A Playdate Gone Bad! Chapter 1: The Innocent Playing Turned Around!, a screenplays fanfic

Ok, I'm basing this FanFic on what happened to me and my friends. We thought that we heard sounds coming from Coyotes', But it was just hunting dogs. But I am twisting this FanFic! And I'm not using real names, Just nicknames.

A Playdate Gone Bad!

Chapter 1: The Innocent Playing Turned Around!

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Me and my friends were all invited to Renee's house. It was her birthday, And I got her a card that would make 'em laugh their head off! So we had food, Presents, Yada, Yada, Yada. Then we went to play outside. We were going to play Eternal Sonata, And we did. We played Eternal Sonata Pirates, Renee was Dolce, I was Kat, Belle was Rai (Or Rei.), And Lizzie was Vidia (There were more people, Like Gracie and Renee's evil little sister.). And after awhile we really got into character, But then we heard some howling. "What was that?" I ask, Afraid of the answer.

I was really close to Renee, She was like my best friend EVER! Well, I have alot of best friends. Anyway, She crouched down a little, Seeming like she wanted to hear more. "Huh!!! Maybe its Coyotes."

"Coyotes?!" We were a little away from the others, They were a little down the street, But we could see them.

"We have to tell everybody!" She was a little panicked, But shes usually never scared.

"Lets go!" I was on a scooter (I think.) And Renee was on her feet. We almost blasted out of the little area and went going down the street like rockets!

Me and Renee got to them. They weren't very far. Renee was talling them about the Coyotes while they ran, I rolled with them. Devil (Renee's little sister.) was the slowest. Well, Thats to be expected when she was the smallest.

Anyway, We walked (And rolled!) to the garage, Fearing. Renee told everybody it was fine, And we didn't need to go inside since they hate light. Me and her went outside the garage (The thing was open.) and looked around a little bit.

"Oh! They're just hunting dogs!" Renee then ran back inside the garage, With everybody scared half-to-death, With me running behind. "Guys! Its just hunting dogs!" I added with a 'Yeah!'.

I had some things against Gracie. Like when Renee was hiding with D, She didn't help us look for her! Even Devil helped Belle and Me try to look for her! I ended up not liking Renee after that, But we made-up, As always. Anyway Again, Gracie disagreed.

"Are you sure?" Belle asked, Still scared.

"Yeah I'm sure! Coyotes don't howl!" Renee reassured. (This is where the FanFic goes, Er, Different. Way different than what happened.) "You have to promise not to tell."

I agreed, And so did everyone else. Of course Gracie didn't. Everyone convinced her to promise, But she wanted to tell her parents, Thats it though.

"Look, I'll go in there and prove that its not Coyotes'." Renee said, Not panicked anymore.

"Don't go in there. You might get hurt." Lizzie said calmly and worriedly. We all protested a little bit before Renee finally just said.

"I'm just gonna prove it. Its not like I'm gonna die or anything." Everyone reluctantly nodded. Then Renee started walking towards the forest. Everyone watched sadly, Including me.

"Good luck." I said, Everybody watching Renee go into the forest.

A few minutes later, We waited in the garage where light is. We were all kicking our feet, Occasionally shuffling them, Waiting for Renee to come back. We ended up falling asleep.

About 15 Minutes Later... Renee comes running out of the forest, Her clothes ripped, Blood coming from her nose and arm.

"Guys! RUN!!!!" Renee yelled, Running off passed the direction of us.

"What?" We all said in unision, Waking up. We saw Renee and watched in horror. Then the words sunk into our mind.

As soon as we jumped off of the stuff we looked at what was in front of us.

Coyotes.

They were showing there teeth, Ready to attack. Until Renee came back with a steel pipe. "DIE!!!!!" They all turned around when Renee start beating them with the pipe (Not to hard, Just where it would stun them.). "Guys run now!!!"

We nodded and started running behind the house, Into the woods there. By the time we were about half way to the forest, Renee was running with us. The Coyotes were dazed for just a little while, Then snapped out of it. They started chasing us, But when they entered the forest, We were gone! Or were we? We were actually hiding in the trees'. They didn't spot us, And I was relieved of that (Devil went inside after the Coyote attack by the way.). They weren't gonna give up though. They settled in a place near there, Unfortunately. It was far away, But they could still see us coming. We were terrified, But Renee wasn't about to give up.

"What do we do, Renee?" I asked, Terrified to death.

"I don't know.... But we'll find something." She answered, Unsure but not willing to give up.

We were stuck in the trees'. For now.......

How was it? I think it was good! Besides for Renee getting beat up. In this, I am named Mint. Review please! Tell me what you think, Good or bad!