Now ok this is my first Fanfic and this is just a part of it and I wanted
to get your opinion on it before I post it so please read this small part
and tell me if I should post the whole story
A young girl in a school uniform and deep blue gray eyes and dark black hair walked into school. She noticed that every one there was very quiet and a lot of people were warring black.
Miroku, Sango what happened she questioned her friends who had been try to ignore her
Miroku was the first to speak we have some bad news Kagome it's Kikyou ..she's. she's. dead.
Grief flooded Kagome's eyes and a small gasp ex-caped her lips.
Kikyou the most popular girl in school had died she was the best at every thing even better than Kagome and every one had loved her.
Sango Kagome started but was interrupted by her friend
It was horrible as soon as word got around every one stopped speaking and just started to mope around that was in till Lisa got to school they told her what happened and she just started cracking up laughing it was really scaring every one and finally the cops had to come and take her away cause they said that she was disturbing every one and when they took her away she started welling THAT BITCH FINALLY GOT WHAT SHE DISRVES AND NOW I CAN REST IN PEACE WHILE SHE BURNS IN HELL and she wouldn't stop laughing and it was so upsetting . Then Sango broke down crying in Miroku's arms and all Kagome could do was stare at the emptiness that was the school.
Please R*R
A young girl in a school uniform and deep blue gray eyes and dark black hair walked into school. She noticed that every one there was very quiet and a lot of people were warring black.
Miroku, Sango what happened she questioned her friends who had been try to ignore her
Miroku was the first to speak we have some bad news Kagome it's Kikyou ..she's. she's. dead.
Grief flooded Kagome's eyes and a small gasp ex-caped her lips.
Kikyou the most popular girl in school had died she was the best at every thing even better than Kagome and every one had loved her.
Sango Kagome started but was interrupted by her friend
It was horrible as soon as word got around every one stopped speaking and just started to mope around that was in till Lisa got to school they told her what happened and she just started cracking up laughing it was really scaring every one and finally the cops had to come and take her away cause they said that she was disturbing every one and when they took her away she started welling THAT BITCH FINALLY GOT WHAT SHE DISRVES AND NOW I CAN REST IN PEACE WHILE SHE BURNS IN HELL and she wouldn't stop laughing and it was so upsetting . Then Sango broke down crying in Miroku's arms and all Kagome could do was stare at the emptiness that was the school.
Please R*R