AN: To All my old readers please read this AN it is new. I've changed this story. Please read the new Summary below. Dakota is now older, and her back story is different too. It would probably be helpful for you to re read the first two chapters. A lot of things will be changing. I hope that you guys will still like it.
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Summary: The Cullens are living in Texas. Rosalie and Emmett decide that they want to adopt. They adopt a fourteen year old named Dakota. Dakota is very beautiful. She has curves in all the right places, and great assets. She's fun, loving, artistic, and athletic. She's fierce and very smart. The whole family immediately takes to her. Watch as she goes through high school and deals with having vamps as a family.
AN: The only book that happened is Twilight. She graduated high school in Forks. Then the whole family left saying that they were going to college and Bella got changed. There is no Renessme and the Volturi never got involved. Since Edward never left the whole love triangle never happened. Jasper doesn't struggle with his blood lust as much either. Dakota gets adopted in the summer. The family moves from Texas that very day. The family moves to Tampa, Florida. In my story the vampires don't sparkle, but everything else about them is the same. Don't hound me about the adoption. I don't know how they work, and I'm pretty sure the way I did it is way to quick, but whatever it is my story. So just hang in there with me.
Chapter 1
(Rosalie POV)
I'm so excited! I finally get to have a child. I want a baby so bad. Carlisle finally agreed to let us do this. Since Bella is over her newborn stage it will be safe. Emmett and I will be the parents, Carlisle and Esme the grand parents, and everyone else aunts and uncles. We want to adopt a teenager. We knew that once you were older the chance of adoption goes way down, and we wanted to give someone a chance. I may love little babies, but a teenager would be just fine. I could talk to her about boys, do her make-up, her hair, help her get dressed, get her ready for dates and so on.
We finally pull up to the adoption center in Huston. The whole family is going. Each couple in their own respective cars.
"You ready for this Babe?" Emmett asked me.
"Yeah, I've been waiting for so long. Do you think we'll find someone. I want someone that looks a little like us. That way it'll be more believable. Will we be good parents? I can't even cook. What if she gets hungry? She's going to starve to death. Take me back home, we can't do this" I said starting to get hysterical.
"Rose it'll be ok. You're going to be a great mother." Emmett said while cupping my fast in his hands. "We have our whole family behind us. Bella can still cook a little bit, she was human three years ago. We can always go take cooking classes. It'll be fine." Emmett said to me in a comforting tone.
"Ok" I whispered while nodding my head. Then we both get out the car. " You guys ready?" I asked them. They nod their heads. We knock on the door and wait for someone to answer.
A woman about in her forties comes and answers the door. Children are running around the house and she looks stressed and frazzled. She ushers us in then shuts the door.
"Hello, my name is Anne Jones. Are you here do adopt?" she asked in a polite tone.
"Yes we are Ms. Jones" I said.
She motions for us to follow her to her office. She notices that we have already filled out the paper work, and all we have to do is pick. She leads us upstairs, which is where the teens stay.
"Fight Fight Fight!". We hear as we head up the stairs.
"Oh dear. Not another fight. I'm sorry, but those girls have been having problems for two years. That is when one of the girls got here. Apparently she stole her boyfriend. They've been getting into since her first day." Ms. Jones told us
We quickly made it up the stairs and saw two girls.
One girl had red hair and the other had this reddish, brown hair. They both looked to be about fourteen.
"Your parents didn't like you. They left you because you were ugly. If you were as pretty as me then they would've kept you." the read headed girl said. Then the red head slapped the other girl.
I was pissed. Who did that little girl think she was? I was ready to go intervene but Alice stopped me. Then the girl with the reddish brown hair got this wicked look on her face.
"My parents said to never start a fight but once someone swings at me I can kick their ass." she said in this harsh, cold, deadly tone.
The older girl laughs and slaps the girls face again. Next thing we know the girl with the reddish brown hair punches the other one in the eye. The girl with the red hair then lunges for the other girl, and they start rolling around.
"Aren't you going to stop them" I asked Ms. Jones.
"No. Honestly its best to wait until they both have cooled down a little bit. We've learned our lesson. Break them apart to soon you get hurt. They've given almost all the staff black eyes, and bruises. We only stop them if it starts getting to serious. Like once we see blood, or if one of them is really doing damage to the other." She replied
Well that sounds weird to me, but whatever. This isn't my job.
When I looked back at the fight I noticed the one with the reddish brown hair was on top of the other one. She was laying punches on her face.
"My parents loved me you bitch. They got killed while over seas. They were in the military. Plus never say I'm not pretty again. I'm beautiful and look way better than you will ever look! Got it!" she said while laying punch after puncher onto the girl below her. The girl below her struggled but couldn't get up. That is when the workers decided to intervene.
While pulling her off she ended up giving two workers a black eye. Good thing no one spilled blood. We may be controlled but we still don't want to chance that.
I was so impressed by that little girl. She seemed like a little fire ball. I never was able to get a good look at anything but her hair. I knew that I wanted to adopt her. She would fit right in with us. I wasn't able to get a good look at her, but I could tell she was a beauty.
"Dang! Did you see that girl she beat the shit out of that other one." Emmett said excitedly.
"You're right man. She was amazing." Jasper said.
It's very rare for Jasper to really be impressed by a human. This just confirmed my decision.
"We have to adopt her. She'll fit in perfectly." I said to everyone. They all agreed. Ms. Jones found us and apologized for the scene. She told us that if we still wanted to adopt most of the teens were in the rec room and some of them were in their rooms.
"We would love to look, but we already know who we want. We want the girl who was just in that fight. The one with the reddish brown hair." I said to her.
"Ahh, Dakota. She's a fireball. Very sassy, but respectful too. Attracts all the boys too. Such a beauty. She's been here about two years. She has a lot of friends. She's great with children, always helping out with the younger ones. She also has a boyfriend, they've been going out since her first week here. They are so cute together. They are really well behaved, and are great together. Though he is always sneaking in her room. I'll tell you she is a sneaky one, and a little rebellious from what I can tell. Come on I'll take you to her room." Ms. Jones said.
When she said that Dakota has a boyfriend all the guys in my family growled. They were already so over protective of her. We all followed closely behind Ms. Jones. One the way up we saw the girl that Dakota beat up. She had two black eyes, a swollen lip, and her whole torso and face was black and blue. Dakota did a number on her.
"Did you see that other girl? Dakota really did beat the crap out of her" I said to my family in a low enough tone that only we could hear. They nodded and we kept walking. We finally made it to Dakota's room. Ms. Jones knocked on her door.
"Dakota open up. There is a family that wants to adopt you" she said. "Hold up a minute." a voice replied. After a couple of minutes the door opens, revealing the girl.
Ms. Jones was right she was a beauty. So beautiful you would think she was a vampire. She had the prettiest reddish brown hair that went to her butt. She had the prettiest hazel, green, brown, and gray eyes I've ever seen. They were big and innocent. Her eyes were rimmed with thick eyelashes. Her lips were full, plump and naturally red. Her nose was like a button.
No homo, but she had curves in all the right places. Her breasts looked to be about a D cup, she also had a butt on her. You could easily see how she attracted boys. She had her first two holes pierced, an industrial bar, a nose piercing, a Monroe piercing, and you could see her naval piercing.
I've never really though a ton of piercing were cute, but they looked great on her.
Apparently she had changed out of what she was wearing earlier. Right now all she had on was a skimpy tank- top that stopped right above her naval and some super short shorts. Her hair was hanging straight down her back.
It was small but she was the only one in it. Her room had a ton of drawings and paintings on the wall, quite a few trophies and medals, and music and books on a huge bookshelf. She had two dressers, two single size beds, two night stands, and a desk with a rolling chair.
"My roommate of sorts just got adopted so that's why there's extra of almost everything. Yall can sit on both beds. I can sit on my rolling chair." she said then went and got the chair.
Alice, Jasper, Emmett, and I sat on one bed and the rest of the family sat on the other. Dakota pulled the chair in the middle of both the beds and sat down. I decided to say something.
"Hi Dakota my name is Rosalie. Me and my husband Emmett want to adopt you." I said getting straight to the point.
"Ok then. If you guys are adopting me then why is everyone else here?" She asked.
"This is our family." I said. Then they proceeded to introduce themselves to her. "We were all adopted by Carlise and Esme." I said once they were done.
"Ok then that's cool." Dakota said.
"I know you don't know much about us but would you like us to come home with us?" I asked in a nervous tone.
"Yeah sure why not. Yall seem pretty nice." She said.
I was so excited. I swear if I could I would have tears in my eyes. I finally got to have the child of my dreams.
"Ok so if I'm moving in with yall I need to pack up my stuff. So yall are going to help me." she said.
She pulled out several suitcases and boxes. The boxes were all labeled, and she told us that all of her clothes go into the suitcases. She went into a drawer and pulled out an ipod touch. She plugged it into her stereo and put on Jai Ho by the Pussycat Dolls. She started dancing around and packing. She pulled me with her and we both started dancing. Then she got Alice and Esme. She handed us all hair brushes and combs. We were all jumping around and singing the lyrics into our 'microphones'. The boys were laughing at us. When the song finished we all collapsed onto the beds laughing our butts off.
"That was fun!" Alice said.
"We definitely gota do that again" Esme said.
We all nodded our heads and got back to work. We finished packing up her room in a hour. Everyone grabbed up boxes and suitcases and brought them to the front door. Then we followed Dakota to the living area.
All of the kids and workers were there to say good bye. Most of the little kids were crying. They all loved her. She's been taking care of them for two years.
After she got through all of them she stopped at this boy, I guess that this was her boyfriend. He was a handsome young man. Dirty blonde hair, brown eyes, and a chiseled face. He looked to be about 16. He had slight muscles, and was about 5'11.
"I'm going to miss you Dakota." he said.
"I'm going to miss you too Josh." she said.
"I got something for you" he said.
When he said this, their friends and the workers left. I guess they wanted to give them privacy. Of course me and my family stayed, but we did back away from them a little bit.
Then he pulled out a necklace. It was silver engraved double hearted toggle necklace. Engraved on one heart was Joshua & Dakota and the other heart said 'I'll never forget you'.
"I know that we will probably never see each other again, but you will always have my heart. I love you so much, and I will never forget you" Joshua whispered into her ear as he put the necklace on her. He kissed the back of her neck where the clasp closed.
They both had tears streaming down their face. Dakota quickly turned around and proceeded to kiss him. The kiss quickly escalated, and Josh had Dakota against the wall. Her legs went around his waist, and his hands started to run over the exposed skin on her stomach. Her hands were pulling at his hair, and they both started letting out little moans.
It was like they were functioning off of raw need. It was pretty intense to watch. They were kissing like they would never see each other again, which is probably true. I'm pretty sure if we weren't there it would've went father than that.
They guys were growling under their breathes. Us girls had to physically hold them back. I swear Josh wanted to get himself killed.
They slowed down their kissing, but Dakota kept her legs around him. They were just looking into each others eyes. The love pouring off of them.
"I love you too. I want you to move on for me though. I want you to let me go. You're going to meet the girl of your dreams, who will be so much better for you than me. When you meet her I want you to never let her go. I'm going to miss you so much. You were my first love and like you said I'll never forget you. You will always have a piece of my heart. I love you bye Joshie" she said with tears falling down her cheeks.
" I don't know if I'll ever find someone better than you. For you though, I will try. I love you so much and I'll never forget you. Bye Kota" Josh said with tears falling down his cheeks.
They kissed again this time it was sweet and tender. They were communicating their love for each other.
They pulled apart slowly, and he grabbed her bags. He carried out to the car and put them in the trunk.
"So this is it" Josh said
"Yupp I guess so. Remember you'll find someone better than me, and I'll never forget you." Dakota said
"I highly doubt it, and I'll never forget you either." Josh replied
" I have something for you too" she said.
She pulled out an album book from her bag.
"I knew that there would be a chance that one of us got adopted so I've been making this since we go together. These are pictures of us they start from two years ago and end with that picture we took yesterday. Look at to remember the good times, never feel sad about the time we've spent together. Being with you taught me how to love. Now I know what it feels like, and I'll never settle for any less than how you've made me feel. I love you." Dakota said giving Josh a kiss then getting in the car.
After that everyone got in the car. As we pulled out she looked at him from the back window. She kept looking for a few minutes even after she couldn't see him. Emmett and I still could though. He was still standing there crying.
"I love you Dakota, and I'll never forget you, but I will try and move on." he said then went back into the building.
AN: Ok lets clear some things up. Rosalie and Emmett have adopted Dakota. Josh is her current boyfriend and first love. Kota is her nickname. She is 14. Don't give me shit about her age, its my story and she can have her first love at 14. Josh will not be coming back into my story, but he may be brought up at some points. As for a timeline. The Cullen's came to the house at around 10am and they leave at 8pm. Not realistic, but just pretend please. Ok that is all for now. Back to the story.
Dakota finally sat down then proceeded to go to sleep. We got to the house quickly. I took Dakota in the house and put her on the couch. Everyone else used vampire speed to put her stuff in her room. Once they finished we all decided to have a meeting.
We all meet in the dining room. "Isn't she amazing" I said. "We finally have a daughter" I said to Emmett jumping up and down like Alice.
"Yeah she is Rose and yes we do. Did you see that dude though. She shouldn't be dating. She will not date at all. I don't care if we have to home school her. Right guys" Emmett said. They all nodded their heads in agreement.
"Emmett you're being ridiculous! She's going to public school and she can date. That's a normal human thing to do" I said to him.
"I don't care. Did you see that dude? He was kissing her KISSING HER! It wasn't a little peck, it was a full blown make out session. He had her up against a wall, and was feeling her up. Emmett growled out
"So what she's fourteen. Perfectly capable of having a boyfriend. She can date so get over that now." I said.
"Fine!" Emmett said.
"Since that's settled what does everyone think of little Dakota" Carlise said.
"She's so cute! She also has great fashion sense. I can't wait to get her into a mall. She has a great body, and I can't wait to dress it up" Alice said.
"She seems so sweet. I think she'll be great for the family." Esme said.
"Her mind is so pure. She seems interesting, her mind is a very nice place" Edward said.
"I like her also. I can't wait to get to know her." Bella said.
"Like Edward said, her emotions are nice and refreshing. They are strong too. I would like to get to know her better." Jasper said.
"You already know our answers. We already love her" I said for Emmett and I. "Well I love her too. She should be a great addition to our family. We need to find out more about her though. What she likes dislikes, and things about her past. We need to see if she would like to have our last name too. She's a very smart girl. She was supposed to have skipped two grades when she was younger, but didn't want to. She's top of her class and in all AP classes. They are on summer break right now, so we need to move before school starts back up. We already have the house set up. So we will be moving tomorrow. Dakota needs to eat as soon as she wakes up. After that we will discuss things with her. Emmett, Rosalie you will be in charge of that. Both of you are going to be parents now. You need to make sure that she understands the things we are going to tell her. You need to establish any rules that you may give her now. We will all help, but you are majorly responsible for her. You guys are going to have to pose as her siblings in the public eye, because you guys look the same age. She is more physically mature than most fourteen year olds. We will tell her our secret before we leave, just incase she doesn't accept us she can go back to the foster home. That's all for now meeting adjourned" Carlisle said. Carlisle was right Emmett and I will have to pose as her siblings in the publics eye, but I won't dwell on that for now. Right now I have a daughter and that's all I want to think about.
We heard Dakota's breathing pick up and we all rushed into the living room. We sat down on the other couches and waited for her to wake fully. She sat up and stretched. She rubbed her eyes then turned to us.
"Hey yall" she said.
"Hey Dakota. Would you like some food? I said.
"Alright" she said jumping off the couch.
When we entered we noticed her going through the fridge. She pulled out butter, eggs, mayonnaise and bacon. Then she went to the pantry and got some bread. She searched through some cabinets and a frying pan. Then she went through the cupboards and got a plate, she also got a knife from the drawers.
"What are you doing" I asked her.
"I'm making me favorite food to eat. Bacon and egg sandwich. The bread lightly toasted with mayonnaise on it. Yum!" she said.
"So how do you make it just watch" she said.
So that's what I did, we all watched. We don't know how to make food. Since this is her favorite food she'll probably want it a lot, so we need to learn how to make it. She put the bread in the toaster and set it on 1. It popped out in about thirty seconds. Then she put mayonnaise on both pieces of bread. She put the mayonnaise in the fridge and then washed the mayonnaise off the knife. After that put the pan on the stove, then she took the knife and cut off some butter. She put that in the pan the turned it on high. She let the pan get hot then spread the butter around it. After that she cracked two eggs in the pan. She cooked them on one side then she flipped them, without a spatula. She let it cook on the other side then flipped it again. She did this until the yoke was cooked. Then she put them on the bread. She fried up some bacon and put that on the sandwich too. She got a glass and filled it up with apple juice. Then she sat down at the island. She took a bit of her sandwich and moaned.
"Is that any good? Emmett said.
"Of course it is! I wouldn't eat it if it wasn't duh Dad." she said in a exasperated voice. She quickly finished her sandwich then put her plate in the sink.
"Alright lets head to the living room" I said. We all sat down and the discussion began.
"Ok. I want to get this out of the way first. I'm not going to skirt around this we are vampires. Now don't jump to conclusions. We do drink blood, but it is animal blood. We try to preserve human life. Us being vampires is a big secret no one can know. If you can't accept that then we can drive you back to the home, and we'll never bother you again. If you can accept it than we will go over everything else with you. So what do you say do you want to stay or go?" I said with a hopeful tone.
"I'll stay. You guys are nice, and if you were going to drain me you would've already. You also wouldn't have gone out of your way to adopt me if you didn't care about humans. So my answer is I'll stay" she replied.
Everyone was overjoyed. We all jumped up and had a big family hug.
After that was settled we told her everything else. We told her about all the rules of vamp world, then we told her about us moving tomorrow, and we asked how she would feel about us giving her our last name. She agreed to everything and we were quite happy. The last thing we talked about were rules.
"There will not be to many rules. If you ever want to do something just ask. If something comes up and we feel the need to make a rule then we will discuss that then. You will be allowed to date. We will discuss those rules more in depth when the time comes. Any other rules will be made if the need comes up got it." I said. She agreed and that was over.
Then Emmett asked her the questions we all wanted to know "So tell us about yourself"
"Well let's see I'm Dakota Arielle Richardson. I'm fourteen years old. My birthday is June 26. I lived in Huston all my life. My mom and dad both worked in the military. So I lived on base since I was born. My dad was a Navy Seal but then he decided to be a sniper. My mom was a mechanic. They both died over there. Their camp was invaded and they both died. That happened about two years ago. Usually if one of them had to go overseas then one of them would try to stay behind, but if they couldn't I would stay on base with another family. Whenever they where home they would teach me different things. My mom taught me all she knew about mechanics. I usually went with her when she fixed up different things on the base. I don't remember a time when I haven't been around engines. I can take apart a car and put it back together probably better than the people who made it. I can also fix almost anything with an engine. I'm not as good as my mom but I'm pretty good for my age. My dad was hardcore he wasn't mean he was just strict sometimes. He always trained so if I wanted to spend time with him I had to train to. So whenever he ran in the mornings I went with him. At first I could only go for a little while, but after a while I was able to keep up with him. I can run about ten miles straight now. He also taught me how to fight, survive in the woods, and shoot guns. I can take care of myself quite well. Other than spending time with my parents I love to draw and paint. I also like to read, listen and play music. I can play a ton of music. I also write my own songs. One of my all time favorite things to do is shop. My mom got me into that. She was a shopaholic. I also play sports. I dance, play volleyball, cheerlead, ice skate, and do gymnastics. The only thing that I ever really have games in is volleyball. The other things I do is just for fun. I may enter a competition now and again for one of them, but I usually just practice. I'm also a computer whiz. I love technology. I'm a huge geek. I'm a great cook. Even though I'm only fourteen. I can cook a five star meal that puts restaurants to shame. Oh yeah I can read, write, speak, and understand English, Spanish, French, Italian, Portuguese, Chinese, and Japanese. I can also sign. I had a deaf friend so I learned. I also love to watch football and basketball. I want to be a surgeon when I grow up. I also love to design and decorate things. I think that's about it. Wait I guess since you guys are vamps you might wana know this. I've already started my period so about a week out of every month I'll well you know." she said.
She really is amazing. She's so well rounded. All of those languages and she's only eight. She also loves something that each of us does. Sports for Emmett, Shopping for Alice, Books for Bella and Jasper, Music for Edward, Designing and Decorating for Esme, being a Doctor for Carlisle, and Cars for Me. I'll be able to chat with her about make up, boys, and other girly stuff. She's also started her period, that should be fun. We are going to have to get stuff for that, I'll have to recruit Bella though. She'll have the most information on stuff like that. Everyone seemed in awe of this girl. I knew that like me they were shocked at all this teenage girl could do.
"That's amazing Dakota. Thank you for sharing so much about your life with us. We'll try to get you into some of the sports you were in too. Also I'm pretty good at fixing things so maybe I could teach you something's you don't know. I'm pretty sure that the whole family knows all the languages you said, so we can speak them sometimes around the house so you won't forget. Also everyone in the family loves at least two of the things you do so they could do them with you. How does all of this sound?" I said.
"It sounds great. I'm so glad I thought I wasn't going to be able to do all of the things I love to do, because not a lot of people can do them. Especially the language thing, so thank you." she said. We all had a group hug then she sat back down.
We spent the rest of the night chatting about our lives. We told us some stories about us, and in return she told us some about her. She was a really remarkable girl.
*Time skip* *They have just moved in*
The move didn't long. We are now in Tampa. The house is hidden, but actually only a couple minutes away from the beach. It is big, Esme really outdid herself this time. Dakota is going to love it.
The house is already ready to live in. Just have to pack a few personal belongings.
Kota was exhausted she stayed up for most of the trip. We had decided to drive there, and give Kota the road trip experience. We actually went out of the way to Disney Land.. She had fun at Disney Land, that is a trip I won't be forgetting anytime soon.
We were all relaxing on the couch, when Alice jumped up and decided it was time to give Kota the grand tour.
We all got up and started the tour. We showed her the kitchen, dining room, half bath, music room, and game room. Then we took her to the second floor. This floor had mine and Emmett's room our room. We told her that all the rooms had a full bath inside plus a huge walk in closet.
Then we showed her the laundry room, weight room, and a half bath. There was another room, but we told her that we would show that to her later.
We took her to the third floor which had Jasper, Alice, Edward, and Bella's rooms, one for each couple. It also had Jasper's study, a full library, and a design room. The top floor was Esme and Carlisle's room, and Carlisle's office/mini hospital. Then we took her down to the basement. Since we knew we were having a child brought here we decided to get some things for any of the friends that he/she may had made. We got a pool. We also put a island style eating place down there with barstools. It had a stocked fridge and cabinets full of junk food. It also had a microwave and a toaster oven. Then there was a little movie theater with about ten movie theater style seats. It had a touch screen pad that controlled what the screen showed. Then there was also a little entertainment area. It had a dance floor, a DJ and huge couches surrounding it. Yeah Esme went all out fixing this up. Dakota was silent. Esme thought that maybe she didn't like it.
"If you don't like it we can always change it sweetie." she said.
"Don't like it, change it! Are you crazy? This is the best thing ever. I love it. It's awesome I can't wait to make new friends and have them over." she said.
Then she ran and gave Esme a hug. "Thank You grandma" She said.
Esme started chocking up. "Your very welcome granddaughter" she said with unshed tears in her eyes.
She let go of her then walked over to Emmett and me. "Thanks Mom and Dad. This is the best thing I could ever wish for. Thanks for adopting me." she said.
"Awe, your welcome squirt" Emmett said then picked her up in a big bear hug, and pulled me into the hug also. We stayed like that for a little bit then he put us down.
"Thanks so much for accepting me into your family." she said to everyone.
"It's no problem Dakota" Carlisle said.
"Ok so since you've already seen this. It's time to show you your room." Alice said jumping up and down. We took her back to the second floor. We took her to the room that we didn't show her.
"Ok Dakota this is your room" Emmett said.
When we opened it she gasped. Her room was humungous. It had a huge king size bed. With a purple and blue peace sign bed set. She had a night stand beside her bed. It had a lamp and some picture frames.
She had a TV mounted on the wall that moved all across the room. She also had a desk with a rolling chair. Then she had a nice size entertainment area. There was a purple and blue plush rug, with purple and blue moon chairs. She had a three huge bookshelves. She could put books, CD's, and movies on them. She also had a window seat. There was still some space in her room to put whatever she wanted. There were also some shelves on the wall for whatever she wanted to put on them.
After her room we showed her the closet. It was bigger than the room, thanks to Alice. It was like a mini mall. There was a ton of racks, and shelves. There was a huge vanity, and a full length mirror. Also there was several jewelry boxes.
"Once we put everything in here we'll see how much we have to shop for" Alice said.
"That sounds awesome! I love shopping!" Dakota said.
"Me too!" Alice said her enthusiasm rising.
"Yay!" Dakota squealed out.
Both of them started jumping up and down like they were on a sugar high. I could tell that Jasper was struggling with the high emotions.
"Ok that's enough, you still have to see the bathroom." I said. They both calmed down and we all went to the bathroom. She had a huge garden tub, a huge class walk-in shower. The temperature was controlled by a thermostat on the wall. There was a linen closet that had purple and blue towels. She had a double sink too.
"We didn't know what type of soap and stuff you used so we need to shop for that too." I said. "So do you like it?" I asked in a hopefully tone.
"I love all of it! Thanks guys. So… when do we get to go shopping? We need to go to the mall quickly, and Wal-Mart." She said excitedly.
"Alright then how about we unpack your stuff, then make a list of the things that you need, and some of the stuff you want. Ok" I said.
"Alright, Let's get to unpacking" She screamed.
She went over to her stereo system and plugged in her ipod. We all worked while listening to her music. They guys started with all of her trophies, awards, and medals. She decided that she wanted to put them on the shelves around her room.
While they did that the girls put her books on one shelf. She put them together by Author. She put her CD's in order by genre then name. Lastly she put her music in order by genre then artist. The guys finished before us so they started handing us the stuff and we put them up.
After we finished that the guys left and the girls started working on her clothes. We pulled all of her suitcases full of clothes into the closet. In her closet there was a panel that could access her stereo system, so she went over to that and changed the song to Untouched by The Veronicas. We started jamming out to that. Apparently she had selected all of their albums, because that's all that played while we were putting up the clothes.
Alice decided that we would sort everything by clothing type, then by color, and finally by favorite. We finished and looked at our work. She had quite the collection of clothes, but her closer wasn't full. She had quite a bit of jewelry. They were mostly for her piercing though, and she had the bracelet Josh gave her, but other than those things nothing.
"Ok so now that everything is unpacked we need to make a list." Alice said.
She ran out the room(at human speed), and got some paper and a pencil. We wrote down everything she would need. She needed way more clothes to fill her closet, she also needed jewelry, and shoes. She also needed school supply stuff. Then she needed stuff to draw and paint with. We decided to get her some picture frames, and a bulletin board to pin stuff on. Then she made a list of all the movies and CD's she had. It wasn't much about 30 in total. From her room we went to her bathroom she needed soap, shampoo, conditioner, lotion, and some hair products. Then we went downstairs. All the boys were playing Call of Duty. We passed them and headed to the kitchen. Dakota went through the cabinets and made a list of things she thought we needed, and some things she wanted.
"All right all of my lists are done. So first we need to hit up the mall. Then we head to Wal-Mart, then the a CD shop, and lastly an electronic shop. So lets go people!" Dakota said. All of the family got in their respective cars. Jasper and Alice in the Porche, Carlisle and Esme in the Mercedes, Edward and Bella in the Volvo, and Emmett, Dakota and me in the jeep. Finally we all pull out of the drive way.
AN: ok that's the first chapter. Do you guys like it. I know I changed it quite a bit. Tell me if you like this better. To those of you who never read the original just tell me what you think about this. Well hope you guys liked it, and I'm working on editing the other chapter now
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