Hey Guys! iheareveryone here! So I was wondering if I can get any feedback from this? This is just a preview from what I'm thinking to make a new story. If I get good feedback I'll start a new story called 'Growing Up', so Hoping I can get some idea's and feedback from you guys soon. Thanks! ;)
Before they crossed the old bridge above the wild waters, he looked at her and reached out, saying, "Hold my hand."
She hesitated, and shook her head. "No," came the reply.
He looked at her in confusion and repeated, "Hold my hand, I'll help you across."
Again, he got the same response. So he asked, "What? Why won't you hold my hand?"
"You hold my hand," she said, "Because I'm afraid."
"What's the difference?" he asked.
"If I hold your hand, I might let go because I'm scared," she told him, "But if you hold my hand, I know that whether I'm scared or not, you'll never let go. Ever."