My first fanfict, please read & review, please? *trying my puppy eyes on you* ;)
Summary: Set in the confrontation between the Cullens and the Volturi during BP. What if Alice and Jasper did came back with Nahuel but it's isn't enough to save Renesmee? Who's that other girl? Why does she call Bella her sister?
Disclaimer: I don't own Twilight, as much as I want to own Edward too, but he belongs to Bella and they both belong to Stephenie Meyer. I just a kid that she let me play with her dolls…
My Past?
Chapter 1: Newcomers
B POV
Alice came back! She came back with another vampire hybrid with his aunt. His name is Nahuel, while his aunt, Huilen. Their 150 years in this life wasn't enough to prove to the Volturi that my daughter, Renesmee is harmless. We were all prepared to fight as I saw Felix and Demetri crouched slightly.
This is it; I had must strengthen my shield. Seeking for any loopholes, I can't help but to squeeze Edward's hand tighter. This may be our last chance together, as a family. With my daughter on Jacob's horse-sized werewolf back, our uneven line was suddenly flank by more people.
Instincts tells me that I should attack these newcomers who are in a cloak similar to the Volturi, the only difference is their cloaks are white in color. On the other hand, my non-beating heart tells me to wait patiently and that whatever that is happening is giving us benefits. I shook my mind out of what I was thinking. I must be mad, but I trust my instincts anyway.
Several gasps could be heard from around us. Some were growling at the newcomers, some were hissing at them. The Volturi guards who were half their way to attack us, halted. They stopped about 50 yards before reaching us. Apparently the newcomers brought threat to them. But, Marcus' bored expression had changed. It's not shock, no, it's not even bloodlust, but there seemed to be something that excites him. Did Jasper use his gift on Marcus? I think not. Jacob was ready to run for it, a sudden voice started speaking.
"Bella? Is that you? Bella?"
I turned around to find a girl, with the same hair color as mine but brown eyes. She resembled me, at least the old me that is. She's wearing a white cloak too, but her cloak is different than the others. A few moments of silence passed by and were interrupted by the sound of beating hearts.
I know it's short… But I'm not really confident… Please read & review… Should I or should I not continue?