-1Hey ppls! This is my first fanfic/poem on saku/sasu, please tell me if it is good or not

BritBrat

As I Wait In My Room

Sasuke + Sakura

As I wait in my room I wait, wait for the man to enter my world of love

As I wait I wonder does he love me? Or does not? Does he love me as much as I love him? If he doesn't will I leave, or if he does will we still be?

As I wait he enters my world of love

My heart is pounding, racing at his sexy body. Thinking of what's about to happen next. Love, or pretend love hoping, will I find out?

As I sit he comes towards me as he comes towards me he begins to take off his shirt

As the shirt comes off I wonder am I doing the right thing? So I stood up and began to walk towards him

And The Rest is To Be

Continue….

Part 2

MMM… he is so fine. As I walk to him I give him a kiss of never ending love and compassion

As I kiss him he grabs me with a big hug and kiss me back then he says in a whisper "I love you to much to lose you to anything or anyone"

As I'm hearing this my heart begins to race also as the screaming is running through my mine so I answer "I love you too and I hope that we can work this out as much as we love each other"

Then he begins to kiss me on my neck and then lower as he kisses me lower my back begins to tingle like it never tingle before. Questions are going through my mine but I can't answer them because it feels so good to have some one to love me for me

He picks me up around his waist I begin to smile inside in what's about to happen next to me and him then the main question comes up "Am I about to make love to him,"? "the man I love very much ,too much to not give him up to any one that does not love him as much as I do''?

Then the moaning in my ear "Sakura", "Sakura" as I look up I feel a sudden shake, then I see stuff fading, disappearing from my reach I scream "Sasuke! No! come back!" then things started to clear then I knew that he was not here, "Sakura , Sakura you been asleep for so long I just wanted to tell you mom is not home" even though I did not want to open my eyes……I can tell that was a dream, and this is no lie, my sister left the room as I sigh with despair to look at the door…..and see no one there.

THE END