Okay so everyone needs to read this I have changed some things in the story nothing to major but you should at least know this and ill have a poll up on my profile for another new story soon
Kagome talking ^fkdhnswjuf^
Everyone else talking "fakianio"
*Third person enters a conversation*
'Person thinking'
Inuyasha and the gang were finally heading back to Keade's Village after the fight with Naraku. On the way back Kagome felt some try to speak with
her telepathically, and the only person that she knew that could do that was Souta. When his voice drifted through her mind, he sounded as if he was
weak and in pain? Kagome stopped walking suddenly when Souta was abruptly cut off, worried Kagome turned to Sango, who was, along with
everyone else, staring at her confused.
^Hey Sango can I barrow Kirara so that I can get home quicker? ^ Kagome asked
"Sure Kagome but what is the rush?"
^Well do you remember when I told you about how me and Souta have the power to be telepathic, well I think Souta is in some kind of terrible
because I barely hear him when he tried to talk with me he kind of sounded weak and in pain so I need to head home and see what is going on…^
Of course Inuyasha interrupts and yells *who the hell says you could go home wench?! * (we all should know what's in store for our favorite
half-demon)
^Ugh Inuyasha? She says sweetly
*What the hell you want now wench?* the puppy... I mean Inuyasha asked
^SIT! Sit, Sit, Sit! Oh shut up Inuyasha I already know what you want to, which is something along lines of we need to find the jewel shards, I Know
but you're going to have to get over it and wait cause Naraku is dead! We need to heal and have a break anyway so they can wait, we will continue
when I get back. Plus you need to let me go home so that I can get restock of food and medical supplies. As she was saying this she walked up to
Kirara, who had transformed and was getting entertained from watching the two fight, and hoped on her back and headed to the well. When they got
there Kagome got off and turned to her and said
^Thank you Kirara, I promise to bring you a bag of cat treats when I get back, you don't need to wait here so go on and rest with Sango and the
others. ^
After she said this she gave Kirara a pat on the head and jumped down in to the blue light of the well.
####################### Kagome's time ##############################
As the light faded, Kagome landed at the bottom of the well in her time. As she pulled herself out of the well and then walked from the well house, she
noticed an ominous feeling hanging in the air. She hurried up the stairs that lead to her family's house and as she got close she slowed down slightly
into a fast walk when she noticed the god tree didn't even as healthy as it did before. After looking at the tree she started running again to get to the
house faster. She came to a stop when she got to the front door.
That's it for the first chapter! Fixed a lot of the things that I didn't like before. Hope you like it.
PLEASE READ AND REVIEW AND I GUESS U MAY FLAME IF NEED BE BUT DON'T BASH THE STORY TO MUCH OR I WONT CONTINUE TO WRITE IT HAHA : D