Well, this is my first story, so i would love to hear any comments! As of now, i am pretty open as to the direction of the story, so if you have any suggestions, please let me know.
Story-wide Disclaimer: I do not, nor ever will, own Naruto.
It was for only a moment that she was able to collect her shattered perception on reality. No sooner did it take for the truth to set in for a short flurry of emotions to invade her mind, each as indistinguishable from the next. She was, however, able to pick out a few distinct emotions before slipping into an unwilling subconscious state; fear, shame, panic, self-pity, failure. She was fighting a losing battle. Every moment she traveled further and further away from actuality, reluctantly being confined to a subliminal understanding of her surroundings.
Time stopped. Pain dulled. Moments blended seamlessly together. Thinking power was reduced to an all-time low.
Strings tied tightly. Very tightly. Ouch.
A limp body being thrown unceremoniously upon solid ground. Very solid indeed. Ouch.
Internal pleas to cling to life. She was getting desperate. Negotiation, self-justifications.
Reality? Out of grasp. Death? Out of the question.