High School DxD Constructive Criticism

by The Fanfiction Criticist

Welcome To High School DxD Constructive Criticism! Where you can get actual useful Criticism that isn't just (I don't like it because it's dumb!) We try are best to explain in detail why certain thing's shouldn't be done or over done.

1. Chapter 1

DxD = Harem's?!

Before we get into most thing's I just want to say that this is my personal Criticism. You don't generally HAVE to do what I say or take this as me telling you what to do. Let's move on shall we!

Harem's. Something that 89.36% of the High School DxD Fanfiction Author's has made happen in there story. I just want to say that I myself enjoy Harem's as much as the next man. *wipes nosebleed* but not every story HAS to have a Harem in it because it's High School DxD. That's like saying you HAVE to make the Main Character in your Naruto Story a Ninja or Samurai because Naruto is mostly about those thing's.

Just because the Original Main Character had a Harem doesn't mean YOUR main character has to have a harem. High School DxD is a Gold Mine of possibility. You have ALL the other Faction's other than just Devil's, Angel's, and Fallen Angel's. You also have different magic's, Chakra, Ki, an the ability to fit in your own Sacred Gear idea or Ancient weapon because it literally fit's in with everything else.

So im just saying just because everyone else is doing Harem doesn't mean you have to do it to. Your main character can travel alone and have no romantic experience's at all or be a guy/girl that just does what ever he/she wants.

The main message of this is you DON'T have to do something just because popular Author's are doing it.

But hey this just my Criticism! A Fanfiction Criticism! AND CUT!