Hello so this is actually the first fanfic I ever wrote and I re-wrote it since it was so crappy and stuff. I hope you enjoy it!
Oh since this is own of my (super) old stories, there hasn't been any war yet and Tobi is still Tobi.
Disclaimer: Naruto and all the characters belong to their rightful creator and not me. I only own my OCs. (sadly)
It was a bright and sunny morning in Konohagakure. All was fine and dandy until…
A girl with long black hair which reached the middle of her back and a long fringe that covered her right eye yawned and sat up on her bed. Apparently she lived alone in a small apartment.
"Good morning world!" she exclaimed as she got up.
The doorbell rang.
"Who could that be?" she asked no one in particular. She slowly made her way to the door and opened it, revealing two girls who looked around her age.
The first girl had black-brown hair which was tied in a small ponytail. Her eyes were black and she did not look very happy to be there. The other girl had long black hair which hung a little below her shoulders. Her eyes were also black and she looked too happy to be there.
"Oi Cho! We have a mission," the first girl stated.
"Oh. Just give me a minute…" Cho replied and rushed into her room.
She washed up, grabbed her ninja attire and her ninja tools and her always packed backpack and appeared at her door again. All within five minutes.
"Good morning Cho-senpai!" the other girl chirped happily.
Cho partially ignored her and said, "Lets go…"
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"What is the mission, Hokage-sama?" Cho asked.
"There have recently been more intelligence coming in about the Akatsuki, an evil organisation whose goal is to capture all the Jinchuuriki. I want you, Hikari and Mai to track their whereabouts and kill them, if possible. This is a very dangerous S-rank mission and I am sending the three of you because I trust that you all know what to do and how to act," Tsunade replied calmly.
"Yes, Hokage-sama!" all three shouted and disappeared immediately.
"Tsunade-sama, do you think three jonins are enough for this mission?" Shizune asked from where she stood, holding Ton Ton.
"I wish I could send more but the three of them work best together. Besides, they are quite high-ranking jonin and they all have a special ability…" Tsunade answered.
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"Are we there yet?" Mai, the girl with untied long hair, whined.
"I'm bored…" Cho complained.
"Can you two just shut up?" Hikari, the girl with black-brown hair, asked, irritated by the other two's attitude.
"Yes Hikari-san…" Cho and Mai replied.
The three girls continued walking through the forest, not noticing that they were being watched.
"I feel as if we are being watched," Cho stated after walking a bit more.
"You're probably just nervous since this is our first S-rank mission in a while," Hikari told her.
"Look!" Mai exclaimed and pointed to two figures standing in front of them.
"You will all come with us or risk death," one of the shadowy figures said and stepped out of the shadows.
"Isn't that Uchiha Itachi? The betrayer of the Uchiha clan that killed all his kinsmen except his little brother?" Cho whispered to Hikari.
The second figure stepped out of the shadows. The sword he was carrying made a loud dragging nose as he dragged it across the rough ground.
"And that's Hoshigaki Kisame right?" Hikari whispered back. The two of them nodded.
"The Akatsuki!" Mai exclaimed. Cho slapped a hand on her forehead and Hikari sighed.
"What business do you have with us?" Hikari asked, placing her hand on her weapon pouch.
"Leader-sama says that you Konohagakure ninjas know too much about our organisation. As such, he has ordered us to kill you, or bring you back to the base for interrogation," Itachi replied with that uncaring look in his eyes, not that any of the three girls were looking at his eyes.
"Fine, we will follow you back to your so-called base," Cho answered for the three girls. This caused the other two to look at her with shock and disbelief.
Hikari pulled Cho down so that they stood eye to eye. "What the hell do you think you're doing?" she hissed.
"I would rather not die. Besides, this gives us a chance to find out where their base is and if we make it out, we can pass the information to Hokage-sama and it would benefit all of us greatly," Cho explained. Hikari looked at her for a few more seconds before sighing and deciding to follow Cho's plan.
"Mai will just follow Cho-senpai and Hikari-san!" Mai said.
Kisame whispered something to Itachi. Itachi mumbled his reply and turned around and started walking. Kisame watched as his partner walked off and used his sword to motion for the three girls to follow his lead. The three girls followed quietly.
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On the way there, Mai started to feel tired.
"Cho-senpai~! Can you carry me? My feet hurt," Mai whined.
"No," Cho replied bluntly.
"Neh Hikari-san~! Cho-senpai is bullying me!" Mai complained, grabbing Hikari's arm.
"Just do it, Cho…" Hikari sighed. Cho growled.
"How much longer till we reach your so-called base?" Cho asked as Mai hopped onto her back.
"Not much," Itachi replied monotonously.
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The three girls and the two guys stood in front of a huge bolder.
"Wow…" Cho muttered. Mai got off her back and stared at the bolder in awe.
Itachi did some handsigns and the rock slowly moved upwards, grinding to a halt when there was enough space for everyone to enter. Itachi and Kisame walked in briskly while the three girls took their time to look around at their new surroundings.
The two Akatsuki members led the girls to a section of the base cut off from the rest. A room with a wooden door. The girls expected the room to appear plain and boring but when they stepped inside, they were met with a well furnished room. Around 5 cushions lay on the floor and a table complete with a candle, some stacks of paper, some books and a pen was placed towards the back wall of the room. A man with piercing purple eyes sat at the table.
"Itachi, Kisame, you may leave us," the man ordered. Itachi and Kisame bowed and left the room, leaving the three girls on their own to face this weird man.
"Who are you?" Cho asked.
So how was it? I hope you understood what was going on.
Well since this was rewritten...please review? I hope you will review and tell me how the writing style is and if the OCs are too Mary Sue or anything!
Thanks for reading! :)