Hello. This is my first fic for Jyuken Sentai Gekiranger. It has a bit of romance between. Don't like, don't comment. Super Sentai is not own by me, though I wish I did. This is also my first fic with regular OC (s). If someone could give me a guide on Jannish, it would be helpful.
Kyuikyui: Something precious
Italics are thoughts ( ) are my thoughts. (?) Means confusion in translation of Japanese or I have no idea how to describe a certain thing.
Jyuken Sentai Gekiranger: Geki Jyu Revival
The moon was shining brightly in Hong Kong. On top of a tower, a black spiky haired man wearing a red robe look to the sky. He felt an overwhelming power. "Gengi." He said. He smiled. "So it begins." The man jumped and disappeared.
Chapter 1
It has been a few months since the defeat of Long. Gou and Bae came back from their journey, temporarily. Ran, Retsu, and Ken have decided to go to Hong Kong. Gou and Bae decide to follow, not like they were planning to get back on track off the bat. The reason, to see if they can visit Jan. Upon arrival, Ran decided to go off alone for a while. The pony-tail wearing girl wore a white and yellow t-shirt and blue jeans. The five decided to go on a trip hoping to find Jan, but Ran isn't sure if they could. It's not like Hong Kong is a small city, and who knows if Jan is wearing his gekichanger or not. Ran really missed Jan, though she didn't show it.
Ran walked around the city. "Wakiwaki Len!" Ran heard the shout from around the corner. Ran recognized the voice. She started running towards the source of the voice. When she got there, she saw a man with brown hair and a red Chinese shirt and black pants. On his hands were a pair of gekichangers and three silver bracelets. "You're getting better everyday." Ran saw a kid, who resembled Rio, with Jan.
"Jan!" Ran shouted. Jan stopped what he was doing and turned around.
"Sugoi, Ran!" Jan shouted. Jan ran towards Ran waving his arm. He hugged Ran and let go. "Sugoi, what are you doing here?"
"We came to visit you." Ran answered.
"We?" Jan wondered.
"Retsu, Gou, Ken, and Bae are here as well." Ran answered. "They're here in Hong Kong, but not with me right now."
"Wakiwaki!" Jan shouted with his arms thrown in the air. The little kid walked towards Jan.
"Master Jan," the kid asked, "who is that?"
Ran crouched toward the kid with a smile, "Who is this little kid?"
Jan introduced the two, "Len, this is Ran, Ran this is Len." Ran shook hands with Len.
Len bowed. "It's nice to meet you." Ran noticed that Len had trouble with some words.
"Are you learning Japanese?" Ran asked. Len nodded. "From who?" Len pointed at Jan.
Jan smiled. "I'm teaching him Japanese, while he teaches me, what's the word, Cantonese." Ran wondered what Jan said as he just said the name of the Language in what seemed like Chinese.
Len noticed Ran's confusion. "That's the language that is spoken here." Ran's confusion was cleared. Len started wondering who Ran was. "Master Jan, is she your, uh," Len tried thinking of the word he was trying to use. "Girlfriend?" Ran blushed.
Jan scratched his head. "What's that?" Len was surprised that his master didn't know what a girlfriend was.
"Well a person that you know, uh, lo . . ." Len was inturrupted.
"No, I'm just a friend." Ran said.
Len knew who Ran was in an instant. "Oh, you're Gekiyellow, Jan mentioned you. There was also a Gekiblue, Gekiviolet, and a Gekichopper." Jan must've told a lot of stories.
On Retsu's end, the four of them decided to stop and eat. They sat on a table outside the restaurant. Ken needed some real food as the airplane food was bad. "What is taking Ran-chan so long?" Ken asked.
"Who knows?" Gou answered. "We all came here to visit Jan. Our team captain probably went out shopping."
Oh no, thought Retsu. " I hope not." He said remembering what happened the last time they were in Hong Kong.
Gou looked at his little brother's pale face. He decided to tease him. "What, you don't like shopping with Cherry." What the! Retsu jumped in surprise. How did he? "I'm your big brother, of course I know."
"We're just friends!" Retsu shouted.
"Guys, how are we going to order?" Ken asked, oblivious to the conversations of the two brothers. Bae pointed out that they were in Hong Kong and very few people actually spoke Japanese. That was quite a dilemma.
Every movement that Jan made, Len tried to emulate. Ran kept staring at Len's uncanny likeness to Rio. Ran wondered if it was the likeness to Rio that Jan decided to teach Len. Jan flipped and Len tried to follow. Len ended up falling on his rear. Jan comforted Len. Ran admired Jan's actions. Jan decided to leave Len alone for Len to recover.
"You're a pretty good teacher." Ran told Jan as he walked over.
"Thank you (think Jan's English) Ran." Jan said. "I'm pretty sure you're a great master yourself."
Ran nodded. "The kids are great, they really learn quick." Ran sat down on a bench.
Jan stared at Ran. Ran noticed and blushed. "Your hair grew long." Jan pointed out. Ran then mentally slapped herself for blushing over such a small thing.
Ran smiled, "I haven't cut it in a while, maybe I should."
Jan shook his head. "I like it this way." Now Ran became as red as Jan's shirt. "Are you burning up?" Ran shook her head. Jan took the seat next to Ran. Jan look up in the sky. Ran did the same.
"I really missed you?" Ran said, with a solemn tone.
"I missed you too!" Jan said cheerfully. "I mean the triangle is not there without the three of us." Ran knew Jan was mentioning Retsu as well. In an instant, a red blur came in front of the two. Jan had a worried look on his face. Jan checked his bag, he took out a gold ball. The ball that Long was sealed in. He still had it, then why does he feel, this power? Len then came running screaming. He held onto Jan.
"Master Jan, a monster!" A red monkey like monster came running.
"ZOWAZOWA!" Jan shouted. Ran got off the bench.
On Retsu's end, they were still trying to figure out how to order. Ken took out a Chinese-Japanese dictionary. It didn't work as a waitress slapped Ken, when he said 'I want to go drinking with you.' "What did I say?" Ken asked. Retsu, Gou and Bae shrugged.
"That's some language skill you got." Gou said sarcastically. He still continued to tease Retsu.
"Shut up, Cherry is just modeling for me!" Retsu shouted, as he tried painting in his free time, and got up from his seat. A car exploded behind him.
Ken whistled. "I didn't know you can make cars explode." Retsu turned around. The four of them then felt a menacing power. There standing was a gold gryphon motif monster stepping on civilians.
"Who are you?" Retsu shouted.
"Power as strong as a God. Power with no equal. I am the God of Destruction." A gold creature with a gryphon motif said in a voice that almost equaled Rio.
"It can't be." Retsu said staring with fear.
"No way." Ken said.
"Man (Someone please tell me how to spell it in Japanese!)!" Gou said while knocking his forehead with his fist. Bae hid behind Gou.
"You can call me Genjyuoh, seeing as how that's how you recognize me." Genjyuoh said.
"Who exactly are you?" Retsu shouted. "We know you aren't Rio."
"That weakling," Genjyuoh said laughing and covering his black face with his hand, "there is no way he could ever reach this power. Though I do owe him and the girl for bringing me to life, and that red boy." He was referencing to the fact that both Rio and Mele spilt their Gengi and Jan who killed Suugu. "Now I am alive and I will destroy this world."
"There is no way we would let you do that!" Gou shouted. Genjyuoh shot a dark orb from his hand. Retsu, Ken, and Gou jumped from their location. Bae flew to somewhere safe.
On Jan's end, Jan and Ran were doing their best against the monkey-ken user, whose name is Sun Wu. Sun Wu used fire based attacks. Jan protected Len throughout the battle. Eventually the battle started looking hopeless. Until Jan and Ran prepared their Gekichangers. "Len, let us show you, the power of a Gekiranger." Jan and Ran punched their right fist onto their left palm. Len ran behind a tree."Tagire, Kemono No Chikara, Beast On!"
On Retsu's end, Retsu did the same. Gou flipped his Gongchanger, Ken summoned his Saiblade. "Tagire, Kemono No Chikara! Hibiki, Kemono No Sakebi! Togisumase, Kemono No Yaiba! Beast On!"
The respective suits formed on each Gekiranger. "This body swells with infinite energy. Unbreakable body, Gekired!"
"With daily purification polishing the heart. Honest heart, Gekiyellow!"
"Techniques color this grand flower. Fantastic technique, Gekiblue!"
"Excitement, my style. To the limit of my will. Iron will, Gekiviolet!"
"Polishing the talent, I cut open my future! Amazing ability, Gekichopper!"
"The blazing Geki is proof of justice!" Jan and Retsu said "Jyuken Sentai!" This was said by everyone. "Gekiranger!" The force of their power gave out an explosion behind. Despite the fact that the five weren't together, they executed the role call perfectly.
Sun Wu brought out a red rod. "This is getting annoying." He said in a high pitched voice. "Gengi, Monkey Monkey dance!" Sun Wu started spinning around, ablaze, knocking Jan and Ran to the floor.
"Ran," Jan spoke, "His not using Genjyuken, why is he using Gengi?"
"I don't know." Ran answered. Sun Wu stopped spinning. Sun Wu laughed an annoying high pitched laughter.
"Zowazowa is real annoying." Jan summoned his Gekisaber. Ran summoned her Gekihammer. Jan hacked and slashed at Sun Wu. Ran tried to hit Sun Wu with her swinging mace. They both took opposite sides of each other. Sun Wu was able to stop Jan's saber on his tracks. Sun Wu jumped out of the way. Jan took the hit of the Gekihammer.
"Jan!" Ran rushed to Jan's side as she just hit him. Sun Wu appeared and kicked Ran. Len watched in horror as his master and his teammate were losing.
"Mai Mai Da!" Retsu's tonfa got surrounded by lightning. Retsu jumped in the air and spun around. He tried striking Genjyuoh, but Retsu was stopped when Genjyuoh grabbed both tonfas. Genjyuoh threw Retsu. Gou got behind and attacked.
"Ban Ban Chu!" Gou attempted a overhead elbow smash to Genjyuoh. The hit connected. "Yata." Genjyuoh then turned his head around. "No way." Genjyuoh punched Gou with a rapid barrage of fists.
"No way, centipede-ken." Retsu said as he remembered what the attack was.
Ken prepared for an attack. "Nen Nen Dan!" Ken shot out multiple bullets from his Saiblade finger shooters. The attack connected . . .to Genjyuoh's hand. Genjyuoh disappeared and reappeared in front of Ken. Genjyuoh returned the bullets at point blank range. Ken received heavy damage plus Genjyuoh stood on the ground with his hands and started spinning, kicking Ken in the process.
"That's scorpion-ken!" Retsu shouted recognizing another fist of one of their past enemies.
Genjyuoh then crossed his arms. "It can't be!" Gou said. "That's Dan-san's move." Genjyuoh then smashed all three of them to the floor.
"There is no way I'm going to lose in front of my pupil," Jan shouted, "just like Same can't lose in front of me!"
"Desperate times call for desperate measures." Ran said. "Jan." Jan knew what Ran was talking about. The Geki Claw materialized on their hands. "Super Beast On!"
Retsu summoned his own blue Geki Claw. "Super Beast On!" White formed around the middle of the three suits. Silver plates formed around the stripes and spots of the suits. The helmet received some white highlights (?). Retsu jumped with his Geki Claw in hand "Super Jaguar Geki!" He flew past Genjyuoh, striking at point blank range. Genjyuoh felt nothing.
"Gengi, Raigo Dan!" Genjyuoh threw an explosive orb at Retsu.
"That looks like lion-ken." Gou said recognizing the move to be similar to Rio's.
"Why do you have all these fists?" Ken shouted.
"That weakling's Gengi fills me, and I have the Gengi of the Chimera-ken user." Genjyuoh explained. "I have the fists of every Rinjyuken user!"
"We will still win. Geki bazooka!" A red, yellow, and blue bazooka materialized in front of Retsu. Retsu took the back, Ken and Gou held the front. They all released their Geki and Shigeki into the bazooka. "Special Geki Geki Hou!" The three of them said. An orange orb shot out of the cat mouth of the Geki Bazooka. Genjyuoh took the hit. "Yata."
When the dust cleared, Genjyuoh still stood. "Is that the best you can do?"
"That can't be!" Gou said after seeing Genjyuoh unscathed.
In an instant a stream of fire struck the three Gekirangers. The three looked up. A man with a red robe that resembled Long's stood there with his hand out. He was the one who shot that stream of flames. He had black spiky hair and a serious face. Genjyuoh looked at the man, and the man stared back.
How is the story so far? The romantic pair is pretty much obvious. Are the characters okay or too OOC? Is the name Len okay for Jan's Pupil?