Digital World
"You say that power is here?" asked a small figure wearing a roughly made cloak. It was talking to what appeared to be a small winged eye. The small winged eye whirred and clicked in what appeared to be a yes.
"Who would have thought that power would be in this Digital Zone?" the figure shook its head in disbelief. "The last Zone looked so much more difficult than this one, just look at the local digimon."
The cloaked figure gestured to a large, immobile, ironclad rhino looking creature to his left. When the winged eye looked at the cloaked figure disapprovingly it replied "What, you were gone for a really long time."
With another disapproving look and a few sharp angry clicks the small eye flew into the cloak.
"Well be that way then!" the cloaked figure yelled to the eye, wherever it was inside the cloak. Taking one last look at the fallen rhino went the figure raised its hand in the air as if to check the wind and traveled north.
Real World
"Are you sure you don't want to come to McDonalds with the rest of the family Jack?" my step-mother said trying to herd her numerous kids into an already crowded mini-van.
"Yeah, I'm pretty sure Hannah" I replied hoping she wouldn't force me to come and spend more time with my step-siblings. It's not like I don't like them but since I moved to Rome, Georgia I havn't been able to have any time alone at all. Theres always someone trying to barge into a bathroom or , since I now have five stepsisters, me stumbling in on someone with the bathroom door open. Talk about akward at the dinner table.
Let me back up a bit before I get too far into my little tale of woe. My name is Jack Brennan and I'm sixteen years old. As I have already told you I live in Rome, Georgia, a really small do nothing town, with my dad, stepmother, five half sisters and a two year old half brother. I was living with my mom until about last year when she got a divorce from my ex stepdad and dumped me off to live with my father and a house full of grubby little kids.Now that your updated lets go to here and now.
I finally have the house to myself, it's just a wonderful feeling being alone, for about fifteen minutes I just stood in the living room appreciating my alone time. Then I got down to my personal buissness namley checking my e-mail, which I havn't been able to do because the little grubbers would constantly pester me to go on really childish websites like and stuff. Loading up my e-mail adress I found I only had one message. That was pretty wierd, I hadn't been able to check my e-mail in weeks, and I usually get at least three junk mails a day. The one message was dated for today and it was from someone named Digital. well at least I had spam. After I opened up mail the computer started to sputter and the screened flickered. I know that this will sound pretty weak but I peed my pants as I was trying to escape the possesed computer. After about another minute of this the computer looked like it had caughed somthing up. It looked like an egg.
I hope you liked my first attempt at my first ever fic. I'm accepting constructive critisism and any suggestions anyone has to make this story better. I also want to add in two other digidestined besides Jack so you can PM me if you have any suggestions.