Thankyou all for being so patient, I'm really happy that you guys haven't given up on me yet (atleast I don't think you have XD). This is the first chapter from the new Amu's revenge, I have re-written it a bit so it makes more sense, it is longer and that there is more detail. Sorry this wasn't posted earlier, I just found out about a new anime and I was instantly hooked onto it.

***Read the Authors note at the bottom of this chapter on things like when I'll update next and some other important things (: Thanks again!***

Amu's revenge chapter 1 *Re-written*

*Amu's PoV*

Packing away the last of the papers. He smiles at us all and grabs his bag from the chair and hangs "Thank-you for your help guys, that's the last of the work today." Tadase says while he puts his bag on his shoulder.

I lie back on my chair and slouch down while yawning, "Ah~ that was tiring, that's much more work then we usually get. Why is there so much, Tadase-kun?" I look over to said boy and he looks just as tired as I am.

"Because Easter is making X-eggs all over the place, we can't keep up and they seem to have no pattern. They just pop up anywhere and create mayhem." He replies, sighing lightly. "Be careful on your way home everyone, they could create X-eggs whenever and wherever they want and we won't be able to tell where their next attack is going to be until it's too late. I'll be going first guys, take care. Kiseki, come on" We all say our goodbyes and he walks out the door in a hurry, I guess he must have to be somewhere soon.

I stand up and hold my bag in my hand. "Ran, Miki, Suu, come on, we have to get home in time for my television program!" I yelled and there was no response coming from inside the Royal Garden, so they must be outside. I quickly walk outside to look for my three charas. "Ran? Miki? Suu? Where are you guys?" I suddenly feel a cold breeze on my neck and I stand there frozen for a moment, that couldn't be a-a-a "GHOST!" I scream loudly and ran faster than I knew possible into the Royal Garden. I hear small giggles outside and see Ran and Miki clutching their stomachs from laughing too much and Suu is looking between me and the other two charas, trying to figure out what was going on.

"Was that you two?" I ask, nearly out of breath from that last scare. They said nothing, only giggling at the reaction they got out of me. "That was mean." I pouted slightly and made a grab for my bag, "come on guys, I don't want to miss my show! It only comes on once a week!"

Suu came and sat on my right shoulder while Miki and Suu (still laughing) came and sat on my left. I check my watch and see that I don't have much time until the TV program starts. I turn to say goodbye to the other remaining guardians but they were almost on the ground from laughter. "Seriously? Just because I get scared from a lot of things does not make me your source of laughter." The stopped laughing slightly, only a few occasional giggles could be heard. "Speaking about sources of laughter, I'm going to be late! Bye guys, I'll see you tomorrow!" I run out of the Royal Garden, only faintly hearing the goodbye's from the other guardians.

I run quickly to a place where no one else was and look at Ran, still perched on my left shoulder. "Chara Change please Ran?" She looks at me and then nods. I feel a calm sensation wash over me when I feel the slight tingle in my wrists and ankles. I look down at my legs and notice the pink wing accessories hovering next to my ankles, I smile whilst remembering the time when I tried to shake them off and I ended up landing on a tall not-yet-built building, despite my fear of hights. "Hop, Step, Jump." I mumble and finally jump, lifting myself into the air. I didn't want to miss my TV program. Rima isn't the only one who enjoys comedy; I'd much prefer that over horror any day. Feeling the cold breeze blowing onto my body was nice and refreshing. My short pink hair flowing rapidly behind me

I look down and see the park, the park where I remember singing to the soft tune of Ikuto's violin. Where are you now, Ikuto? Have you found your dad yet? are you coming back anytime soon? It saddens me when I remember Ikuto, leaving. I remember him ringing me up on my phone using a blocked number, so, due to him using a blocked number, I could never call him back to see how he was going. He's always been mysterious; no one can figure him out. He keeps things to himself and he never lets me help.

"Amu-chan, X-eggs!" I look at Miki to see where she was pointing, to find the X-eggs. "Down there? Okay, let's go!"

I lower myself to the ground and try to find the black eggs. After looking for about 5 seconds, I see the flying eggs in a secluded clearing behind some thick trees. Running quickly over there, I call for Miki, there are quite a few there, so I'm going to need to use Colourful Canvas. "Chara Transform, Miki!" I look at her and she looks back "Hai!" She yells pretty loudly, despite her being a few inches tall.

"Chara Transform, Amulet Spade!"

I look down and see my transform complete (You guys do remember what Amulet Spade looks like right? XD). I feel the large paintbrush in my hand, I don't know how I do it, but just thinking about it makes the paintbrush appear. I hold the paintbrush infront of me and get the power building up in me to focus on my hands, thus letting the power leak onto the paintbrush. "Colourful Canvas!" I yell and the colours spurt out everywhere, surrounding the X-eggs, but just before the colours encase them, most of the eggs flew out of the ring, resulting in them avoiding the trap. "What do I do Miki, should I purify the small amount I got or release them and try and get more?" I talk out-loud, not knowing why, seeing as I can just talk to her using my head, it just feels more natural this way. "Amu, you have to get more than that, seeing as there are a lot of eggs here, if you only purify that small amount at a time, you will run out of energy too fast, you won't be able to get them all!" Understanding the situation well, I let go of the few eggs I caught and I turn to have another go at getting the eggs. But just as I turn around, I stop dead in my tracks.

Ran and Suu are being forced into their eggs by some of the X-charas that have just hatched. "Ran! Suu!" I run to them, their small arms reaching out to me from their eggs, their yells for help are the only things I hear, their faces full of fear, but just as I was about to reach them, the eggs smash. The green and the pink dust of their eggs mixing silently as the wind carries it into the dark forest. I feel the salty liquid falling down my face, and dropping onto the grassy ground. I reach my arm out to the dust, screaming. They can't leave me, not now, not after everything we have been through.

"RAN! SUU! DON'T LEAVE ME!" I scream at the retreating dust. I slowly lower my hand and turn to the X-eggs and X-charas. Not even bothering to wipe my face of the clear tears I'm shedding. "Why?" I mumble quietly, starting to feel anger and sadness clash inside me, I don't know what to feel. I raise my voice, facing the black creatures full on, screaming. "DON'T YOU CARE? DON'T YOU KNOW WHAT YOU JUST DID?" More tears explode from my already swelling eyes. I drop to the floor. I feel my power from the chara nari subsiding and before I knew it, Miki was floating infront of me, her eyes just a teary as mine. "Amu," Miki looks down at the ground. That one word, her saying my name, forced me to crack. I started sobbing uncontrollably; I put my shaking hand on top of my little chest that holds my other egg. "Miki, get inside your egg and get inside the egg chest. I have to run. This is just a dream, nothing more than a dream. When I run away from the X-eggs, I'll wake up. I'll wake up and we'll all be back at my house together, okay?" I stand up and Miki reluctantly gets in the miniature chest. I'll protect her and Dia, it's the only thing I can do.

I stop wobbling from standing up too fast and I tighten my belt so the eggs won't fall out. I take my shaking legs and force them to move from the clearing and into the woods. I know my way around here like the back of my hand. The black beasts won't be able to find me. Despite knowing this, my chest was pounding along with my head. The tears wouldn't stop from flowing down my cheeks no matter how hard I tried. I turn a corner and suddenly a crowd of the X-charas were infront of me, I turn to go around and see a lot of X-eggs. There are more than before…a lot more.

I open my eyes slowly and find myself looking at a wall. I turn my body around, noticing that I'm in a blanket. I sit up slowly and look at my wall-mirror. My eyes are puffed red and my cheeks have tear streaks on them, I suddenly recall last night's events…

Hey guys, thanks for reading. I don't think I'll end up writing what happened to Miki and Dia, because I was crying while writing about Suu and Ran's deaths. It's 4:30am while I'm writing this so it might not make sense, if there is something you don't understand or a mistake you find in it, please tell me.

Okay, I won't be able to update as much as I would like because… 1: I've been doing horribly in school, so I have to do a lot to catch up and 2: I have a horrible cold, I can't stop sneezing and I cut the inside of my mouth somehow so it hurts more than anything I've ever felt (maybe exaggeration there, but it still hurts more that it should).

Also, tell me if you like this version better more or if you like the other one better. If there's anything you want added in, don't hesitate to ask, I love hearing ideas from you guys, it makes the story a lot better in my opinion XD.

Oh yeah! This will be an Amuto, so, I'm giving you a waring now (if you read this). If you don't like Amuto, then I suggest you leave this story and never come back for your own good XD (I'm joking). It also won't be rated very high, so, the most they'll do it kiss :P

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