This is my first story please review, Im just starting.
Lizzie McGuire At the Movie theater, Lizzie, Gordo, and Miranda.
Lizzie: Wow it's packed.
Miranda: The line is humongous!
Gordo: I say we leave and hit the mall.
Lizzie and Miranda nodded and they started to walk out. And went to the mall. When they got there, Miranda spotted Ethan Craft, but didn't want Lizzie to know so she quickly came up with an excuse.
Miranda: I have to go. to the bathroom I will be right back.
Lizzie was staring down a beautiful scarf and Gordo was staring down Lizzie, so they didn't pay much attention.
Lizzie and Gordo: Sure whatever.
Miranda walked over the Ethan casually and started talking.
Miranda: Hi Ethan,
Ethan quickly jumped and turned at Miranda.
Ethan: Whoa Miranda, you like scared me.
Miranda giggled
Mirada: Oh sorry, I I I just stopped in and I saw you and and-
Ethan looked at a beautiful scarf with silk colors, then he looked at Miranda.
Ethan: Miranda Your eyes, they're beautiful. like this scarf.
Ethan pulled up the scarf off the rack but it was tangled so the whole rack fell splat on Ethan. He crawled out and started talking again forgetting he know a whole rack down. The Spanish store keeper came over to him and starting yelling at him.
Ethan: Whoa dude.
Ethan reached down and picked up the whole rack with one hand and stood it up properly. The store keeper scowled and went back behind his desk. Miranda: So, where were we.
Ethan: Miranda, we should totally hang out, like a movie or something.
Miranda was shocked she remembered the movie theater was packed though.
Miranda: I loved too but Ethan me and my friends-
Miranda stopped. She forgot about her friend and lot track of time.
Miranda: The movie theater will be packed
She said as she started toward the door.
Ethan went up on his tip toes as the crown separated them.
Ethan: My cousin works there, he get us there for free, food and everything! Pick you up are 7:00?
Miranda: Gave a quick thumbs up and went back to the scarf place. She didn't see Lizzie and Gordo anywhere. She headed toward the door to see if they went out side, but before she reached it she saw Lizzie's blonde hair near the bathroom. She decided Lizzie was waiting for her but then she noticed she was kissing someone, but not just anyone, it was GORDO!
Well that's my first chapter please review~ Thanks!
Lizzie McGuire At the Movie theater, Lizzie, Gordo, and Miranda.
Lizzie: Wow it's packed.
Miranda: The line is humongous!
Gordo: I say we leave and hit the mall.
Lizzie and Miranda nodded and they started to walk out. And went to the mall. When they got there, Miranda spotted Ethan Craft, but didn't want Lizzie to know so she quickly came up with an excuse.
Miranda: I have to go. to the bathroom I will be right back.
Lizzie was staring down a beautiful scarf and Gordo was staring down Lizzie, so they didn't pay much attention.
Lizzie and Gordo: Sure whatever.
Miranda walked over the Ethan casually and started talking.
Miranda: Hi Ethan,
Ethan quickly jumped and turned at Miranda.
Ethan: Whoa Miranda, you like scared me.
Miranda giggled
Mirada: Oh sorry, I I I just stopped in and I saw you and and-
Ethan looked at a beautiful scarf with silk colors, then he looked at Miranda.
Ethan: Miranda Your eyes, they're beautiful. like this scarf.
Ethan pulled up the scarf off the rack but it was tangled so the whole rack fell splat on Ethan. He crawled out and started talking again forgetting he know a whole rack down. The Spanish store keeper came over to him and starting yelling at him.
Ethan: Whoa dude.
Ethan reached down and picked up the whole rack with one hand and stood it up properly. The store keeper scowled and went back behind his desk. Miranda: So, where were we.
Ethan: Miranda, we should totally hang out, like a movie or something.
Miranda was shocked she remembered the movie theater was packed though.
Miranda: I loved too but Ethan me and my friends-
Miranda stopped. She forgot about her friend and lot track of time.
Miranda: The movie theater will be packed
She said as she started toward the door.
Ethan went up on his tip toes as the crown separated them.
Ethan: My cousin works there, he get us there for free, food and everything! Pick you up are 7:00?
Miranda: Gave a quick thumbs up and went back to the scarf place. She didn't see Lizzie and Gordo anywhere. She headed toward the door to see if they went out side, but before she reached it she saw Lizzie's blonde hair near the bathroom. She decided Lizzie was waiting for her but then she noticed she was kissing someone, but not just anyone, it was GORDO!
Well that's my first chapter please review~ Thanks!