Title: Revenge of the Ditto
Authors: Lee, Matty and Mike
Blurb thing: Cynthia's Ditto is mad about losing a battle to Ash, so he steals his identity, causing a Ditto revolution against cruel owners. Not knowing who to trust, real-Ash, Brook, Misty and Cynthia set out to stop the Dittos before they take over the world...
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Please note that this story was written with too twin 8yr olds (yay Matty and Mike). They're my brothers. Erm...I've never really written any Pokemon, so no flames, please! If you like, PLEASE review. REVIEW! I'll love you if you do! Review for the children (my brothers). Reciew for me! Review for... OK now I'm just babbling on so on with the story!
Disclaimer: Do I honestly look like I own Pokemon? Well, I don't, just in case you were wondering. If I did, would I be writing fanfiction? Honestly?
"Darkrai, use Dark Void!"
Cynthia's Spiritoom fell asleep. 'Wake up' she urged silently, a wave of desperation controlling her thoughts. Spiritoom didn't stir. Ash and Cynthia had been battling for awhile, both evenly matched, both on their last Pokemon.
"Darkrai, use nightmare!"
Cynthia grimanced. This was just torture now. The worst part was, there was honeslty nothing she could do about it. All she could do was watch as her poor Spiritoom was beaten, both mentally and phisically.
"Finish it off with Dream Eater".
She flinched and turned her head away. It was all over now.
Sadly, she saw the final ounces of strength leave Spiritoom's body, and it fainted. She rushed out and embraced Spiritoom with open arms.
"Good game", she said, gruffly.
Ash smirked, "'Till next time", he said, smugly, notioning to her sleeping Pokemon. I rolled my eyes in response. Sure, I was frustrated about losing, but he didn't need to know that (I'd mull over it fully later).
*-later-*
It was so close, too. Argh! Spiritoom glanced at her worriedly, sensing her frustration. Ditto popped out of it's Pokeball.
"I wish I could pay him back, somehow!", I thought aloud. Ditto and Spiritoom seemed to understand: they nodded furiously.
Ditto set off, angrily. He was a loyal Pokemon, and hated losing. He had been Cynthia's second Pokemon. Ditto hated Ash's Aceus. He wasn't entirely sure what he was going to do-maybe just yell at Pikachu, give him a piece of his mind. Yes, Ditto decided confidently. Pikachu wouldn't know what was comming to him.
As Ditto approached, Pikachu glared at him. Before he could even open his mouth, Ditto face was met with Ash's foot. Ditto cried out angrily, flying through the air. He crashed to the ground, sending a harsh jolt of pain up his tiny body. This was war. Ditto closed him eyes, and, concentrating with all his might, changed into Ash. Ash stared at him, confused and Ditto grinned, slyly. Both parties stared at each other, motionless, transfixed, for what seemed like hours, but was probably only seconds. Ditto made the first move. He lunged at Ash and pinned him to the ground, knocking him unconsious. Pikachu looked confused, unsure of what to make of the situation. The Ditto-Ash hauled the real Ash into a closet, locking it tightly shut. He grinned. Mission complete.
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