This is my first fic that I have ever written, flames are allowed as I would like to improve my writing. This is a YYH fic, but I don't know if I'm going to pair upKeili with anybody though as I don't exactly care. When you review please inform me of your decision! The name of the main character has been changed, since I discovered what the other name meant. Also I have changed my pen name to Lifes Red Roses

Keili
Race: Human
Age: 13(when most of this fic takes place, but she'll turn older as the fic moves along)
Hair: mousy brown (light brown) that was cut short so that it would be easier to take care of and wouldn't be in here face.
Eyes: dull dark brown from years of crying in the dark
Height: 5' 3"
Attitude: Tsusikina will do anything asked of her within certain guide lines. Tsusi is timid and kind, harsh words are never heard from her mouth. Her grades in middle school(i'm basing it after the American way of school years) are okay, not straight A's but she's passing with a C-B average.

Kita- practically same asKeili as they're twins except Kita is considered 'pretty' and her hair is down her back. Kina is their mother's favorite, as she bribes the teachers into giving her A's. Kina is also more bold in her actions and likes to be a loud mouth, blabbering all the time, certain words showing up in her vocabulary at school, but always little girl nice in front of her mom.

Kishtna
Age: 9, but will grow older as the fic goes on.
Hair: Black, like the father.
Eyes: Light brown/green color
Height: 4' 11"
Attitude: Kinda like Yusuke in that he's always loud. Kishtna did not know their father very well, but is told by his mom's friends who babysit him from time to time when Kina is out andKeili is at work(yes, her mom is making her work)that he looks like a younger version of their dad. Kishtna loves to get Tsusi in trouble and will look for anything to do so.

Living where your not wanted (Keili's story)

Her life was always in tumoil, keeping the family house clean, keeping up in school, and making sure she made it to work on time. She never had a moment to herself and it seemed like nobody cared.

Well she would prove to them that she had a value, that they couldn't replace her. But it wasa permanent solution to a temporary problem.

It all started when her father died and little Keili(age 10)had to start taking care of the house andher siblings while her mom worked day and night to bring food to the table. Keii woke up around 5 in the morning, to start prepareing for the day. She made breakfast and lunch for Kita, her twin, and Kishtna, her younger brother (age 9). After preparing the food, she woke her siblings making sure that they were dressed and ready to go by 6:30 am when the bus came to retrieve them. No one said thank you. Her life was filled with constant cleaning and homework. This continued for another three years, a couple of days after her twin, Kita, and herself turned 13. Of course Kita got everything she wanted, down to an expensive diamond/ruby necklace. What didKeili get? A couple of dollars.

Oh, she would show them how much she did for her unappreciative family. She had it all planned out. Keili had her backpack ready, full of clothes and the essentials she was sure she would need. She knew exactly where'd she would go and watch her family to see if they even noticed that she was gone. Everything was planned out down to the last detail.

Keiligot up at the usual time on Monday the 21st of Febuary,she loaded her backpack onto her back. She wore black sweat pants (which was like the only kind of pants she had since they were cheap) and a black sweater (which was the only kind of jackets she had since they were cheap, also) under the sweater,Keili wore a cheap white shirt. Keiliwalked down the the hall way towards the door which led to her freedom. Only feet away, was her freedom when she remembered the alarm system. Was it on or not?Keili looked at the small technological box on the wall. A bright green light showed by the words "alarm system off." Thank Kami, her mother was stupid. Stepping out the door,Keili made her way to the abandoned house across the street, looking both ways even though it was still 5:45 in the morning. Seeing the way clear, she made a run across the street and around the back side of the house. That's when shesaw the light on inside the house, the shadows of people moving around on the curtains. That's when pain racked her body as bullets filled her body with lead, silencers dimming the noise to a soft gushing of wind. That's when darkness took over, andKeili knew no more.

So what do you think? I'm not that great, as you might have noticed, but I'm trying. Please review,flames are allowed as I want to know what needs to be fixed with this fic! Thanks

Lifes Red Roses