This is Crimsonclan's story.
As an introduction, I'd like critique as much as possible...
Thanks!
CRIMSONCLAN
Leader: Secretstar: A darkly colored she-cat with a white smudge on her forehead and green eyes
Deputy: Pebbleflight: A cream colored tom with a darker brown face, paws, and tail. He has deep blue eyes
Medicine Cat: Fernstripe: A light brown and black tabby she-cat with brown eyes. Apprentice is Demonpaw
Warriors:
Cowblotch: A black and white she-cat, with amber eyes.
Addertail: A dark brown tom with a marking on his tail that looks like an adders head. Scarlet eyes. Apprentice is Wolfpaw
Duskstripe: A white and black tabby tom with blue eyes.
Snowstudder: A pure white she-cat with blue eyes. Apprentice is Shiverpaw
Apprentices:
Wolfpaw: An all black tom with brown eyes.
Shiverpaw: A white she-cat with black paws and red eyes.