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THIS IS THE REVISED VERSION OF CHAPTER ONE...HOPE YOU LIKE IT AND TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!

A.N.

Ok! So, this is my first twilight story. I'm not very good at writing fanfiction so if i suck please let me know...just dont flame me! You could say...'Your story sucks but you can do this to make it better' or 'It's ok, but do this and this next time'. I would really appreciate it! Something that i have to let yall know about me is that .BELLA. there got it off my chest. well i dont really hate her, but i do highly dislike her. Ah, and this story will be a bit...childish. I love it. hahahahaha*cough*...yea...XD

Ok, but anyways on to the story!

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My mother always told me that I shouldnt rush into a relationship. I shouldn't date until I found someone who made me happy and feel like I could fly. She always said that I should wait, because one day that someone, who would fall in love with me and only me, would appear in front of me without me having to look for him.

She was right, I looked for my special someone and I thought I had found him when I was very young, but I lost him. I looked everywhere for him, I tried to find him again but it turned out that he was never the one that I belonged with. He was merely the person that was suppose to lead me to the person that I was meant to be with.

My soulmate.

And I found out...that I was an imprint.

"I love pudding, I love cookies, I love cake! Mix it together and you get...uh...um.." I scratched my head, something I did when I was trying very hard to think. "...Pud-ke-kies!"

Today was a wonderful day. Everything had gone according to plan, the joint b-day party my bff#2 and myself were having was all set up...everything but her present. That is why I am here, in her favorite bookstore, trying to buy her a book BUT of course I got distracted by all the cooking books. I should really get back to buying her book, but these cookie, cakes,sweets looked really good.

"Lina! Aren't you suppose to do something?", I jump when I hear the whisper-yelling voice of my BFF#1 Clara. She was glaring, one eyebrow raised, arms crossed and right foot tapping...she was pissed. Probably 'cause I took her away from her favorite Tv show...what was it called...OH! Prettly Little Liars. Even though I already spoiled who 'A' was. Anyways, she grabbed my arm and dragged me to the fiction section.

My friend loved fiction books, especially those that had really hot and steamy romance...and supernatural beings...and it had to be twilight. I didn't know how she could like that book...it was so...so...so annoying! Even my own mother was in love with Taylor Lautner...yea, he was hot but...I guess, I just don't see what others see in him.

I looked around for the one book that called out to me when I saw a very strange girl sitting on the floor reading a book. I facepalmed when I saw the title...of course it had to be twilight.

"Why are you sittting in the middle of the floor? Dont you know it's rude for others trying to get by?" I facepalmed again. Leave it to Clara to be blunt. She always said what was on her mind, no matter if she hurt people's feelings or not.

The girl looked up, her red contact lenses flashing brightly for a second, at least i hope they are contacts, she had long red wavy hair, long black sweater, white shirt underneath and white skinnies. She looked very beautiful...but there was something odd about her. I tapped my chin in thought...what was odd about her? I couldn't pin point it.

"I'm sorry about this batch. She's having some...mental problems at the moment.", I stood infront of Clara trying to keep her from jumping the girl, speaking softly. My momma taught me to always be polite, after all...Actually, she forced me to treat others politely.

See my mother used to take self defense classes so she knew how to throw a punch...that stuff hurt if I disobeyed her!

The girl only noded and saw me stariing at her book, my eyebrows drawn together in disgust. "Do you like this book?", her voice was soft, angelic even, but again there was something...dangerous beneath, making us shiver.

"Twilight Saga? Not really. I mean I hate bella with a passion so I tend to just not read them." I responded, waving my hand in the air, trying to dismiss the questin. Clara had stepped behing me, using me as a shield. That batch is a scardy cat.

The girls eyes flashed with an emotion so fast that I didn't catch it, but I guess Clara did since she grabbed my arm and squeezed tightly.

"Really? And what about her do you hate?", she stood up as if not trying to scare us. She was taller than Clara and I, but everyone always is. Since I'm only five feet and clara is five feet two.

"W-well...she's whiny. She tries to do everyting by herself , I mean I know she's trying to help and all, but she always makes it go worse than it should be. She just makes everything she does seem like woman are weak. She strings in Jacob and when she should say 'enough, I only want to be friends. If you can't understand that then we should seperate ourselves for a little while until we can just be friends.', she goes on even knowing it hurts him and Edward."

I paused trying to think of other reasons why I hate her. "Um...she wants everything done when and how she says it, if its not her way then she...I don't know, she just basically says 'Its my way or no way at all'...I dont know." I finished with a sigh. I get so worked up when I talk about why I hate Bella.

The girl smiled, well more like half-smirks, showing some of her pearly white teeth and extends her hand to me. "My name is... Vickie. I agree with you completely."

I extendd my arm and smiled happily. She seemed OK now, maybe I had found a very nice new friend that could become my BFF#3. "My name is Analisa, but people call me lisa...ali...ana...or Lina...And this is my BFF#1 Clarissa but everyone calls her clara...or cris...or lara." Her hand is freezing cold but I tried not to show it. People sometimes have cold hands even without meaning to, I know I certainly do. I think it has something to do with blood flow or something.

Clara waved from behind me but it seemed that Vickie was only looking at me, which was making me nervous, since I hate when people stare at me.

"If you were in the book...would you change anything?", Vickie closed the book looking at it, finally releasing the stare on me.

Clara snorted loudly.

I smiled widely, knowing exactly what we would do if we were there. "Of course. Who wouldn't? I would...laugh at edward's sparklyness...buy the pack some shirts-",

Clara interupts me by adding, "Don't forget making bella's life a living hell. Make her even more awkward, make edward laugh like ROTFL, buy the pack pink shirts and then explain that they are supporting the cure for breast cancer...which would be true but still funny to see. Steal their shorts while they are wolf form and-"

I decide to interupt her."AND sing its raining men!" We laugh loudly and start dancing around while singing some of the song. Gotta love Vampires Suck!

Through out our little speech Vickie looked at us amused and laughed at random parts. "Good. Do that then."

Clara and I stopped dancing, looking at Vickie with confused expressions. What did she mean by that? We didn't have time to ask because Vickie winked at us and then we felt it... the floor gave out from under us, making us fall into a pit of nothingness.

"Thank you for helping me, girls, I hope you do as you just said...." As we fall down I got a glimpse of Vickie...turning into an adult, somehow her figure from a distance looked very familiar, but i couldn't think at the moment.

REWRITTEN!

AUTHORS NOTE: This is the revised version of chapter one. I added a few things, erased a few things...hope you like it. I think I like this version a lot better! Tell me what you think!

A.N So what did you guys think?

Pud-ke-kies to anyone who actually figured out who vickie was...come on it isn't that hard! hm...i do not own twilight...or anything that seemed familiar like...Vampire Suck...or Raining men...or anything like that.

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