An Exile's Son, and a Sith Lord's Daughter

This series is about The Jedi Exile's Son, and Revan's daughter.
The Jedi Exile is female, and Revan is female as well.
(I know that canon Revan is male, but I usually play as FemRevan.)

(Star Wars Knights of The Old Republic is owned by Bioware, this is purely fanfiction)

This is my first time posting a fanfiction, but not my first time writing one.
Please R&R.

Chapter One: The Ebony Haired Girl

Coroscunt, Jedi Temple

Where the heck was she?

Anakin Rand, a sixteen year old boy paced impatiently around the temple, scanning for his friend.
After searching nearly every room, he found her, leaning against the wall outside the temple.

Twisting her long ebony hair around her index finger in boredom, Adina looked up, and waved to him

He waved back, and ran over to where she stood waiting. Clutching the stitch in his side, and gasping for air, he asked her where she was going.

"Dantooine," she said, "I'm going to the crystal caves."

"You're almost finished your project then?"

The girl nodded "It wasn't easy hiding it from my parents," she said, "They are going to freak out when they see it though."

"Not as much as the Council will," Anakin told her, "since an untrained Force Sensitive wielding a lightsaber is usually called a Dark Jedi, or a Sith."

The girl shrugged "I'm having trouble deciding what colour it should be," she said,

Anakin suggested that she wait until the Jedi Masters allowed her to train before deciding the colour of her blade.

"Will you come with me?" Adina asked "Dad would probably ground me if he found out I travelled alone."

He hesitated, wringing his hands thinking about what trouble she would get up to if he did not accompany her "I will," the boy agreed, "if you'll come back to Telos straight after. I don't want your father worrying about you."

Adina patted Anakin on the shoulder, and shook her head.

"He'll only worry if someone tells him where I've been," she said "As long as we don't run into anyone he knows, I should be safe from being grounded."

Anakin sighed heavily

"Okay," he said "let's get going before Mical finds out what you're up to,"

The pair headed toward the dock, and boarded a ship bound for Dantooine.

( I know this chapter was a bit short, but I want to know what people think before I post the rest.)