A/N: Alright I know I promised to finish my L story: Devotion, Secrecy, and a Whole Lot of Murder, and I am going to finish that story. But, what I have below is the character profile for the main character in my Mello story that I will be publishing soon. It is based off of Matt's twin sister getting mugged outside of a club one night that Mello and Matt are there. Matt doesn't know he has a sister and neither does Mello so when they save her from being mugged and possibly gang-raped, they have no idea that she is Matt's sister until she wakes up from unconsciousness.
I hope the storyline is interesting; it takes place right in the middle of the Kira case after L's death when Mello and Matt are working to catch Kira and beat Near. If you have any advice for a possible title or if I could make the character profile better in any way, please don't hesitate to let me know; I want you all to enjoy these stories!
So please let me know what your thoughts are on the character profile below and on the general storyline idea. Any advice or comments are welcome. Is my original character a Sue or a non-Sue? I think she's a non-sue but opinions are welcomed.
Another note: I left a few things out before so I updated this. First of all, Matt was still an orphan at the Wammy House I left it out last time because Raine doesn't know that he's an orphan. Also, I took out the fact that they were identical and made them fraternal twins and I changed Raine from being an expert at computers to a technophobe. XD I hope these changes make this better and also, Naomi and Raye were in here simply because I thought adding another OC would be too much but now the nurse's name is Julie.
After my updates, any advice?
***Mello's story is now posted! It is called Intoxication! Please read it and tell me your thoughts on how I portrayed Mello and Matt!***
Name: Raine Jeevas
Age/Date of Birth: 19 / February 1, 1993
Height: 5'5"
Weight: 105 lbs
Description: Strawberry-blonde hair waist length, blue-green eyes, never wears anything too revealing (very modest)
Personality: Vegetarian; expert at the flute; technophobe; very outspoken and outgoing but when it comes to clothing, she hates to show too much skin
Backstory: When Mail Jeevas (Matt)'s mother became pregnant, her and her husband planned on having one baby and one baby only. After all, they couldn't afford two babies, not on their salaries. On the day Mrs. Jeevas went into labor, Matt was born fine and healthy. After Matt's mother gave birth to him, she began having major complications. The nurses and doctors didn't realize she was pregnant with not one but two babies, fraternal twins. His mother had to be rushed into immediate cesarean surgery; but by the time they began operating, it was too late. The doctors were able to save the second baby that was born barely breathing; but for the mother, it was too late. She had passed away before even being able to hold either of her children. Once the second baby was stabilized, the nurses concluded that it was a healthy baby girl.
When the nurses returned to the delivery room to tell Mr. Jeevas that his daughter was alive and healthy, he was nowhere to be found. Mr. Jeevas had taken Matt and left the hospital, abandoning the baby girl that his wife had given birth to.
Days turned to weeks and weeks turned to months but no matter how hard anyone tried, there was no way to contact Mr. Jeevas. Feeling extremely sorry for the infant, a young nurse at the hospital decided to take in the child and name her Raine. The adoption was made official a month later. Mr. Jeevas never returned for his daughter and nobody at the hospital ever heard from him again.
As a schoolchild, Raine was extremely bright in the subjects of Social Studies and Math but struggled difficultly in English and Science. She took interest in music and in particular, the flute. Because of the fact that she went to a private school, the other children tended to look at her differently since she was an orphan; and because of that fact, she only had a small group of friends that were orphans as well. She was often picked on for the fact that she was an orphan but she never let it bother her; when someone bullied her, she beat them up. As she reached her high school years, school became even more difficult but she managed to struggle through it with the help of her best friend and mentor, Julie, the nurse who took her under her wing as a single mom working full-time at the hospital.
When Raine turned 18, she decided to head out on her own and search for her long lost brother named Matt. She knew that if she found him, she could find her father, and her other relatives. She had no idea that her brother was an orphan too. She didn't know that when their father left with Matt, all he did was drop him off at an orphanage. Raine thought that she was going to be reunited with her long lost relatives and finally have that picture perfect family. Boy was she wrong.
