Watching Chapter 1
Hello! This is my first fanfic, so please don't yell at me or anything. Please review and tell me if I should keep working on it!
I know it's short, but the other chapters will be much longer. This one's just to see if you like it.
"Look at them, walking out there," Hokuto Umeda remarked, gazing out the nurse's office window in Osaka High School at a group of teenagers walking to class. "Why does Mizuki have to be soooooo oblivious to everything?!" He said, as he watched Mizuki Ashiya, the only girl, being looked at in such a way that can convey nothing but passion and true love. This was obviously an all-boys school, because if you looked at them all, everyone was wearing ties, collared shirts, pants, and had no (visible-ahem, Mizuki) women's, well, you know. She had come all the way to Japan from America and disguised herself as a boy, all for just one glimpse of the famous track star she so obviously adorned. As he thought this, the high jump star, Izumi Sano, diverted his gaze away from her to look at that repulsive, blond-haired monkey who was talking, with growing loudness, to Mizuki.
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