Awesome my first fan fic I hope you like it! disclaimer I do not own anything about harvest moon. Please read and review. Please no criticism unless it's constructive.
Chapter 1 the phantom
Jill opened the door to the empty blue bar "you need something Jill?" griffins voice came from behind the bar. Jill sighed "is Muffy home?" "in her room". Jill walked through griffins room and climbed up the ladder to Muffy's room. She knocked on the trap door before she opened it "okay so… what exactly do you want from me?" Jill asked as she entered the room. Muffy turned and smiled "hi Jill! It's so good to see you, I haven't seen you for awhile!" Jill rolled her eyes "first, I saw you yesterday. Second, you act like you weren't expecting me to come, and three, what do you want?" "I'm leaving town for a couple of days and I was wondering if you could deliver this letter to Lumina for me" Muffy said as she handed Jill a letter "why can't you do it yourself?" Jill asked. Muffy sighed "because it's six am, I'm leaving in an hour, and Lumina doesn't wake up till about noon" Jill crossed her arms and blew a strand of brown hair out of her amethyst eyes as she smiled "your lucky you're my best friend. Yea I'll make sure she get's it" "thank you!" Muffy squealed as she hugged Jill.
"well I might as well go see marlin now…" Jill thought to herself as she walked out of the blue bar and toward Vesta's farm. Jill walked up to the fence to see Vesta working "hey, Vesta! Is marlin here?" Vesta looked up at Jill "he's inside" Jill nodded and walked up to the door. She knocked before she opened the door and walked in. "hello" Jill said. Marlin turned "Cecilia's not here" he said. Jill sighed "what makes you think I'm here to see Cecilia? I'm almost never here to see Cecilia. I brought you something" Jill said as she pulled a small bag of rice cakes out of her rucksack and handed them to marlin "thanks" he said as he smiled.
Jill lay on her bed staring at the ceiling "what am I forgetting?" she thought to herself "I watered my crops, I fed and brushed my animals…" she sat up and gasped "the letter!" she looked over to the clock "crap!" she ran quickly out of her house into the dark, forgetting her shoes or a coat to go over the tank top that had replaced her usual t-shirt. She ran up the path to Lumina's mansion, distracted, Jill collided with something. She looked up to see a strange man with shoulder-length silver hair, wearing a leopard print shirt and black pants "well, hello, beautiful. Walking alone at night are we?" he said, looking down at her with a smile on his face "and who are you?" Jill asked as she stood up. The man opened his mouth to speak when Lumina walked out of her mansion "stop! Thief!" she stormed up to the strange man "I'll call the police, you thief!" he smiled at her "you know, you shouldn't let such raw anger spoil your beauty" he said. Lumina's eyes widened and she blushed slightly. Before she could come to her senses the man turned and ran. Jill stared at Lumina in disbelief and then rolled her eyes "here this is for you" she muttered as she handed Lumina her letter.
Well this was chapter 1 I hope you like it and hopefully I'll be updating soon please review;)