Frist fanfic ever please,no hard comments please. oh and english isn't my fisrt languge so i do LOTS of mistakes;)

Sam's P.O.V

"Sam,go buy me a 37 Alcolique or i'm going to call Dave..." my mom said.
"Right away," I said wiht fear as I rusht by the door for the 49 time of the week.I know,i'm Samanta Pucket,I shoud not be fearing him but Dave-my mom's boyfriend of the month-is the worst person I know me I went to juvie and jail for... well you is a crazy animal scientis so not a I enter the store,I saw worked there and he is the only person that nows about this for a really long time even Freddie or Carly.I heard a rushing sound behind me.I look there but nobody was there.'I must be crazy, almost nobody is comming,well then,let's get back to our ham'
"Hey Mike,I said happy he was there, can I have 37 Super Alcolique please?"
"No"he answerd ruddly"Sammy,you have to stop this,it can't last forever and do you have the money to pay for this and all the other things?"
"Well,give me those stupid super alcolique or I wont have to worid about comming here anymore"I said as quiet and hard I could.I still heard noise from behind me so I look back an still,saw nobody.
"Ok"said Mike as he gave me the box"That will be 148,83 please"
I gave him the money and put it on my I was in the middle of the way,I saw someone I knew with is arms crows and looked at me angrily.
"Freddie?!"

Freddie's P.O.V
"Sam, what are you doing?!"I holmost scream"You are too young to have that!"
"Please,Freddie,do not scream and froget what you saw here O.K?" she said sofly but I could feal that she was scared.
"What is going on here Sam?"I said as gentle as I could
"Is your mom at your home now?" she ask,
"yeah,why?"I said worried
she look less tense and said:
"I'm going to come at your house in a hour and Blonde Girl you'll see then is me and do not be scared ok?By now"and she start to run to her house.I start running after her telling her to stop but she doesn't seam to slow she got to her home,a big car past by me so I didn't knew what hapen to last thing I saw was a male's hand grabing her and the box I got home 45 , my mom ask me were I was
"I've went to see Sam and tell her I want my..."
"Samantha? Is that little girl O.K?"she said really fast
"well she had a box with alcool, and she is coming here in not ?"I answerd wondering
"No time to talk,got get my first aid emergienci one"she said before she rusht too the medical room.
Exacly 30min after,they heard a door bell"I will get that!" I said.
When I open the door, I saw I thought she was said the girl with blonde hair is her an the girl in front of me was totally , she had blonde hair but teinted of jeans and shirt was teinted of red too and cut at some places,with the didn't had shoes just blood on her she raised her head it was almost all red with blue eyes but what hit me the most is that on the ground,there was alot of blood and water slowly getting on the floor.
"Help me, please Freddie"she said as she fainted in my arms.

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