Introduction
Ok I'm going to do something I don't usually do, I'm going to post a story I am still in the process of writing. Why would I do this when I've always stated, no matter where I was posting or what I was posting, that I only post completed stories? Well...for a couple of reasons. I would really like to finish this piece, but I'm struggling with it a bit. I am hoping this will motivate me to continue. Then there is the fact that I need a little help. You see, I know exactly how this story ends but getting there is proving a bit more difficult than expected. What do I include? What scenes from this vile woman's story do you want to see? I never intended to go into any great detail about the trial itself more or less planning to use it only as a way to transition into specific flashbacks, but would you, as the reader, want to see more of the trial itself? My intent is to stay entirely in Elena's POV, but if it would help you understand an event or how she arrived at this point would you want or even prefer I add another's POV here or there? So any suggestions or ideas anyone may have please feel free, actually I am begging you to, let me know either in comments or PM's. Thanks! Hope you like it.
-J
