Hello! Second fanfic! I'm dyslexic so be kind! by the way I'm doing this to improve my writing and punctuation! :)
Harry's eyes grew wide. Panic swept across his mind 'why were they there?'. Across the park in the middle of a field was all the order. He quickly looked were staring at harry's muggle friends. Jake Gills was lying on top of the bridge with, Emily Watson on top of him with a bottle of vodka in her hand. Lucas Mills's sat next to Linda Halton and the sound system which was blaring out Wiley heatwave. A half empty bottle of vodka laid at their feet. They were smoking something. Harry didn't remember the name through his own clouded brain. By alcohol and drugs. As he laid on the slide upside down watching scarlet Jones dance.
"hey harry watch this!"shouted scarlet
As she bent near his head and kissing him hard and her tongue along his lip before Harry opened his mouth to battle with her tongue. She lent back and look at him expectedly
"so?..."
Harry threw his head back and laughed picking up the half empty vodka bottle he took a gulp and left some in his mouth and leaned forward and kissed scarlet transferring the liquid over to her. Breaking of the kiss
" sexy as always baby"
Harry pushed her up as the song change to all fired up by the Saturdays. He climbed to his feet taking the smoke from Lucas's taking a drag and passing it to scarlet.
" i think we better go now" said luca noticing the order
" yeah we better" said Jake
They slowly collected their stuff and walked the opposite way to the order scarlet jumped to harry's back for a piggy back ride. Leaving the order standing shell shocked wondering if they got the right person.

Please reveiw tell me if this is any good