'Thinking'

"Talking"

"demon/kyuubi talking"

yes I know this idea of naruto and akatsuki has been used a couple of time and most of the stories seem to never be finished so i wrote my story slightly based off other fan fictions

I do not own naruto or any characters I wish I did but I don't :p. anyway im not a very good writer and this is my first story so plz tell me if I should continue and what I should do to improve my story thanks.

Chapter: 1

Sakura was standing outside the village gates, as she has been for two weeks now. As she was just about to leave she noticed three figures in the horizon. 'Sasuke?' soon she was running at the figures. "SASUKE!" "SASUKE!" naruto saw sakura running at them screaming sasuke's name and he immediately became very irritated 'sasuke, sasuke why is it always sasuke!'

Thought naruto as he looked over at kakashi who had sasuke on his back. Soon sakura was walking next to kakashi and was petting sasuke's hair. "thank god he's not to hurt" said sakura as she let out a sigh of relief. 'I wonder how naruto's doing I know he must be irritated by the way sakura is acting' thought kakashi as he let out a tired sigh.

They soon arrived at konoha hospital as naruto and sasuke were taken to their room's kakashi sat down in the waiting room just because he was to exhausted to walk to his apartment right now. Sakura sat outside of sasuke's room until the nurse let her visit him.

Meanwhile naruto was laying unconscious from charka depletion and pure exhaustion, in his lonely room thinking about the previous events lately 'I continuously go to look for that idiot sasuke and after a three week search and constant fight I bring him back to receive absolutely no thank you or any sign of appreciation no she just goes strait to sasuke and begins to obsess over his slight wound and doesn't even spare a glance at me'

"she sees you the way all the other villager's see you. They see you as me, as a demon, a killer, the demon that killed their hero, kit" the monster fox closed it's blood red eye's and re-opened them moment's later to look at naruto who he brought into his cell. The kyuubi began to grin showing his huge sharp teeth. "I can feel your anger growing, kit, let that anger grow to hatred, embrace that hatred and kill everyone who causes you pain cause them to suffer the way you always have."

'SHUT UP YOU MONSTER FOX!' yelled naruto looking up at the fox. the kyuubi's grin grew even wider now becoming a sinister smile. "they hate you, they hurt you, they see you as a demon, a monster leave them kit and become stronger feed your strength off of your anger let it grow to un-dieing hatred"

'…' "you know they hate you kit I can feel it in you, listen to me, leave this village and I will show you unbeatable strength" the kyuubi than began to laugh and sunk to the back of his cage. Naruto than woke up and looked around and not to his surprise no one was around him. he sighed and looked out his window. 'guess I better get my rest' with that he fell asleep.

The next morning he woke up and saw kakashi sitting on a chair in his room. Naruto than got into a sitting position looking out his window. "Feeling well rested naruto?" asked kakashi in a bored tone "yea, I guess" he said in a depressed tone as kyuubi's words played over and over in his mind. His thoughts were soon interrupted by kakashi's voice, again. "good, well sasuke is felling better now and tomorrow we will continue our normal training." Explained kakashi. He than got up and left the hospital room.

Naruto laid back in down in his bed and decided to just sleep more until tomorrow.

(a/n: well that's the first chapter sorry it's short I promis the next chapters will be longer PLEASE REVIEW it means a lot to me to know people read my storry and please if there is something you don't like tell me. I'd also appreciate any idea's and paring's thanks! :D)