed passed the firman and dashed straight to the fire building every body was in shock. the fireman yelled at shura telling him to to come back here however it was too late shura managed to enter the building and the entrance fell apart and got blocked
shura: i never thought id have to use this again but its now or never
narrator: shura uses a technique called sixth sense and with it hes able to detect others from a distance or alert him if theres danger near by plus it can be used to read other peoples movements.
he uses it to get to the 4th floor
shura: hold on kid im coming, damn the door way is blocked comon think think think
narrator: he uses sixth sense to look around and notices that the kid is just right above him on the 5th floor and the 5th floor is about to crash and floor about
shura: i could use THAT technique however i could risk blowing her away COMON DAMNIT THIS BUILDING IS ABOUT TO FALL APART WHAT DO I DO
narrator: he notices a crack in the ceiling and then uses his fists to weaken it and then the kid falls just right into his arms
shura: damn i busted up my fist doing that but at least i got you, dont worry youll see you mum soon now lets get the hell out of here
narrator: he then notices that he cant go down stairs cause its completely engulfed in fire with the kid in his arms he rans towards the window and he notices that there is a trampoline outside ready for him every body is telling him to jump shur then puts the kid on his back
shura: are you ready
narrator: the child nods her head
narrator: shura then dashes out the window falling towards the trampoline just right before the entire bulding collapses. every body started clapping and the mom hugged her daughter and thanked shura, shura started to blush however the fireman looked pissed
fireman: hey stupid brat have yoi got a death wish or something what if you didnt make it out
shura: but i did /
firman: *sigh* but still if you hadnt run in there that child would have died
narrator: then suddenly shura passed out on the ground
fireman: someone call the amberlam
sorry guys i just had to do it* :p
narrator: shura then wakes up in a hospital bed with his mom on the side asleep
shura: hey mum wake up
narrator: she wakes up
shura: looks like im all goo...
narrator: she bursts into tears and hugs shura
maya: i cant take this anymore your breaking my heart shura running into a fire building, seriously i thought i was gonna loose you like how i lost your father stop doing this to me.
narrator: shura then starts feeling guilty then hugs his mom back, then the docter walked in
doctor: hey shura looks like you are all good, honestly i haven't seen anything like it your healing at a abnormal rate plus a have a visitor for you
shura: a visitor?
narrator: hanzo then walks in
hanzo: hey shura we meet again
shura: your that old geezer from before
maya: is this the man who helped you from those street thugs from before
shura: yep this is the guy
maya: i see
hanzo: and you must be his mother let me introduce my self im hanzo and i must say i dont see much resemblance from you to
maya: i get that alot but thats only cause shura has inherited his fathers side
hanzo: i see
shura: so why are you here hanzo
hanzo: i came here to speak with you in private shura
shura: ummm ok mum do you mind
maya: sure take your time
narrator: shuras mother leaves the room
shura: so what do you want to talk about hanzo sir
hanzo: ive noticed somethin unique about you
narrator: shura gives a confused look
hanzo: in all my life ive met alot of strange people but not as strange as you, your healing rate is abnormal plus you where able to find that kid i the building in such a short time no doubt about it if a regular person went in there he or she wouldve died
narrator: shura then starts getting nervous and starts sweating.
shura: if you hear the truth what will you do
hanzo: nothing untoward thats for sure
shura: well yes i do have certain abilities such as regeneration and much more however i do try to hide them
hanzo: and why is that?
shura: because im afraid
hanzo: i see if thats the case i wont try and dig into your past however i can give you an option to put your talents to good use
shura: i dont like where this is going
hanzo: have you ever heard of "shinobi"
before
shura: shinobi as in ninjas
hanzo: yes you see there are ninjas that roam around the city protecting the pea...
shura: stop right there sorry but im not joining
narrator: hanzo gives a surprised look
shura: sorry i dont think your a bad person nor do i think your lieing but im the last person on this planet that you would want training to be a ninja plus my mother would loose it if i tried to become a ninja
hanzo: very well but do know this you cant hide who you are forever and when you have the power to change something for the better you do it or else it would be your fault
narrator: after that comment shura immediately got flash backs about his father saying that to him. the next day at hanzo academia
kiriya: alright girls lets start todays lesso..
narrator: the girls seemed to be very depressed
kiriya: whats wrong?
asuka: its just that yesterday we did nothing even though we are highly trained ninjas we couldn't even save one child
kiriya: its not your fault besides the kid is safe it was beyond your control
ikaruga: and yet some random person barged in without even giving it a second thought into a building engulfed in fire and saved a kid
yagyu: yeah just who was that person i couldn't get a good look at him
hibari: yeah id like to know who it was
katsuragi: me to wait was it a boy or a girl
kiriya: thats enough lets start our lesso...
narrator: hanzo then walks in
everyone: master hanzo
hanzo: hello every one your looking well also kiriya my i speak with you in private
kiriya: very well
narrator: they both walk out
kiriya: is this about that boy
hanzo: yes ive spoken to him to confirm some stuff and now i have a little theory
kiriya: what theory?
hanzo: he didnt say it with his own lips and this might sound crazy but...
kiriya: but what?
hanzo: i think this boy might be a "kazeyami"
narrator: kiriya gave a extremely shocked and nervous look
kiriya: WHAT IMPOSSIBLE HOW CAN YOU BE SO SURE
hanzo: im not and in all honesty i dont want to be however the boy has talent and his unatrual flow of yin of yang was strong when i was close to him. i gave him an offer to join hanzo acadamy however he turned down my offer
kiriya: so what do we do, should we alert the head quarters about this
hanzo: NO if word comes out that he is from the two great ninja familys he could be in danger
kiriya: so what do we do then?
hanzo: nothing all we can do is wait and hope for the best
kiriya: very well
narrator: over at shuras house hes in his room thinking about what hanzo said to him
shura: *sigh* but i cant last time i tried fighting for whats right and i turned on my teamates and i even hurt *HER* damnit
why did i have to be born into a cursed family line
narrator: *shura starts crying*
shura: im a monster
maya: shuraaaa im going out to my some stuff ill be back soon
narrator: shura doesnt respond
maya: *sigh* i hope hes okay i knew coming to japan wasnt a good idea oh well we've make the best of it
narrator: maya heads out to the store and buys some groceries and then head back home however she is stoped by a bunch of thugs the sameones that where chaseing shura
street thug1: hey girly wanna hang out with us ooohhh looks like you got some delicious food packing
street thug2: thats not all shes packing in
maya: sorry but i need to get home my son is waiting
street thug3: oh so you have a son, that means your an experienced women i like that.
narrator: maya tries to leave however she then gets grabbed and then thrown onto the ground the six street thug surround her then starts striping her down she starts fighting back by kicking biteing screaming spitting
street thug1: ugh i hate fiesty women lets just beat her up and take her stuff
narrator: then they continuesly beated her and then left her there she had a few broken bones but not realiseing that they just attacked a mother of a vicious beast soon to hunt them down. a few moments later shura started to worry
shura: where is she, she shouldve been back by now
narrator: suddenly a police knocked on the door, shura opened it
policeman: are you shura
shura: yes i am can i help you with something officer
policeman: im afraid i have some bad news son, you mother was found in an ali-way assulted and in critical condition
narrator: shuras eyes widened
shura: OH GOD is she ok
police officer: yes shes fine we can take you to her now
narrator: they take shura to the hospital to see his mom and when he sees her he brakes down in tears
doctor: yes if she where to come in any later she would have died
narrator: and with that one comment all of shuras sadness turned to pure rage
docter: visiting time is over all she needs is some rest
shura: its cool ive planned on leaving anyway
narrator: shura was so full of rage he had to keep a striaght face when walking home but when he got home his pupils started to glow white and black matkings where appearig in his body
shura: when i find out who did this im going to show them the sight of hell
narrator: he heads out to track down the street thugs, he then runs past a mask store then turns back and realises he has to hide his face he buys a black coated mast with a white "x" he yhen heads to the scene where the policemen told him where they found his mum he then activates his sixth sense to notice any clues and he does, whith his sixth sense he can detect other peoples aura that has been around in a certain area and now hes got then cent of 6 street thugs's aura now the hunt begins. shura leaps from building to building looking down on the ground for his targets
shura: there you are you damn basterds
street thug1: that women sure was thicc its a shame we had to mess her up
narrator: shura steps out of the shadows but doesnt say a word
street thug2: this aint l Halloween kid go home before we decide to hur...
narrator: shura then grabs him by the neck then uses a technique he made up long ago called inpact style then punches the street thug(2) in the gut causeing him to puke out blood then knocking him out.
you see the inpact style is about controling the muscles in the body through a certain breathing method
releaseing overwhelming force however one must be cautious cause you could rip your body apart due to the human body haveing limitations, however due to this technique shura can leap great hights move faster then the eye can see and deliver devastating blows however he can control how powerful the blows can be. street thug(3) tries to rush shura but ends up being punched into a wall brakeing almost all his bones at this point this was no longer shura just a monster going off pure instinct
street thug(4): what is up with this freak
narrator: he throws a knife at shura he tries to avoid it but ends up cutting his arm however the cut starts to heal
street thug(4) WTF is this guy
narrator: shura then uses inpact style deadly talon and breaks street thug(4)
ribcage which sends him flying, street thug (5) tries to grab him from the behind but then shura manages to get out of his grip gets behind him and uses inpact style kanetic palm which did damage to his spine.
street thug(1): look whatever i did to you im sorry u swear i wont do it agai...
narrator: shura then grabs him and then repeatedly starts punching him which ended up his skull being paved and just when he was about land the final blow a kunai came out of nowhere made shura back off. it was Hanzo and kiriya
hanzo: shura this your only warning leave now and ill overlook this incident today
narrator: shura clenched his fist and then leaped off home with saying a work
kiriya: my god look at this they are alive but just barely. to think kid would beat them all half to death
hanzo: kiriya call and ambulance
kiriya: right away hanzo
narrator: when shura arrived home he took off his mask and looked at his hands covered in blood and then he started to burst into tears
shura: im a monster i should just die
narrator: the next day hanzo arrived at shuras place
hanzo: you have alot of explaining to do young man
shura: ill tell you everything
narrator: shura explains everything that happened
hanzo: i see so your mother was also beaten half to death by those punks and then you decided to take it appon youself to punish them
shura:...yeah...i guess
hanzo: now tell me do you feel good about youself
shura: no i feel like a monster
hanzo: so what will you do now
shura: probably just go back to America i should have never came to japan
hanzo: *sigh* shura just come out straight who are you
narrator: shura takes a deep breath
shura: my name is shura...shura kazeyami and a ex jutsu master
hanzo: dear god it was shocking enough to hear that you are a kazeyami but a jutsu master as well
narrator: ill try to keep this brief jutsu masters are these talanted nature energy usesers and a organisations that doesnt coexist with modern society today basically its a secret to the world of ninja and many others
hanzo: so ive noticed you have some markings on you stomach care to explain.
shura: its a seal designed to seal away my yin and yang abilitys however its slightly damaged due to a certain incident that happend to me a long time ago
hanzo: hey shura remember my offer to you
shura:...yeah
hanzo: well i think kiriya and i can help you
narrator: shura starts to smile a little bit
shura: you can
hanzo: if you join our school we can tech you how to control your powers and maybe some day youll become a "super ninja"
narrator: fun fact shura is a geeky comic book lover and loves super heros and manga too
shura: "super ninja" whats that?
hanzo: it pretty much means the best ninja alive or strongest ninja ever
shura: oh well if thats it then i dont really want to become a super ninja i just wanna be able to save others and create a world where everyone can smile being the asolute strongest aint for me. so where do i start
hanzo: you can arrive tomorrow
shura: awsome
hanzo: ill let kiriya know of your arrivel
narrator: now over at hanzo academy the girls are buggy kiriya
katsuragi: comon sensei dont leave us in the dark you and hanzo have been acting weird
ikaruga: she has a point sensei tell is whats up
yagyu: i want to know whats going on to
hibari: me to
asuka: me three
kiriya: *sigh* fine ill tell you we are haveing a new student attending hanzo academy
asuka: really awsome cant wait to meet her
katsuragi: a new play buddy thats great
ikaruga: katsu dont molester her on her first day
hibari: great a new friend to hang out with i hope shes nice
yagyu: whats her ninja heritage?
kiriya: *HIS* ninja heritage is a little bit complicated and i hope you help *HIM* during class
narrator: the girls took a moment of silence to try and process what kiriya said
all the girls: EEEEEEEHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!
asuka: a boy really
narrator: asuka started to fiddle with her hair
hibari: im a little nervous ive never had any friends that where boy
yagyu: im fine with him as long as he doesnt put the moves on hibari
ikaruga: hmmmm most of the boys ive met are just really perverts after our bodys, ill have to keep and eye on him
katsuragi: a boy thats even better i could play with him and teach him how to fond...
narrator: every body was just looking at katsuragi giving her a death glare to not even finish that sentence
kiriya: ho should be here any minute
narrator: shura walks in and the girls just stare at him
shura: hello my name is shura
katsuragi: pffft wahahahahahahaha whats with that hair
kiriya: katsuragi dont be rude
asuka: *he does look kinda cute though* wait a minute why does he look so familiar
hibari: i remember now your that person who ran into that fire building
katsuragi: wait that was you
shura: yep thats me hehehehe
ikaruga: honestly you dont look like that much of a bad person if anything you look pretty innocent
shura: thanks i guess
katsuragi: yeah when i get a closer look at you your pretty cute for a dude anyway im katsuragi
hibari: im hibari
asuka: im asuka
ikaruga: im ikaruga
yagyu: im yagyu
shura: hello everyone i hope i can learn alot from you
so this is it the longest typeing ive probably ever done im not done with it there still more to come depending on how this works out so let me knkw what you think*