Well chaltab, this is to show I take constructive criticism seriously…
And also because I realize some of mymistakes after posting…I hate when that happens
…yeah English is not my language. Enjoy corrections.
Space...beautiful outer space.
With all its stars and planets…every time Starfire was there she filled like a fish in the sea. Even without a suit or … oxygen, she was able to float gracefully through all its corners…
But now that wasunimportant, the team was in great danger, they where being attacked by a giant blue monster capable of throwing powerful electric discharges with his horns.
No titan apart from herself was able to use any of their power freely here. The T-ship was nearly in pieces and Raven's power was the only thing keeping it from breaking apart.
"Shields are destroyed, this ship would not resist much" Cyborg said.
The monster was in front of them, prepared to attack "Grrrahhh"
"Ugly monster, you won't hurt my friends" she shouted moving herself to the space between the ship and the beast.
Starfire prepared two starbolts…join them…and shot a super concentrated beam.
"!Yes!" Robin exclaimed, now from inside a black bubble…the t-ship was destroyed, but the titans where safe…or so they thought.
A black hole was starting to form from the rests of the monster…Starfire turn…her eyes wide open in panic.
"Star come here…HURRY!" Robin yelled, but Starfire was unable to move…the hole was sucking her inside.
"Friends!" she yelled.
"That thing is going to kill her" cried Beast Boy
"No" Raven exclaimed, she quickly picked her chakra, pull it off her forehead…and throw it to Star "Catch it…this'll save you" she said.
….Star did…and a light blue inter dimensional portal open, between her and the hole,andsuck her in.
"What did you do?" Cyborg asked
"That is my portal…I think it's safer than a black hole" she answer
"It would not hurt her?" Robin asked
"No…it…" she was interrupted by her communicator, it was Star.
"Friend Raven, what is this place, where is it getting me to?"she asked fearfully
"Put the chakra in your forehead, it'll stick…and take you to Azarath, you'll search for help there…" she explained.
"What…?"
"Is the safest now…the portal will accept you automatically because of your pure heart and….jshhhh…look for my mother…hhjhhh"…static…
Star looked forward, she was being pulled to a strange magical portal…round and full of symbols…glowing pink…Starfire was amazed…
"Let me in…please" she begged…a great light flashed…Ravens chakra shined…and then... darkness.
It was noon…
She awake on a solid floor made of polished rock looked in front of her and saw it…over a colossal floating monolith, the approximate size of a respectable asteroid, laid a sprawling city dotted with many minaret-like structures that covered nearly the entire upper surface. At the center of it all was an imposing, broad-based tower.
She couldn't believe her eyes "X'hal" she exclaimed "This is Azarath?".