13 going on 30.
Chapter 1
Kimi walks the corridors of her high school, she starts smiling when she sees the group of popular girls heading her way. The popular girls who call themselves the 6 chic's stop in Kimi's way.
Kimi looks up at the most popular girl and smiles "hi Angelica you looking forward to my 13th birthday party this Saturday?" Angelica smiles and reply's "yeah that's what I've come to talk to you about, I cant make it because Mrs. Filture is so up my arse with this coursework, which is a shame because Shaun really wanted to come to the party as well." Kimi's smile drops into a frown " I could do your course work for you" Angelica smiles "great so I'll be round your place Saturday with Shaun"
The popular girls carry on walking down the corridor as Phil puts his arm round Kimi and takes a picture "so you looking forward to your birthday party?" Phil says as they start walking down the corridor " yeah as a matter of fact I am" Kimi says trying to get a way from Phil " this party isn't going to make you popular you know, Angelica just likes using you" Phil says Kimi doesn't listen and walks into the science lab for her lesson.
After school.
Kimi and Phil walk home together as usual as they live just next door to each other. "cant wait for my party tomorrow its going to be so great when Angelica shows up with Shaun" Kimi said skipping slightly Phil looks at her "you know Angelicas just using you there's no way this will make you popular" Kimi slightly hits Phil's arm "their my friends and their going to be at my party tomorrow if you like it or not" Phil rubs his arm and then puts his hand in his pocket and pulls out a packet of sweets "Razzle?" Kimi hold out her hand "Oui" Phil spils a few sweets into Kimi's hand and does the same for himself and starts running into his house shouting back "Au revoir" Kimi carry's on walking up the path to her house.
Next day Kimi's birthday.
Kimi sits on a chair facing her mirror as she slaps make up on her face. Her parents walk in with a video camera and start singing happy birthday Kimi jumps on her bed and covers her face with a pillow. Kiera Kimi's mom signals Chaz to turn the camera off.
Kiera then places her hand on Kimi "what wrong hunny?" Kiera then realizes Kimi has stuffed her top with tissue paper to make it look like she has breasts "aww Kimi your time will come" Kiera starts pulling the tissue out from Kimi's top as Kimi sits up "but mom I want to be like one of these people" Kimi says pointing at models in her Poise magazine Kiera looks at it "their only models" Kimi jumps out of bed "I want to be just like them beautiful I want to be 30" Kiera looks at her daughter "you are beautiful and you will be 30 one day" Kimi throws her magazine on the floor " I want to be 30 and flirty" Chaz and Kiera decide to leave the room and as they close the door Kimi starts stuffing tissue in her top again.
Kimi then makes her way down to the basement where her party's being held she puts on a cd and plays her favorite song 'call on me' and starts dancing to it.
Phil comes walking down the stairs of the basement with a big box and sees Kimi dancing he stops for a second and watches Kimi move around. Kimi notices Phil and waves him down.
Phil comes down the rest of the steps and places the big box on a table. "Kimi this is the first part of your present hope you like it" Phil says smiling at Kimi "wow I wonder what it is" Kimi says pulling on the pink ribbon tied round it "well you how you always wanted a Barbie dream house when you were younger?" Phil says watching Kimi open her present "yeah" Kimi reply's opening the box "well I made you your very own Kimi dream house" Kimi looks amazed when she opens it "Phil… wow I dunno what to say… thank you" Kimi says giving Phil a hug "hold on theres more" Phil says pulling some wishing powder out his pocket "now make a wish" Phil says pouring the wishing dust on the dream house. Kimi is amazed and smiles but is soon distracted by the door bell.
Kimi shakes her head and quickly picks up the Kimi dream house and places it in the cupboard and races upstairs to let her other guests in. Phil sits in the basement his smile now gone.
Kimi answers the door its Angelica and the 6 chic's "hiya guys the party's downstairs in the basement" Angelica walks in and dumps her coat in Kimi's arms the others do the same. Minutes later Kimi sees Shaun and 2 other cool guys getting dropped off in a car by a cool 18 year old. She lets them in and follows them into the basement where Phil is dancing to some D.J music. "what is he listening to?" Angelica says twisting her face "em I dunno I think its his own mix" Kimi says running past everyone and switching off Phil's music and placing another cd on.
Phil looks at Kimi she's so different when with Angelica and it hurts him when he sees her like this. "well I'm going home to get the other half of your present" Phil says darting up the stairs of the basement.
Angelica puts her arm round Kimi "ok she lets play a game" Kimi smiles and reply's "what kind of game?" Angelica turns her head looking at the others "lets play 7 minutes in heaven and since you're the birthday girl you can go first. All you need to do is go in the cupboard and we'll send a guy in and he gets to do what ever he likes to you in 7 minutes" Angelica places a scarf round Kimis eyes so she cant see "and guess which wants to go first… Shaun" Kimi smiles as she is pushed into the cupboard but before Angelica closes the cupboard door she whispers something to Kimi "by the way Shaun likes going in for second base" Angelica laughs and closes the cupboard door.
Phil comes running down the stairs with a keyboard and sees angelica running up the stairs he stops her "where's Kimi?" Angelica points to the cupboard "she waiting for you in the cupboard." Phil runs down the rest of the stairs places the keyboard on the table and opens the cupboard door Kimi's still blind folded "hey I didn't think you were going to come" Kimi says smiling Phil doesn't say anything and gets closer "where are you?" Kimi says holding her hands out Phil still doesn't say anything and hold Kimi's hands he goes in for a kiss but Kimi removes her blind fold "PHIL" Kimi jumps up and runs out the cupboard "where's everyone gone? What have you done Phil?" Phil stands behind her "what they were leaving when I came back with the second part of your present" Kimi turns round "I hate you! I hate everyone!" Kimi runs into the cupboard and throws her self on the floor. "Kimi just let me ply the birthday song I wrote for you" Phil says standing on the other side of the cupboard door "I want to be 30 and Flirty." Kimi keeps repeating this as little bits of wishing dust off the dream house falls on her and make her dreams come true.
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