This is a Prolog to the story I am starting some characters are
Anakin Skywalker, Clone Captain Rex, Ahsoka Tano, Obi-Wan Kenobi, Clone Commander Cody, Battle Droids (All types), and Clone Troopers (Som don't have names yet). There will be OC's that the Clones and Jedi will meet, and Bounty Hunters (Of course).
There will be blood shed, clone brothers lost, huge battles, and maybe a little romance between some Clones and OC's. I might even throw in some Pirates.
Italics= thoughts
"_" = talking
'_' = talking over comlinks or someone talking from a hologram (Unless explains Ex. "Well thats your problem now," she said through the comlink.)
The story will mostly be Third person omniscient, but I might switch to First person, mini warning.
Now, I will leave you along to read the Prolog. Don't forget to tell me how I did. (Note in the 3rd paragraph, the Have it capital to emphasize.)
Pained screams escaped another trooper's mouth as they got shot down. "Sir! We need to fall back. We won't last another minute if we stay here!" Clone Captain Rex shouted over the screams, explosions, and lazer bullets that flew through the air. "Sir!" Jedi General Anakin Skywalker wasn't listening to him. "Men, fall back!" Rex knew he would be in trouble later, but better alive and in trouble than dead.
"Rex! What Are You Doing!" Anakin shouted at Rex," We can't fall back. We have to capture this base!"
"Sir! We're being slaughtered, we Have to fall back." Rex denied. Anakin took a second to respond. "Fine! Fall Back!"
Back at their camp, Rex went around and looked at the casualties. There were too many deaths for the first battle. "Commander Tano," Rex said into his comlink,"have you heard from the Resolute yet? I haven't had any luck." There wasn't any response for a minute, then,' The droids must be jamming our comunications with them, because I can't get through either.'
There was an explosion and people yelling. Rex grabbed his dual DC-17 hand blasters from their holsters on his kama and started shooting at the droids. We're not going to last, was Rex's last thought before he was shot and blacked out. There was a soft, "Captain!" but he blacked out before he saw who it was.