Ok I was reading this amazing fanfiction called 'To Be Good' and the sequel 'Walk me through the Valley' by Kizmet and it gave me this amazing idea for a story. This is my first fanfiction, and I'm not sure if it's frowned upon to write fanfiction about fanfiction, but that's what I'm trying to do because I can't get this story out of my head! For those of you who haven't read 'To Be Good' (you should read it, it's amazing!) a brief description of the scenario is this: Yukio went a little insane after Father Fujimoto died, and ended up encouraging Rin to hurt himself in the hopes that he would become so weak that the Vatican would leave him alone and he would be safe. He did this by encouraging Rin to purify himself with holy water – the demon equivalent of acid basically. Yukio got sent to Brazil to keep him away from Rin – for them both to heal – and Rin still has issues drawing Kurikara – Yukio convinced him his demon aura is evil and makes everyone around him hate him, though the other exwires' friendship and support is greatly helping Rin, he still has issues. Also Shura is with Yukio in Brazil, and Angel has been teaching Rin swordsmanship (it started off abusive, then Bon stepped in and Angel's gradually getting better, though he still pretty much hates all things demonic, and actually started teaching Rin instead of just beating him up). Okay, there ends the similarities in my story and Kizmet's. (You really should read it though, it will help you understand my story tremendously)

In my universe, Satan is getting tired of waiting. He wants Assiah to be his NOW. He's opened numerous portals into Assiah, sending hordes of demons into Assiah to claim it as his own. The True Cross Knights are stretched thin, and the exwires are busier than ever helping defend Assiah. Then everything changes with the arrival of Hell's only Queen. Though it's a false title (there are a two BIG reasons why, but I can't give spoilers yet!). Will she bring about Assiah's destruction? Or be it's savior?

"We can't hold them off much longer!" Bon yelled desperately. Even with the expert team under Angel's command, plus the exwires and Rin, they were having trouble keeping the demon horde from reaching the small town. They had been sent to destroy a portal along with Angel's team (yes, True Cross was THAT shorthanded) to protect the little town, from one of the biggest portals that had ever appeared. Though Rin had had some success destroying the smaller ones, this one was proving an especially difficult challenge.

"We gotta give Mephisto enough time to destroy the portal!" Rin yelled back, slashing a demon to ribbons. But more and more kept pouring out of the portal. Even Mephisto and Amaimon were looking pretty ragged by now. All of them were exhausted. But they'd almost reached the portal, any moment now…

Suddenly, the portal convulsed in on itself, and the very air quaked. The exwires looked at each other, confused. Neither Mephisto, nor Rin were even near the portal. What was going on? Suddenly the portal exploded, hurtling a golden flaming object towards the earth, then the portal dissipated into thin air. The impact of the object knocked everyone within a mile off their feet. Mephisto and Amaimon's eyes widened.

"No, it can't be…" Mephisto muttered incredulously. Angel looked at him sharply. Their fears were confirmed when the flaming object stood up, staring at them from the huge crater in the earth where it had landed. Her golden tail swished. Vivid green-blue eyes with bright sparks of gold studied the situation. The woman's heavy, platelike armor didn't make a noise as she jumped out of the crater, landing with a massive thud. Suddenly, the golden flame was everywhere, burning the demons to a crisp within seconds, then the flames were gone. The woman brushed her thick braid behind her shoulder, it was almost long enough to reach her waist. Her hair was a red-brown, with bright streaks of gold running throughout. She surveyed the battlefield, her gaze lingering briefly on Mephisto and Amaimon, who remained frozen, then turned to walk away, seeing no further opponents.

"HEY!" Angel roared from behind her. She paused.

"Demon, you will be brought into custody of the Knights of the True Cross, or be executed here, which will it be?" He said strongly, ignoring the motions of Mephisto and Amaimon, who were desperately (and somewhat comically) pleading for him to shut his mouth. The woman merely rolled her eyes and kept walking. Angel drew his sword. The woman stiffened, then turned to give him a malevolent glare. Before he could take a step she was there in front of him. With amazing speed and agility, despite the heavy armor, she knocked the sword out of his hand, and pinned him to the ground in less than a second, shoving his face into the mud.

"Hmph." Her audible disdain was evident, and she got up and walked off, suddenly disappearing into what looked like golden dust. The exwires gaped. What had just happened? Angel sat up from the ground in shock.

"Ladies and gentlemen, you've all just done the impossible," Mephisto said quietly, an expression of shock still on his face. "You've just survived an encounter with Hell's one and only Queen."

Amaimon's lollipop was half hanging out of his mouth, before he snapped it shut.

"I can't believe little sister just let him go, you know how defensive she gets," he said looking at Mephisto. Mephisto barked out a laugh.

"This… this changes the whole game… But if she's Satan's pawn, why wouldn't she attack?" He mused.

"Why didn't you attack?! We were ordered to exterminate all the demons and close the portal…"

"She's insane." Mephisto said, coolly cutting Angel off.

"She is one, if not THE most powerful demons there is, and none of us lacked so much intelligence as to confront her," he said disdainfully. "She's a brilliant tactician, and I've yet to see a fighter that can match her skill. Her demonic powers are unique, and equally impressive. And of course, there's the fact that she's insane. She has good reason to be of course. Ultimately not someone you want your foe to be able to utilize."

"So what do we do?" Rin asked, the first of the exwires to respond, shock still glassing their eyes. Mephisto shrugged.

"Wait and see how this turns out." A smile curled his lips. "Oh, things just got very interesting…"

Finally away from prying eyes, she let her armor dissolve, shivering at the sudden, almost sinister lack of weight. She hated taking it off, but she needed all her power focused on healing right now. She put a hand on the wall in the alley to stay upright. Can't always rely on my flames to save my ass, gotta get healed… Though her injuries were healing much more quickly, they were so severe it would be awhile before she was healed. Suddenly she grinned, wiping blood off the corner of her mouth. I did it… I finally escaped… I'm finally free... Amara… I'm home…

Please comment and review - I really hope I'm not offending anyone by posting this (you know, the fanfic of a fanfic thing) I'd love to hear your opinions!