"Al!"
Ten year old Edward Elric looked frantically around for his younger brother. All he could see was the crackling light, his own blood, and
Alphonses' clothes left limp by the alchemical array that was supposed to bring their mother back. Not.....not this.....
"Al! Alphonse!", Ed, on his hands and knees, went through every equation, every line, every measurement, for what they did wrong.
"This....Shouldn't have happe- DAMN IT!!!!!", When Edward looked back to asses himself he found.....
A PAINLESS LESSON IS ONE WITHOUT ANY MEANING.
He found that his left leg was missing. He didn't feel the loss with the adrenaline rushing through his system causing him to sweat and
tremble. He pounded his right fist against the blood-stained ground in panic, fear, and anger.
"I've lost it....!!!"
ONE WHO DOES NOT SACRIFICE ANYTHING CANNOT ACHIVE ANYTHING.
That is the moment that Edward started on his path. He'll see the ....thing...that was supposed to be his and Alphonses' mother. He'll
attempt a transmutation that will bind his younger brothers, Alphonses', soul to a suit of armor, and succeed. In the process he will lose his right
arm.
This is the beginning to a long, treacherous road.
He knows this but, he will do anything to make
it right because, this was all his fault and, he knew it.
Authors Note:
Well, this is my first attempt at writing fanfiction so, I just used the prologue of Fullmetal Alchemist as the basis.
Like in my art class I attempted to copy an already existing piece of work. I hope I did it justice. :)
It would be nice if you guys gave me some feed back because I'm new to writing and I have self-confidence issues.