I'm being lazy, and I'm going to skip were everyone is already at the house and are getting to know each other. Keep in mind that these people have never met, and the mansion in located in L.A. I'm going to try to stick to their character. And yess.. There are OC's. More info at Author's Note at bottom. Okay, once with the story.
Disclaimer. I own nothing but these awesome ideas.
This chapter is rated: T for mild language
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So Wrong.. It's Right
Chapter 1
The 16 young adults sat around the pool, drinks in hand laughing at something one of them had said previously. They were currently locked outside of the mansion. So they were just chilling with each other around the pool.
"So let's get to know one another!" a girl with tan skin and black curly hair that stopped past her shoulders cheered. The other's agreed and she started.
"Okay, well I'm Hope and I'm from California and I'm 21. Umm I surf and play guitar. I love to party and I'm single!" Hope yelled tossing her drink in the air. Some of the people also put their drinks in the air. The girl to the left of Hope looked at everyone.
"I guess I'm next." She said with a grin. The girl had long scene hair with and had tan white skin.
"I'm Roxanna and I'm 22 from Cali too." She said looking at Hope with a smile. "Umm, I skateboard, smoke pot, and chew gum when I'm not smoking. I'm not afraid to fight a bitch or a dude. So don't fuck with me. Other than that I'm pretty cool." She said drinking her drink. The guy to the left of her went next, he had pale white skin with a scar under his left eye, and had short black hair.
"I'm Jason, I'm 23 and I from New York. I smoke pot, and drink a lot." He stated simply. A girl with tan skin with freckles in between her eyes and brown hair that stopped a little pass her shoulders scoffed.
"Does everyone here smoke pot?" She asked annoyed, everyone who smoked nodded and laughed, when they saw that half of them smoked.
"Well I'm Courtney, I'm 21 and I don't smoke. I'm in college, and I do a lot of things. I'm fun until somebody touches my stuff. So keep your hands off my things." She said snooty. A guy from across the pool rolled his eyes. He had black hair that had a green fawk hawk in the middle. He had piercings I his eyebrow, nose, and in both his ears.
"Well sorry to break it to you sweetheart, but someone here is probably going to touch your shit." He stated. Everyone looked at him and waited for him to talk about himself.
"I'm Duncan, I'm 22 I'm from Quebec, and I smoke pot. I been to juvie and jail. And I'm not afraid to go to back." He said staring everyone down to show them he meant what he said. The girl next to him tired to scoot away from him. She had long blonde hair that was in a ponytail with relaxed olive eyes.
"Well then. I'm Bridgette, I'm 21 and I'm from Montreal. I surf and I'm a vegetarian." She said with a smile.
"Really? So you don't eat any kinds of meat?" A guy with blond hair and baby blue eyes asked shocked. She shook her head no.
"Whoa, well I'm Geoff and I'm 22 and I'm from Ottawa. I love meat and I love to party. I smoke and drink, but usually only when I'm partying." He stated. A boy with dull tan skin and dark brown hair looked up from his book.
"I'm Noah, I'm 22 from Philly. All I do is read. " He said quickly before looking back down at his book. A Latino boy with long soft dark brown hair looked at him with pity.
"So sad." He said with a thick Spanish accent. "I'm Alejandro, I'm 23 and from Miami. I own clubs all around the U.S. and I'm thinking about putting some in Canada. You guys should check them out. " he bragged with a charming smile that caught all the girls attention. An Asian girl with dark almond eyes scoffed.
"Like anyone wants to go to your club. I'm Heather, I'm 22 and I'm a fashion model from New York." She said with her head held high. A girl with blond hair and blue eyes squealed.
"Really? Me too! I'm Lindsay and I'm 21 from Dallas. But I recently moved to Cali for a modeling contact." She said happily.
"That's awesome. You're a beautiful model." A guy with brown hair said. "I'm Tyler and I'm 22 from Baltimore. And I play sports." He added. Lindsay gushed at him, while he flashed her a smile.
"Well I'm Gwen and I'm 22 and I'm from Vancouver. I love art and horror movies." She stated. The guy next to her smiled. He had long black hair with beautiful green eyes.
"I'm Trent, I'm 22 and I'm from Seattle. I play guitar, and even have my own band back home." He said nonchalantly. The guy next to him had tan skin, with brown hair with dark brown highlights.
"I'm Evan, I'm 22 from Cali. I love ladies, and partying. I don't smoke as much, since most ladies don't like it. But I love to crack jokes and drink." He stated with a heartwarming smile. A girl with red wild curly hair got up abruptly.
"Well Since I'm the last one to introduce myself, I'm going to say it with style." She said before doing a canon ball into the water getting everyone wet. When she came back up she shot everyone a crazy smile.
"I'm Izzy, I'm 21 and I'm not from anywhere. I currently hiding from the FBI. I like to be naked, and do crazy things. I'm the life of the party." She said taking Noah's drinking and gulping half of it. Noah gave her a crazy look.
"Did you really just take my drink?" He questioned. She burped in his face, as she handed him his empty glass back. The she started to swim on her back.
"Yup, I just did." She replied. Evan and Roxanna laughed.
"I think I like her already!" Roxanna cheered.
"Hey! Someone's in the house!" Heather yelled looking at the mansion. She was right two people were standing in front of the door. Everyone got up and took their bags to the door. The two men inside opened the door, and let everyone in. Everyone checked out the beautiful décor in mansion. The two men were standing in front of everyone. One guy was a tall big black man with a scowl printed on his face. The other was a short white guy with black hair, and a gorgeous fake smile.
"Hey guys. I'm Chris the man who chose you all to be here. And that is Hatchet, my right hand man. We are here just to set one rule." He said looking at all 16 young adults.
"NO RULES!" He yelled. Everyone cheered. "This is your house for the next three months enjoy yourself. You all are old enough to make your own decision. So do it. If there is any problem just go in the phone room and call me. My number is speed dial 1. But before we go, there is a room by the red room, where you guys can confess whatever is on your mind. Also you guys have 4 cars outside for your own use. Also a limo service when you guys decide to go out as a group, they're speed dial 2. Well go find your rooms. We're out of here." Chris said before the 16 young people started to run around the house yelling and screaming.
"God, I should have done this years ago. But with young people and made it a show. Think about how many people would tune in to watch that, Hatchet!" Chris exclaimed, throwing his hands in the air.
"Yeah, yeah. You and your crazy show ideas." Hatchet mumbled as they walked out the mansion.
The young adults argued over the rooms they wanted. There were only 4 rooms with 4 beds in each room. Courtney and Bridgette were currently arguing with Duncan and Geoff.
"I refuse to share a room with a pot head criminal!" She shrieked. Geoff gasped.
"Hey! I smoke pot but I'm not a criminal!" Geoff defended himself. Bridgette sighed.
"Not you Geoff." She cleared up.
"Sorry to break it to you, Doll. But all the other rooms are taken. So suck it up." Duncan said as he threw his duffle bag on the bed and jumped on it. Courtney sighed defeated. Bridgette went over to her, and put a hand on her shoulder.
"Don't worry. It won't be that bad." She tried to cheer her up.
"Yeah Princess. Don't worry I won't touch your stuff." He said with a smirk. Geoff threw his stuff on the bed.
"Aye guys, who wants to go out and party?" He asked. Then hope and Izzy appeared in their door way.
"Party?" They said in unison.
"Yeah want to go?" he asked again. They smiled brightly, and then Hope started to yell.
"EVERYONE GET DRESS! WE'RE GOING TO PARTY TONIGHT!" She yelled informing everyone on what the plan for the night was, all the girls when to the girl bathroom. It had a giant make up tabled with space for each girl to do their make-up and hair. It also contained a shower room with 4 showers. 4 toilet rooms, and 4 sinks. It was nice in there. The color scheme in the girls bathroom was pink and blue. All the furniture was sterling silver. It was decorated with random stuff that you would find in a fashion agency.
The guys bathroom was similar, 4 shower, 4 toilet rooms, and 4 sinks. But instead of a giant make-up room they had a game room, with a huge TV with all types of game consoles connected to it. On one wall there were games. Any game you could think up was on that wall for every game console. It was a man's waiting room paradise. The color scheme in there was red and blue, and was decorated with game models, and posters of upcoming game releases.
The mansion was grand. Aside from the giant bathrooms and confessional there was a party room with a bar and stripper poles. All the furniture was red, and in the back was a room with one bed. There was an indoor pool with a hot tub inside. There was a phone room, where the only phone in the house was located. And a computer room with 4 desks with their own computer on it. There was a huge kitchen with 4 refrigerators, 2 stoves, and a long breakfast table. There was a formal dining room with a long table with 2o chairs. There was a living room with a huge fireplace, and lastly there was a theater. But that was just inside. Outside there was a giant pool, a Jacuzzi, an outdoor canapé bed with black see through curtails. There was also a basketball court, and a volleyball box filled with sand. Then there was an outdoor living area with couches and love seat facing the ocean. It's a nice place to be staying for 3 months.
"GUYS! The limo is here!" Izzy called out. Everyone came downstairs dress in short dresses or casual jeans and shirts. They all got in the limo and waited for it to go.
"Are they serious?" Gwen picked up a wine bottle inside of the limo.
"Here are the cups." Tyler said passing them out. Gwen started to fill everyone cup.
"So where are we going?" Heather asked looking around.
"Umm I think the driver said 'Dive'. But I'm not sure." Izzy answered her.
"Well wherever we go we are going to PARTY!" Geoff said lifting his cup up, everyone agreed and tossed their cups with his.
Author's Notee
Okay so chapter one of my new story. It's kind of a real world / bad girls club type of story. So yeah, how was it written? Constructive criticism is welcome. I tried to be detailed, but then I got tired. Just use your imagination. The mansion is nice, yeah. So other than that I plan on making this story long. I have lots of ideas just because I like reality shows. Also I added my own OC's because they will help start drama. If you don't like that, don't read the story. So until next time… REVIEW
Oh also! The room commendation are as listed
Duncan, Geoff, Courtney, and Bridgette.
Heather, Lindsay, Tyler, and Alejandro.
Hope, Izzy, Evan, and Noah.
Roxanna, Gwen, Jason, and Trent.
