Ok, so my story is kind of weird… like everyone is in love with someone different from in the book. *spoiler for my book: like Bella and Em, Rose and Jazz, and Alice and Edward (Eddie).* (A/N: Bella, Alice and Rosalie are sisters, with Charlie and Renee (who are still divorced), and Em, Jazz and Eddie are bothers with Carlisle and Esme for parents.) Bella has a fatal lung disease called Tuberculosis (TB). The symptoms in my fan fiction are not true b/c I m too lazy to look them up.

BPOV:

I've been gone for months, living with Renee because of my TB. I'd lost weight. A lot. I was 125p, and I went down to 100p. I wished that the pills would work for once. They did. Now I am going to move back in with Charlie, Alice and was asking 'Are you sure you have everything? Puffer? Clothes? P-" "yes mom I have everything." I replied. "I'm sorry sweetie. I just worry about you." "S'alrght mom" "what is s'alrght?" "S'alrght means 'it's alright', mom." it took us 2½ hours to get from Renee's house in Seattle (a/n: I know i know i changed where Renee lives so she could see her girls) to Charlie's in forks Washington. "I love you, mom. Please write to me!" I called from the porch. "I love you, too, Bella! I will!" she replied.I was about to reach for the key under the eave, when the door swung open. I had been leaning on it so i fell into whoever was holding it open. They dropped me and said "you are the same girl as when you left." "ALICE!!!!!!!!!!" "Hya, Bella!" she smiled.

"CHARLIE! ROSE!" Alice screamed.

"WHAT?" they replied in unison. I giggled.

"GUESS WHO'S AT THE DOOR! IT'S... BELLA!!!!!!!!!!!!"

"OMG! OMFG! LMAO! NICE TRY ALICE!" Rosalie said and I could hear her smile.

"NO, IM REALLY HOME!!!" I could hear Charlie starting to lecture Rosalie about LMAO.

Rose came running around the corner, probably happy that she didn't have to hear the lecture, but even more happy that I was home. We did our little sister-ly cheer:

We are the Swans

Strong and Proud

We fight, we win, we scream out loud!

We've got style, we've got flare

And to everyone else just kiss our tail!

And we slap our butts!

After that we all decided to go out for dinner instead of me cooking since I just got home. "I missed u guys so much!!!" i said at dinner. "We did too!"

"OH NO!" i wheezed. Too much excitement brought on another round of my TB. I scrambled in my purse for my puffer. IT WASN'T THERE! Typically, my attacks end after 5 minutes with my puffer. Without it, they can last up to 4 hours. (A/N: Bella goes into a sort of coma state for her attacks. she breathes and her heart doesn't stop, but nothing registers in her brain. she could be cooking dinner, and burn her hand. she wouldn't feel the pain until later.)

Everything went black...

So I hope you guys like it because I love it. Until I get 10 reviews, I wont publish the next chapter. Oh! You don't have to read chapters 2 and 3 b/c it will diff pov of chapter 1. But I will publish chapter 4. Remember 10 reviews!