Hello everyone this is my first fanfiction I've ever made so... tell me where you think I could do better.
This is a Harry Potter/Lord of the Rings x-over.
Disclaimer: I don't own Harry Potter or Lord of the Rings.
Prologue: The Attack
BOOM!
The sound thundered all the way through Hogsmeade. Multiple spells went flying through the street. There were more and more Death Eaters apparating in by the second. Harry, who was on a date with Ginny, were running to the Three Broomsticks to take cover as loads colored lights rained down upon the village.
When they entered the Three Broomsticks they were greeted by Ron, Hermione, and Neville.
"We got to get to the Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes, there were loads of people there. We have to save them!" said a panicking Harry. He hadn't seen this many Death Eaters ever.
"All right, but then we'll use the port-key Professor Dumbledore gave you to get back to the school." Hermione stated.
Then Ron piped up "Don't you think it's a bit strange that Dumbledore only gave you a port-key, mate."
Before Harry could contemplate this he saw a small group of Death Eaters heading toward the Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes. Harry immediately bolted after them with all his friends following. Ron started firing spells at the group. The group of seven turned around to see Harry Potter and his friends firing spells at them. The one at the front, who happen to be farthest pressed his forefinger to his dark mark. Damn Harry instantly thought as more Death Eaters made their way toward them. Neville blasted the mask off the last Death Eater remaining and underneath was the face of Stan Shunpike. So he is a Death Eater Harry thought before he began to run toward the Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes again.
When Harry and his little group arrived at the Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes there was at least thirty people , including Fred and George, inside. "OUT, OUT, OUT!" Harry yelled at everyone inside "We'll provide cover fire." As everyone began to file out of the store and run to Hogwarts the twins ran up to Harry.
"Harry, mate..." Fred started.
"...if you're staying to provide cover for us..." George continued.
"...we're staying to help."
"And don't bother arguing..."
"..we're of age." Fred finished.
"OK. Lets get out there and help the others" Harry said.
When they got outside they saw pure chaos, while most of the students had made it back to Hogwarts, Ron, Hermione, Ginny, and Neville were having a hard time holding back the Death Eaters that were building up. Suddenly there was a high-pitched laugh everywhere.
"Get in the shop!" Fred yelled. There was an unusual serious look on the twins faces. First Ginny and Neville went inside, then Ron and Hermione, and the Twins and Harry.
Once George had looked the door Harry fumbled around in his pockets for the port-key the Dumbledore gave him. Once he found it he pulled it out and told everyone to grab on. Then a loud BOOM was heard and the the door went soaring over their heads. There with a high, cold laugh was Lord Voldemort.
Harry screamed the port-key's activation word "MARAUDERS." a few seconds after Voldemort's spell "key ad portum hunc medio terrae"
The last Harry felt before being pulled away by the port-key was a sense of dread knowing there was something wrong with the port-key and then all went black.
This is just the prologue but I'll try to make other chapters longer so please don't hate me for this short chapter. I hope the a new chapter will be uploaded, at most, by next week
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