First of all this is my first story so please tell me what you think
Prologue
I princess Isabella Rosa Romano was walking down the isle to marry a complete stranger. I've been dreading this day since I understood what it meant. My entire life from this moment on will be me ruling Italy with a man named Michael. If I could rule my country without him I would sadly the law says I cant. Before the rings go on the bride and groom are to drink a bit of red wine. I felt dizzy but from years of being taught proper posture I held my ground. Once it was over he and I were to be congratulated with a feast. In between courses everyone was to dance we were dancing before the final course when I fell to the floor. My father came as quick as he could everything was blurry I couldn't focus on his face. I could hardly breathe my eyes were heavy and I didn't understand why. When I finally got a good look at my father he looked terrified. I noticed everyone was crying and some were whispering "goodbye princess".That's when I realized I was dying of poison but how? I felt the tears stream out my eyes and down my face. That's when I stopped breathing and my father closed my eyes for the last time. I felt panicked I wasn't breathing and I couldn't move but I could still hear. I felt my dress being changed, my make up being done daggers put In my hands. Then I felt something soft under me and I knew I was in a glass coffin to be paraded around the city for my final goodbyes. Would I be free then would this fear end I cant stand being scared its a weakness. When they were taking me around in the coffin I heard crying and screaming. I wanted to scream back but it wasn't right. They finally took me to my burial and I was put in a new wooden coffin. My father said his goodbye speech to me and kissed my forehead. Then I felt myself being lowered into my grave "goodbye daddy" I thought. I heard the dirt burying me ad then silence. That's when I realized I wasn't being freed I was trapped for some reason.
Its been years since I was buried since then silence. Until now I heard someone digging me up and felt my coffin lid open. Someone lifted me out then I felt something wet slide down my throat. I slowly opened my eyes to see my savior and realized I was falling asleep. I did see him smile though a kind smile like fathers.
So what did you think good or should I leave this story for something better?
-oceanlover91