Hey back with a new story , in this gohan killed cell when he had the chance he has more control over his saiyen side witch means his father , goku , is alive
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AT THE SON HOUSE HOLD
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"so..."said chichi hesitating a bit
"so?" asked gohan
they were outside watch goten and goku play fight in the field
"well you know how you were asking too in-role at a high school?"asked chichi
"huum... yeah." said gohan he had a small smile knowing what she was gonna say
"I though about it and i enrolled you in too a high school called orange star high its in satan city."said chichi a huge grin on her face
"REALLY !" shouted gohan with a smile
at this point goku and goten stopped fighting to look at gohan and chichi they thought nothing of it and resumed there fighting
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SOME WERE IN SATAN CITY
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"so vi why does every body hate you at OSH ?"asked eraser
"there all jealous of my father"answered
"yeah cause' he thinks hes so strong even tough he's just an old man"said a brute
"hey cuter what do you want?"asked videl do you get that reference review if you did
"to beat you to up , what else?"said/asked cuter
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up high in the airs of satan city
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"why every time gohan has too go shopping he asks me too come along ,*sight*"thought piccolo and goku at the same time
"come on guys crack a smile at least we get some exercise" said krilling
"yeah guys this will be fun!" exclaimed yamcha
"shut up yamcha" shouted all three at the same time
"come on guys were nearly there" said gohan has he pointed at the gigantic mall
"hooo look a giant doughnut !"shouted goku in excitement has he flew towards a giant metal doughnut sign
"goku don't it's-"shouted gohan but was cut of by a horrible crunch and goku saying
"yuck it's stale"at that gohan nearly fell out of the sky
"come on goku let's get this over with" stated piccolo
"sure"answered goku
"okay act normal every body"said gohan
"that's easy for you too say"said a grumpy piccolo
they landed in the alley next to the mall only no find it was occupied by two people fighting guess who
"f*ck off cuter" shouted videl
"huu... what's going on gohan"asked piccolo and goku at the same time
"how the hell am i meant to know ?!" shouted/asked gohan
at that point videl and cuter noticed the 5 strangers and turned too look at them
this is what videl sees : krilling a martial art master , yamcha a base ball player , goku a great fighter he save the world several times , who she thought would probably be his son or brother, and some tall green dude she thought it was king piccolo but why would he hang around with his worst enemy
what cuter sees: a midget (no offence), some dude with a scar , 2 dudes with weird hair and an alien so he ran away like a wuss
"huum... hello?"videl said/asked the team of 5 (dame one less and it would have been team four star :D )
"hi" said goku, krilling and yamcha full of energy
"hello" said gohan
"*grumble*" that was piccolo he was trying to hide behind goku but he was a bit taller winch means that videl could see the back of his head
"huu... what are you doing here i mean martial artist like you
ou shouldn't be here"said videl
"piccolo would you"asked gohan
"sure"said piccolo
"wait you are picco-"she was cut of by piccolo using a mind wipe on her and on 'cutter' but little did they now eraser was just round the corner listening in
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okay ending it here hope you like if you did go check my profile or give me feed back on the story and if you fink i should continue or not