Ok, since this 'prolog' stank, I'm redoing it. Yay! \ (^o^) / But this is still my first Portal fan fiction. Be nice, not a flamer. I will accept any and all constructive critisism, give me the truth. BUt don't be a hater. Ok? So let's get started.

Auther's POV:

He watched the brown haird human bolt across gell filled room. A rocket turret launched another, well, rocket at her. She dodged it with surprising grace. She was gripping the portal gun tightly in her small hands, reading to launch a blue or oragne portal. He watched as metal arm carried a core over to her. She grabbed the green-eyed AI. "Happy explosion day gorgeous." Adventure sphere flirted. He almost laughed when the human roled her remembered how he insulted Rick earlier, now it seemed more fitting now. The whole facility then trembled as the impending explosion came closer. He looked down at the Intellegence Dampening Sphere he was attacthed to. It yelled some frantic insults at mute women, but he couldn't make them out.

Then the lady lept into the air as a rocket shot from a turret, into a portal, and at his 'host'. The blue-eyed sphere dactivated, but not for long. He watched as she shot back up into the air, and attched Rick to the chassis. With that, the British core's optic shot open. He could hear the other cores babbling about nothing particular. He was rambling to, but it was a force of habbit. He almost always talked, but no one ususaly listened. Another explosion interupted his thoughts. Well, well, well, the new central AI actually hit her! Maybe he wasn't such a lost cause. Something caught his optic. He looked to see a potato at the core transfer. Her voice was odly familier. She looked scared for the human, wich was strange.

He squinted, at it. 'No...' He thought. 'That CAN'T be Her...' His thoughts where interupted by soft, but audible 'dink'. Suddenly he felt he was being ripped apart! He looked down to see a wide opened portal, inside was stars. Lots and lots of stars! His eyes widened. 'It DOES exsist!' He thought. The blue-eyed core was pulled through, with the human. "Letmego! Letmego! Letmego! Letmego! Letmego! I can still fix this!" He heard him beg. There was a snap as the core next to him came loose. "Spaaaaaaace!" The yellowed eyed core schreeched excitedly. He gulped as he disapeared into the void. He felt his own cords coming losse. and knew he was next. He remembered what he had said to the human earlier, and relized that he had been lying...sort of.

"Fact: I'm going to die!" He cried out, but no one hear him.. "I already have, and your not coming back!" Her voice snapped. A metal arm shot through the portal, knocked the british core into space, then grabbed the human. He watched in shock. There was a snap, and suddenly he was falling, being pulled ino the stary void. It felt like some one was trying to rip him apart. Fact Sphere winced, waiting to fall into space. He could already hear Space's rambling. Rick shouted something, but he didn't hear it. Suddenly, something hard smacked his side, and he blacked out...

Fact slowly opened his optic to hear...singing? He looked up to see the She was back in her body. Two robots, one short one with a round body, the other tall with a oval shaped body and large thighs. A elevater was heading upwards. Wait, where was the human? He saw Her save the lady. But where was she. Did She let her go. No, GLaDOS wouldn't do that. It was so unlike her. Then again, she acted differently while she was a potato. Maybe she changed. Fact winced, he was still hurting."Being dropped from the cieling hurts terribly..." He grumbled. Suddenly She spun around. "Oh, it's you. Your awake." She said, sound ...there was something in her voice that he never heard her use before, but he couldn't place it.

"Fact: I'm confused and don't know what's going on." He said, looing at her. She sighed and picked him up with a robotic arm. The purple-ish pink core looked around and shivered with fear. "What happened?" He asked, somewhat nervous. "Oh, you don't need to worry about that." She answered calmly. Fact blinked. "I don't?" He asked. "No, you should be worrying more about this." She answered, Her voice making him shiver. Suddenly she dropped him infront of one of the robots. He heard the tall one snicker as they turned around to look at him. She had dropped him at their feet. "Blue, take him to the old robotic experimental chamber, I want to get some testing down."

His optic widened in fear. He knew all the horrible tests GLaDOS did. The short, blue-eyed robot bent down and picked him up. "Put me down!" FAct said, but was ignored. Blue trotted over to a elevator, humming something. But it sounded wierd since his voice was made up of clicks and suqeaks. They entered the elevator, and waited for it closed. This one was one of the few elevators that where lit. Fact looked at Blue to see something written on his arm. "ATLAS..." He read out loud. The robot looked at him. "What?" Fact said. The robot shrugged and continued humming. After what have must of been five or ten minutes, the elevator opened up. They where in a large room.

Computers and moniters lined the walls. A few machines almostb as big as the robot that was carrying him sat in the corners. Several cot and what looked like operating tables sat in rows in the middle of the room. Most of them had lumby figures covered in sheets. Infront of each table was something that resembled the core transfer machine. Fact looked at them, with a mixture of curiosity and fear. "Plug him into here." Said Her voice as one of the machines lit up. 'ATLAS' walked over and plugged him into the machine. "Go back to testing, I'll take over from here." Said GLaDOS. The robot nodded happily and left. Fact looked around in fear.

"What are you doing!?" He asked nervously. "Science." She answered. The computers in the room began to hum to life, buzzing with electricity. Sparks jumped frpm loose wires. Suddenly he felt numb. 'Maybe it won't be to ba-AHHHHHHH!' His thoughts where interupted by electrical current. He cried out in pain as his whole body was painfully shocked. He could see sparks jumping of of his handles and could hear his screams echoing through the old room. And then, for the second time today, Fact Sphere blacked out.

And how was that? Better right? Please review and tell me what you think, :)