FPOV
ok note to self... no more midnight here i am chained to the wall in the STUIP SCHOOL!
Wost day ever to be captured! i was finally goning to tell max i loved her...gah! Why did she have to be so hot?
Flashback (Max, fang, iggy, 10 years old)
My skin stard to burn like i was zipped with 2,000 volts of electriciy... ow thats gonna hurt in the morning..as well as the millions of other cuts from white coats here.
I looked over at the girl in the cage next to mine, she is beautiful, her name is Maximum... i think i umm never talked to her. she has brown hair with sweet chocolate brown eyes.
Right now she is in her cage crying, i guess she got back from testing, i cant take it any more, the sound of her crying just kills me.
"hey.." say to her through the bars, she suddenly whips her head arounld to face me, i guess she didn't think i could talk.
"we're going to be ok."I tell her trying to put hope into my voice that i don't really have,"we're going to escape."She smiles and I know by seeing her eyes filled with hope that i have meet my true love.
Flashback ends
"Test time!" a white coat yells I growl at the white coat and he takes a step back. Until about 30 earasers come out of the door.I go quietly to avoid injury.
They take me through hallways stopping in a white room and ,bringing me to my knees in front of a cage.
Inside is a girl about 12 or 13 with dark brown hair and almost black eyes.
"Remember her Fang?" an eraser sneered,"This is Shadow."
Flashback (school escape)
"FANG!, IGGY! NUDGE! GAZZY!"Max yells carrying Angel in her arms, soon everyone except max, angel and me are gone.
"NO!" I scream,"I NEED TO SAVE HER!"I yell to max as i kneel in front of Shadow's cage.
'm sorry fang, we need to leave" max tells me with sadness in her voice.
"ok..." i sigh as i stand up after whispering to her "i will come back and find you"
Then i spread my wings and fly, leaving my sister to die in the devil's arms.
Flashback ends
"Sister?" i whisper with tears welling up in my eyes.
"yes fang its me." Shadow says while tears are now falling down our faces, overwhelmed with joy.
"Say your goodbyes" the white coat says, pulling out a gun,and letting Shadow out of her cage.
"you see fang, it was never maximum we wanted t was you. without you the flock will fall apart, and then nothing will stop us. oh, and don't worry Shadow will deliver your last words."
I say my good byes and after my heart was poured out the emotions i held over the years came out and soon i was sobbing as the white coat aimed his gun.
"I love you fang. I'll never forget you i always remembered you and i always knew you would come"shadow Yelled to me as an eraser held her back.
And that was the last thing i ever heard as i heard the shot, i felt a very sharp pain near my chest and just as the world turned black i tried to tell my sister that i loved her.
Very sorry it was short, This is my first fanfic please comment I have the next chapter typed up just tell me if i should post it. Criticism is welcome!