Hey names Luridwind and this is my first story and I'm open to reviews and appreciate them, especially if I'm doing something wrong and can improve. Hopefully you will like my story, the four clans are Forestclan, Mountainclan, Marshclan and Lakeclan. My story is set in Marshclan. It is open to new cats, so if you want your OC join just post a bio in your review however I may not be able to include them.

This is it for now :) Also Because I am new I haven't figured out how to make the Chapters in tabs so they don't take up space, so for now I will just be using lines.

Marshclan

Leader:Hollowstar – A brown she-cat with dark brown stripes and light green eyes

Deputy:Thornwhiskers – A grey tabby tom with sharp whiskers and grey eyes

App: Rumblepaw

Medicine Cat:Brambleleaf – A brown ginger tom with hazel green eyes

App: Lilypaw

Warriors: Bearscar (Darkshadow) – A huge brown tabby with scars across the right side of his face. He has sea green eyes and a torn ear.

App: Otterpaw

Larchfall – A mottled she-cat with narrow clouded blue eyes

App: Rosepaw

Smokesoul – A black tom with grey eyes

App: Powderpaw

Silverwish – A silver tabby she-cat with deep blue eyes

App- Nettlepaw

Petalbreeze - A ginger and white she-cat with amber eyes

Grasspelt – A tortie she-cat with light brown eyes

Brackenfang- A grey brown tabby with a white muzzle and hazel eyes

Strawlegs – A golden tom with long legs and gold eyes

Treeclaw – A brown tom with big claws and amber eyes

Fruitmouth – A pale she-cat with amber green eyes

Littlecloud – A small white she-cat with blue eyes

Apprentices: Otterpaw: Solid small brown tom with brown eyes

Powderpaw – White she-cat with grey legs, ears, face and tails with blue eyes

Lilypaw- Silver she-cat with grey eyes

Rosepaw- Pale she-cat with amber eyes

Rumblepaw- Grey tom with dark stripes and light blue eyes

Nettlepaw: A dark grey and white tom with sharp fur and grey eyes

Queens: Brightflower- A pale she-cat with silver legs and tail and brown eyes

Speckledawn – A calico she-cat with amber eyes

Kits: Daisykit – A white she-cat with gold eyes

Furzekit - A golden tom with brown eyes

Lotuskit – A pale she-cat with grey eyes

Foxkit – A slim ginger marble she-cat with amber eyes

Badgerkit – A small black and white tom with sea green eyes

Eaglekit – A tall golden tom with blue eyes

Dogkit – A big brown tom with one blue and one green eye

Elders: Wildheart – A dark brown tom with amber eyes

Parsleyfrost – A tortie she-cat with brown eyes

Chapter 1

The excited cats of Marshclan gathered round the nursery trying to get a peak at the wailing she-cat but failed to see pass the towering brown tabby tom standing at the entrance. He lowered his head to his mate and whispered, "Speckledawn... breathe." The calico she-cat nodded frantically and began to pant before letting out a cry of pain. The tom quickly ripped the air sack off the small golden tom and narrowed his eyes in surprise. His state of shock made him weak in the legs and was pushed aside by a much smaller tom with a sleek coat. The tom began to lick the kit and then flicked his tail for his silver apprentice to follow in. "Bearscar..." the she-cat whispered, "you need to lick your kits after." She was clearly frightened of him but refused to let it get in the way. Bearscar nodded and regained his position on front of the nursery although his mind was still on the kit. His thoughts were broken by Speckledawn's screams as another kit slipped out. "Lilypaw this ones yours," the medicine cat ordered his apprentice. Lilypaw tore the sack off and brushed her tongue over the brown tom's fur. Bearscar's smiled at the kit's resemblance to himself before shuffling the other kit towards the queen. Speckledawn eyes filled with worry as she saw her mates resentment to the golden tom and rasped her tongue over him herself but soon stopped as she once again yelled in agony. "Brambleleaf!" she exclaimed at the medicine cat, "how many more?" Brambleleaf ignored the queen's question and gave the kit to Bearscar to deal with. He did the same as the others and groomed the reddish-brown she-cat. Lilypaw had placed the brown kit by his mother and waited for Speckledawn's final cry. She gave birth to a small black and white tom who was healthy and placed by his mother. Tired, Speckledawn wrapped her tail round her kits and closed her eyes. Bearscar let the others out but remained with his mate. He watched her as he heard the cheers of the clan behind him suddenly were silenced. Glancing over his shoulder his sea green eyes met those of courage and leadership. He dipped his head, as the she-cat spoke, "I have come to welcome the four new cats," her tone firm. Bearscar gave way and let her in. She bounded to Speckledawn and pressed her nose against her flank, "they're beautiful!" she exclaimed. Speckledawn's face lit up as she grinned at her sister, "thank you Hollowstar," she purred resting her head on her paws, "I thought you weren't going to come," she admitted. Hollowstar shook her head, "just because I never agreed with you and Bearscar doesn't mean I wouldn't be there for you" she meowed gently cuffing over her sister's ears, "have you thought of any names?" she continued hoping she hadn't started an argument. Realising her sisters attempts of avoiding a feud she replied, "actually yes I have!" in excitement. "I thought the the small one's name could be Badgerkit" as she spoke Bearscar nodded in agreement to the name she had chosen, "and the brown one Mu..." she was cut off by the deep stern voice, "Dogkit" Bearscar meowed, "he was my brother." Speckledawn tilted her head but then turned her attention to the ginger she-cat, "I thought my sister could name her," she suggested. Bearscar sat down uncertain with his mate's decision but tilted his head to Hollowstar. "Since we are doing predators how about Foxkit" she meowed. The tom's eyes widened with happiness "I think he likes it" his mate purred, "and the golden tom?" Speckledawn questioned. Bearscar turned around losing interest and moved out of the entrance. "Eaglekit!" a little voice called as he trotted into the nursery. "Furzekit!" Brightflower called after her son as two she-cats followed her. "Eaglekit!" they chanted together bouncing around. "Lotuskit! Daisykit!" the pale queen commanded silence from her kits as she settled down, "I'm sorry they just..." she began before Speckledawn purred, "I think it's a lovely name." Hollowstar dipped her head to the queens and left passing her deputy. "Healthy?" the grey tabby questioned, "all" she replied, "although Bearscar seems to be unsettled by the golden tom..." she sighed glancing away, "Thornwhiskers, I'm not too sure that these kits will bring joy to Marshclan" she trailed off to her den.