Accidents Don't Happen Accidentally

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1:13 "Watch out!" Sam yelled he dashed towards the road. He heard a women scream to the top of her lungs.

"Sam! Sam! Wake up!" Dean shook his little brother.

"Huh?" All confused he shifted upwards and rubbed his eyes.

"You were yelling what's up?" Dean had a concerned look on his face.

"Oh um just nothing."

"Oh come on I know something is up. You never talk in your sleep something must be up."

"Where are we?"

"On our way to Montana why?"

"What time is it?" Sam shot straight up and looked at his watch. 10:25 it read. "How long will it take us to get to Montana City?"

"About three or so hours why?"

"Dean drive faster!"

"Whoa Sam what's up?" Dean was getting anxious. He looked at Sam.

"I had a vision and a women is going to be killed at 1:13 in Montana City." Dean turned his head, turned up the radio and stepped on the accelerator.

~~2 Hours and 35 minutes Later~~

Dean parked his Impala, and faced Sam.

"Alright where did you see the women get hit? What did she look like?"

"Umm … I don't know I was walking around I think I was going to meet you at a coffee shop. She had hair a little bit below her shoulders it was a hazel color and semi curly. She was skinny and had green eyes. She's around my age also"

"Okay well I'll park the car here and be on the lookout for her. I'm going to get coffee."

"Okay guess I'll be here for a bit."

"Call me if anything happens, go walk around." Dean got out of the Impala and started walking down the street,Sam sighed. What am I going to do? What if I don't save her? Sam looked at his watch. 1:05 is said. Eight minutes. Sam started to get nervous. He hopped out of the car and started walking the same direction Dean went in. He crossed the street. Sam let out another sigh, he looked forward. He checked his watch 1:10. He was begging to grow impatient. Just three more minutes. He was looking all around looking out for cars and the women. He took out his phone and called Dean.

"Hey where are you?"

"A coffee place. Pass the first coffee shop you see and I'm there."

"Okay I'll meet you there soon."

"Have you seen the women yet?"

"No but," Sam checked his watch 1:12, "Dean I gotta go." Sam hung up his phone. He looked around quickly. In the distant he saw a speeding car. It was going faster and faster by the minute. A women started walking across the street, that's her! The car was quickly approaching. Sam ran to the woman and grabbed her around the waist and pulled her away. They both fell and landed on the pavement. A loud crash happened and he heard the scraping of metal.

"Are you alright?" Sam got up fast and looked at the women, smoke was rising to the sky.

"Oh my. How did you-?" She had a puzzled look on her face.

"Umm …" Sam hesitated. "Are you alright?" He repeated. He pulled the women to her feet. There was a crowd forming all around them.

"SAMMY!" Dean yelled far behind the crowd and ran towards Sam and the women. In the distance they could all hear police sirens.

The people had cleared and the smoke drifted off into the ocean blue sky. There were policemen everywhere. Talking to every single person to see what happened.

"Good job Sammy." Dean patted Sam on the back.

"It's Sam, and thanks."

"Hey she's kind of cute," Dean looked over to the women. Sam looked at Dean. "She's more your type though." He added quickly. The woman was walking over.

"Hey, thank you for saving my life. I don't know what happened but I'm glad you were there. I would be dead if it wasn't for you." She walked up to him more and gave him a hug.

"You're welcome, glad I could help." He gave her a smile.

"By the way I'm Dani." She held out her hand.

"I'm Sam." They shook hands.

"I'm Dean," He piped in moving in front of Sam. "His brother." He pointed at Sam. Dani laughed.

"Can I get you coffee or something? A little treat for saving my life?" She smiled shyly.

"Um," Dean nudged him. "Yea … sure."

"Cool," She took out a piece of paper and handed it to Sam. "How about we meet at Luna over there around 10:00? She pointed to a coffee shop down the road.

"Yeah, sure." He smiled a quick smile.

"I'll see you then." She walked away. Dean whistled. Sam smacked Dean on the chest.

"What?" He laughed.

"You are unbelievable. Let's find a hotel." Sam walked towards the Impala.