A.N. Hey every one this is pinapple and potterheadsgalore. This is our debut on fanfiction. We would really love to get CONSTRUCTIVE criticism not just mean criticism. Please review! With out further ado…
A different point of view
It all changed the day that Mom and Dad told Jared and I that Zack was coming. I remember the day like it was yesterday…..well, it was yesterday. It started like this. "MOM DAD JERRY STOLE MY STORY NOTEBOOK!" I yelled down the steps.
My hand closed around Jared's wrist, so instead of him rushing down the steps, my notebook flew down instead. "You are sooo DEAD!" I screamed in his face.
He scoffed
rolling his eye's and grinned like a maniac. Quickly slipping out of my hands he jumped on the stair railing an slid down. At the bottom he scooped up the writing journal and rushed around the corner. "Get back here!" I wined in hysterics. I followed suite an ran after him. Rounding the corner a firm grip closed around my elbow. I peered into the face of my capture giltly. "Sorry mom," I mumbled
That was an amazing start to the day lucky for me it was going to get worse.
"five hour drive?" he cried
I rolled my eyes at the insufferable git. "The thing I want to know is there's going to be a criminal in our house?" I asked
My mom shook her head. Jared and I gave a nervous glance at one another. "do you think that's a good idea?" I questioned
Just then, my father walked in.
"Kids, I just finished getting everything in the car for our ride. And don't give your mother a hard time, we're not quite positive about this either, but if it's the right choice, I think we'll know in the end."
Jared groaned. "Seriously Jerry just give it a go will you," I more commanded than asked.
I started walking out to the car, and was surprised to find that jared and mom and dad all followed in my footsteps. This made me smile and I glanced back just quick enough and gave Jared a small smile that I know he hates. He glares back at me but I can tell he doesn't mean it. This is how it is with me and Jared. He's a good brother adoptive or not.
Chapter 2 the car ride
Okay I admit I wasn't all for the ride/criminal thing but I wasn't going to complain…much. Okay maybe a little, its really fun to annoy people especealy Jammie. Jammie is my adopted parents daughter so im stuck with her. Why not make the best of it? "how long have we been in the car?" I yelled loud enough to hear myself over my music wich was up full volume.
My head phones got ripped of by Jammie. I smirked at her "what," I asked like nothing happened.
"What happened is you blew out my ear drum!" she said crossly
She didn't even crack a smile, I frowned "give me back my head phones," I ordered
"Why should I?" she asked
"Because im awesome, got some swagger," I answered
She punched me playfully in the arm. "owww," I complained
She shot me that smile I hate….. maybe. I really don't hate it but I will never tell her that. If she found out I would never hear the end. EVER! I rolled my eyes and turned to look out the window. "Suite your self," she said.
She whipped her hair around. I sighed, I really wanted my ear buds back. "hey ginger blondie wanna give my ear buds back now?"
"No"
"Now?"
"No"
Now?"
"fine, just take them!" Jammie yelled
My goal was complete annoy the heck out of jammie. The rest of the car ride was mostly uneventful except a few bickers.
Chapter three zack