Hi guys, this is my first story, and I hope you all enjoy.
I do not originate from an English-speaking country, so maybe my writing sucks. But if it does, I don't mind you telling me.
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Hope you like it, but if you don't like it, I'm sorry I wasted your time.
The places and people of the story is not my property, Runescape is owned by Jagex, and the Inheritance cycle is owned by Christopher Paolini. The characters called ZzMSAzZ, NOOBMAISTER and Linescart, is my characters in Runescape. I will not say this again. (NOOBMAISTER is from the private servers I play).
The king of Runescape, Kingy, is made by me.
The Ancient Language in this story is taken from Christopher Paolini's list of words, and the "An introduction to the Ancient Language. By Sophie Brouwer, Susannah Dijkstra and Emma Konjin".
Enjoy. I use the Ancient Language some times, and for you to better understand, I have used '' those over it. Ex. That is a 'seithr'.
The Ancient words are in the end of the chapter, so you can see what they mean.
I will not say that again.
Again, I hope you enjoy
Eragon wake up with a terrible headache. He also felt a feeling of emptiness. "Good morning, Saphira" he said. He opened his eyes, and saw that there was no Saphira, anywhere near him. The feeling of emptiness grew larger. Eragon opened his mind, and scanned the area he woke up. No one there, he found out soon enough. Except some strange bugs and insects, but that did not worry him, much.
"Saphira!" He yelled in his mind, but to no avail. Eragon started to cry, for he had never felt such an emptiness in his mind since, well, before he found Saphira's egg in the Spine. Eragon had heard stories about Riders loosing their dragons, and that was how they felt. Eragon thought Saphira was dead. The tears flooded Eragons eyes, and he started sobbing. He told himself he should stop, but the terrible emptiness was too great. Eragon stood up, only too fall down on his knees. He wore leather garments, covering him from feet to neck. His head was uncovered. Eragon wore his sapphire-blue cape, and his fathers ring, Aren. Eragon noticed he did not have his blue sword, Brisingr, or the magical hammer-necklace Eragon had gotten as a gift from Gannel the dwarf.
Eragon became aware of someone coming towards him. A man in strange armor came in Eragons direction. The man wore red armor, large and seemingly heavy, which covered his upper body like a superprotective platebody. His legs were in thin, but also seemingly heavy, red platelegs. The man's boots were brown and looked like an extremely hard type of leather. The man's gloves were dark and made of metal. On the head was a strange mask. A pointy mask that looked like a white wolf's head. The man came closer, and Eragon tried to read the man's mind, to find the man's intentions. Eragon could not reach the man. He could search the area, but Eragon could not come in the man's mind. There was no wall; there was no way for Eragon to get into the man's mind. The man were few feats away and started to talk.
"Why are you crying? Are you just a little loser? Haha, your no one, you piece of shit! Get out of my way before I shut your mouth with my Dragon Claws!" Eragon got really angry. Who was this guy, to treat him like that when Saphira was probably dead? Who was this guy, to mock him in that way. I will show this 'dúmbreptri' what happens if he messes with me! Eragon though.
The man started to lough when Eragon stood up, and hit the man in the platebody, but jumped back as a great pain shook his belly. The platebody had a huge dent, in the shape of Eragon's right hand. The man got angry and took on two red gloves, in the shape of claws. The man's claws looked very sharp, Eragon noted. The man attacked Eragon, and quickly cut into the leather armor. Eragon jumped back in the speed of an elf, and saw blood from many places around his body. The man took off his claws and took up a large maul. It was totally gray and did not look like much, but Eragon could see it was heavy. The man ran for Eragon and wanted to kill him.
Then there came a voice. "Hey ZzMSAzZ! Got any cabbages?" The man looked really confused and looked into the sounds direction. A man, who looked like a beggar, came into view. "Ehh. What you want?" The man with the maul asked who now got the name ZzMSAzZ. The beggar said. "I want some cabbages. Do you have some?" The beggar walked up to ZzMSAzZ, and got the answer. "No! I don't got any cabbages! Go away, NOOBMAISTER! I gotta kill this sucker!"
NOOBMAISTER turned his head in Eragons direction, and asked, "You want a cabbage?" Eragon said, "Yes please". The beggar tossed Eragon a cabbage the size of a baby's head. Eragon started to eat, and his cuts evaporated. It tasted like, well, cabbage, and was not the best he had eaten, but it made good. NOOBMAISTER tossed Eragon another cabbage, and then another. He ate them all. ZzMSAzZ was furious, pushed NOOBMAISTER out of the way, and rushed for Eragon. NOOBMAISTER ran faster, and stood in ZzMSAzZ's way.
"Got any cabbages? Please, I need cabbages. I really need them and I don't want to pluck them myself. Please, please, please. Need cabbages. Need cabbages. Need cabbages. Please, I need cabbages." ZzMSAzZ turned red with anger and yelled back. "I will report this! This is your last day on Runescape!" NOOBMAISTER made a yawn, and said, "Don't think so. I am a friend of Andrew Gower, and he watches me right now, laughing. If anyone is banned, it's you! However, I can hold back my report if you give me 40 thousand cabbages. Ok?"
ZzMSAzZ, ran away and left scorch marks wherever he went. Eragon laughed, and said, "Thank you NOOBMAISTER, my honor says I will protect you in the future, and you will be my friend." "Oh, I don't need a guardian, I only need cabbages. You have one?" Eragon shook his head. "Ah well, so you are new here? And you don't have to call me NOOBMAISTER, only call me Noob."
Wow, I can't believe that I am actually done, it took a long time writing this chapter. I hope you enjoyed it, for I certainly did. Tell me what you think. If it sucked, tell me what sucked. If it was good, tell me what was good. I love getting reviews; I totally read all of them. Tell me what I can do to improve my writing. If you want, tell me the rules of writing. As I have said, I am not an American, or from any other English-speaking country, (I am a Norwegian).
Brisingr = Fire, also Eragon's sword.
Dúmbreptri= dumb-ass.