I'm sure I'm not the only one freaking out about the latest episode of 'Our Girl' am I? Well I thought I would make an alternative ending to that and post it before Sunday ahhh so nervous! Anyways just a quick warning of spoilers (wow that green highlight is terrible!) and this is also a Dawes and James romance fanfic! Gotta love the pair! Anyway I hope you enjoy! Rated M for language and possible mature content.
I don't own anything but some of the ideas, characters etc are BBC.
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No matter how many times Captain James asked Smurf to put his weapon down he wouldn't listen. Molly was distracted, her mind was was racing and she looked between the two men fighting over her and the truck where she had to identify Badrai. She felt so stupid, the reason for all this was her fault, from Smurf freaking out to her section becoming a target to the Taliban, the mainly her. Finally turning to check inside the truck she saw girls clinging onto eachother, Smurf's unneeded shots frightening them. Looking into each over their eyes individually she spotted someone that didn't exactly fit into the 'women image'. Studying them more her blood turned ice cold. It was Badrai.
Behind her James was still trying to calm down Smurf though that was soon stopped by Molly backing up raising her weapon and practically yelping "It's Badrai! He's in there!" They all suddenly snapped to attention their weapons pointing at the now escaping target. Badrai hid behind some concrete and began franticly shooting in hopes he would hit a target. His aim was accidentally at James and he fired. However no-one was expecting Molly to jump in front of James taking the bullet for him. To Badrai this was a very pleasant surprise but to the Two section this was was shocking.
Molly's body crashed to the floor her body armour not protecting her at such close range. The bullet had gone into her chest though maybe lady luck was smiling on her as it hadn't gone anywhere near her heart. Bang. Another bullet was shot into her stomach though this time Badrai at deliberately shot her. That was the last shot he got though as Dangleberries shot him cleanly in the head, his body hitting the floor.
During this Smurf was in shock falling to his knees where he was stood, however Captain James rushed to Molly's side. "DAWES!" He yelled dropping down to his knees putting pressure on her stomach after using her hands to try and contain the bleeding on her chest. "Come on Molly stay with me..." He breathed looking down into her eyes that had started to close. "You need to stay with me..." Molly looked up at him feeling dizzy and faint from the blood loss. "Bandages... In my pack... use them" she muttered and tried to chuckle as he franticly began getting them out and dressing her wounds as best as he could not being a medic himself. " NEED HER MEDEVACED NOW!" He practically growled. No-one had ever heard him like this before but knew better then to let it bother them. James then looked down at Molly who looked as if she was going to pass out. "Come on Dawesy what have I told you huh? You need to stay with me." He tried to joke but deep inside his heart was breaking, his hands and uniform covered in the women he was in love with's blood. Dawes look into his eyes her hand weakly taking his. "You're going to be the last thing I see." She weakly smiled "I lov-" She was stopped short by James "Don't you dare Molly. Don't you dare think like that!" That was when she saw something she never thought she would see. Tears slowly ran down his cheeks. "You will make it out of here. You will recover. You will come round mine for Christmas" he chuckled half heartedly. "When you pull through this I'm going... I'm going to speak to my commanding officer... ask if we can make us official... God I hope he says yes..." Molly smiled up at him weakly her eyes closing. "Let's hope." With that her eyes started closing and all she could hear was Captain Jame's voice, though it was fading telling her to stay awake.
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I hope you all liked it! Please like, review, follow etc :) I may be making more chapters today if I get the chance, though do not fear there are many more chapters to come!
Thanks for reading! :)
~Jadiekit