Ok, guys! This is my first fanfiction! I am reviewing this terrible story, I own nothing but the writing in bold. The story is about a random cat called Starkit who happened to be part of a second-rate prophecy concerning tigers and spiky leaves.
Chpater oen prouloge
The writer somehow managed to misspell one…..
The cats gathered around a pool. They all looked into it eagerly.
Wow! A pool! THE WORLD ENDS
A dark shape appeared on the surface. A blue she cat looked up. Her eyes were bright.
A shadow appears and everybody throws a party, while a cat has some horrible eye malfunction
"There is a prophecy!" She said. "out of the darkness, stars will come and get rid of the evil tiger and holly."
THE HOLLY IS GOING TO GET US! AHHHHH!
"Its about StarKit!"
How on earth did you know?!
A white tom said. "Shes going to save the forest," He looked at a gold tom by BlueStar. "she has powers nobody dreamed of." Said the gold tom. "Should we tell JayFeather?" He asked. "Yes." Said BlueStar. "he needs to know."
Nah, we shouldn't tell the only cat responsible for the prophecies and omens of his clan
She walked away from the pool to tell JayFeather about the prophcy.
HI! Jayfeather! I saw a shadow in a pool, and now we have problems!
did u like it? plz tell me in urm review!
Yes if you ignore the randomness, lack of sense, and spelling mistakes