okay, i have put this story on another eragon fanfic site and i want to see what ya'll think of it. read and review if you want to read anymore.

Looking sadly out the side of her egg Saphira thought, Where am I now? I am tired of being passed around. When am I going to find my Rider? It was night out and Saphira and three elves were going through a forest. Looking through her egg she saw Urgals hiding behind trees.

Look at those strange things. She thought to herself, snickering. Then all of a sudden they jumped out from behind the trees and started attacking the elves. When the female elf that was carrying her egg saw them, she started killing them. Ha ha ha. They are being killed by ONE LITTLE FEMALE ELF! thoughtSaphira, laughing a little harder. Then she saw the shade. And look at him. I mean, he is pale ugly, and so funny looking! And what is up with his hair? Who in his right mind would have red hair? And how would you get red hair? By now she was laughing very hard.

The elf suddenly lifted her up in the air and Saphira stopped laughing. Wait. What does she think she is doing? Huh? What does she think she is doing?

Saphira stopped complaining for a minute and when she did she saw that the other two elves weren't with them anymore. Then she looked up at the shade. She saw he was lifting up his hand to hurt the elf. Wait. The ugly one is going to hurt her. Hey you. Elf! Hello. Saphira was trying to get the elf's attention but it was not working.

Ahhhhhhh! screamed Saphira as she went flying through the air.

Then suddenly she hit the ground. Ouch. Can I have a softer landing next time? Saphira mumbled to herself.

Wait. Where am I? She looked over and could not figure out where she was. She saw that she was in another section of forest. While she was trying to figure out where she was, she saw a boy coming towards her.

Ooh! My Rider sense is tingling. Wait. That tickles! Saphira started laughing, but stopped when the boy poked at her with an arrow and jumped back.

What? Does he think I will reach through this shell and bit him? She thought angrily. I think I will wait to hatch.

At least he is taking me with him, she thought when he picked her up. I wonder what else can go wrong today because everything but finding my Rider has been bad today.