I present to you my first Disney Fanfiction


It was a fine day in Toontown. The sun was shining, the birds were singing, the dogs were dogging, the cats were catting, and the fish were fishing*. But to Donald, he was jumping for joy.

"Unca' Donald, what's going on?" asked Huey.

"I just entered a contest to win a vacation to Hawai'i and I won!"

All three nephews joined in on their uncle's joy. Donald decided to let his friends know that he won the contest. That afternoon in Mickey Park, he called his friends together to announce the big news.

"What's happening, pal?" asked Mickey.

"You know that contest that was announced on the commercial for the Super Bowl? Well, I won!"

Everyone said to him how lucky he was.

"The rules say that I get to bring friends and family along for the trip."

Goofy stood up and announced: "This'll be a good way for Max to celebrate his college graduation!"

"When does the plane leave?" asked Minnie. Donald read the ticket to find that it left in the morning of the next day.

"How are we going to find a way to get to the islands in time?" Daisy queried. Donald started to ponder on who should fly their plane. The first thought was Launchpad. But knowing him, it was likely that he would crash the plane. Then he thought of Baloo, he was an excellent flier. But the thing was, the bear's plane was a cargo-plane.

"Aw to heck with it! Baloo's flying the plane from Duckburg!"


The next morning, Mickey, Minnie, Pluto, Goofy, Max, Daisy, Huey, Dewy, Louie, Donald, and Pete arrived at Scrooge's personal airstrip. Everybody had packed their belongings the night before and set their alarms to 3 in the morning.

"Flight 96 to Hawai'i, I repeat, Flight 96 for Hawai'i," said the intercom.

"That's us," said Pete.

Every member of the party hurried toward the airliner. They all managed to find their seats on the plane.

"Attention passengers, this is your pilot speaking. We will be taking off momentarily. Any questions about our flight?"

Louie asked: "What's your name?"

The pilot simply said that his name was Baloo, and that although he had flown a cargo-plane before he knows how to fly any plane.

Within minutes of flying, the passengers finally caught sight of the islands. The people at the resort hotel welcomed the passengers with open arms and invited them to a luau. Goofy felt a bit uneasy about this since the last time he was at a luau he was sacrificed to the fire goddess, Pele. But he managed to survive.

At the luau, Mickey and Donald managed to have a nice chat over their cups of punch. Minnie and Daisy were called up to join the hula dancers. Goofy, however was more focused on the all-you-can-eat buffet. Pete, on the other hand, was trying to contact his agent and set up a car-dealership somewhere on the island.

A gong sounded and a voice announced in a German accent. "Madames et Monsieurs. Señors y Señoras. Meine Damen und Herren! Ladies and Gentlemen. The Tiki Room Resort Hotel would like to present at this luau, commemorating 50 years of the resort, the legendary idol, Shabuhm-Shabuhm!"

A curtain folded back to show where the idol is, only to show that it had gone missing!


*: This bit right here was taken from the Beatles song "Revolution 9". At one point in this track on the White Album, John Lennon says that "the dogs were dogging, the cats were catting, the birds were birding, and the fish were fishing".

The fact that Baloo is flying the plane comes from the cartoon TaleSpin, where Baloo and Louie are traders working at a seaport while Shere Khan is the head of the Mafia. The bird announcing the appearance of Shabuhm-Shabuhm is supposed to be Fritz from the Enchanted Tiki Room attraction at Disneyland and Walt Disney World in Florida.

Also this story is based on the videogame Maui Mallard in Cold Shadow also known in Europe as Donald Duck in Maui Mallard for the SNES, Genesis, PC, and Gameboy Color. I highly suggest you try this game out on the SNES since there is a level select option as well as impressive graphics done in part by Mode7.