AN: Hi guys! This is a new idea i came up with a little while ago, while i was in the iddle of an rs assignment/exam actually, and i have gotten so addicted to it, writing more and more chapters. I think this one will be better than my first, and i have gotten positive reviews from family and friends about it, though you and me both know family can be biased!
Anyway, read on, and i hope you enjoy.
So, without further ado, i bring to you, the irst chapter of THE UNKNOWN LOST!
(ps, the first chapter is a bit of a recap of breaking dawn(pt1). Sorry, but after this there is a time skip! afterall, its only the prologue! Enjoy!)
Danniestarr xxx
Prologue: The Wedding
EPOV
As i stared at Bella, walking unsteadily down the aisle, i took a deep breath.
Later on...
This lovely, extravagant woman was mine! Bella was everything i ever could have hoped for, kind, caring, and beautiful didnt even START to cover her looks.
But she was human. And i was not.
And i was oing to change that, i was going to end her life for her, unwillingly, but i had to keep my side of the bargain.
I choked down the lump in my throat and went to talk to Esme. Bella was in the shelter of the woods right now, with that dog, Jacob.
I knew he was her best friend, but that couldnt stop my hate for him. Afterall, we were enemies.
I used that as an excuse for my reaction, but smugly, i thought in my head, You're not going to be as chummy when she's like me...
I could hear them talking but i didnt want to listen in so i tuned out for a bit.
When i finally reached Esme, she was already looking at me, smiling widely. I knew she had been waiting for this, she wanted me to be hppy, and Bella was the key to that, for me.
"Hello dear, everythng alright?" She asked sweetly.
I gave a flash of a smile, too quick for human eyes to see, and simply stated back,
"Yes, it sure is Esme, i just wanted to-"
Then i heard it.
My hyperactie ears heard what, luckily, human ears couldnt.
"Ow, Jake! Let go!"
"Bella! Have you lost your mind?"
And with that i lost my patience, i was off before Esme could say a word. I wasnt listening to their conversation anymore, not eve subconciously, no - i was concentrating on two things, 1 - being that i had to keep my temper in check, and 2 - I had to get to Bella, and fast.
Within a second i was there, standing with all the other wolves, Jacob and Bella, under the cover of the trees, where noone could see us from the main wedding party. Everyone was there now too, more wolves.
"Take your hands off her!" i said coldly. I was not in the mood for manners.
2 growls came from behind Jacob, but i didnt even bother to look at who it was, i was glaring at Jacob's grip around Bella - He was hurting her.
"Jake, bro, back away," I heard Seth whisper, still in his human form. "Let her go."
"Now!" I added on the end, snarling every word.
Jacob let go, and i grabbed Bella, whisking her gently behind two of the oter wolves, standng in front of her, still, for protection.
"C'mon, Jake. Let's go."
"I'll kill you," Jacob said in a choked whisper. His eyes were glaring straight at me, but i was past caring by now.
"I'll kill you myself! I'll do it now!" He shuddered whilst saying this.
Sam growled. Seth was standing too close.
"Seth, get out the way." I hissed.
Seth just tugged Jacob again. He got him a few feet away.
"Dont do it, Jake. Walk away. C'mon." Sam joined Seth and helped to nudge Jacob into the trees until they disapeared, from human sight at least.
"I'm sorry," Bella whispered. That she thought it were her fault was wholly wrong, but all i dared to say was, "It's all right now, Bella" murmering as i thought of how Jacob had hurt her, and how his behaviour most certainly was not all right.
One of the wolves looked coldly at me and i just gave him a cold nod in return.
"All right," i muttered to myself, then looked towards Bella, "Let's get back."
Thanks for reading, i will be updating soon, seeing as i have a free day tomorow after school and i dont think i have much homework to do, so hopefully i will be posting another chapter soon!
I do have all the way up to chapter 7 written out in my book, and although that may not sound like much, i do have to type it all in to the computer, and i dont have THAT much time to write it, mostly it comes to me at school.
However, i am trying to develop my capters, as some are a bit short and unlear, and ALL i was told at parents evening tonight was that i needed "more detail and to develop and express" my answers, i am trying massively to improve my chaoters to come.
I am also massiely behind on editing, so any mistakes, i am not dumb, it may be a typo or i have missed it on editing this chapter.
Review, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! this is my second story and i want to know how you like my idea and construtie criticism!
Also, feel free to PM me, im always around as i have my 2 smartphones with email and i get alerts and mostly look at them within the day, there being EXTREMELY few exceptions!
Anyways, Bye!
Danniestarr xxxx
