This is my first story and its not very good so...review it please people!Its about Kamio.
Kamio walked slowly down the sidewalk lost in his thoughts about a certain someone.He sighed louldly causing people to turn and stare that were walking anywhere around im.He was the center of attention and he hated it.Quickly he sped up and around the corner.
Why?Why Ann-chan?Do you like him...he thought miserably.
What shocked Kamio as he walked into the gate of his yard was Ann-chan sitting on the porch dangling her legs along the side.When she saw him approach she quickly got up and ran to him and gave him a hug."Hi Kamio-kun"she said happily stepping back smiling from a blushing Kamio.He was shocked."Ann-chan why are you here?''he asked trying to hide his happiness."To see you of course"she said matter of factly with her hands behind her back.
"But why?"he asked utterly confused.
Shes at my house!!!!he thought happily.
"Lets go on a date,Kamio-kun"she said grabbing his hand and walking outside of the gate."A DATE?!"He exclaimed loudly."Yes,a date now come on"she said pulling him along.
The end.
Did anyone like my first story?I know its not very good..but can anyone review it and tell me what needs to be worked on?Well thank you!
-Squirrel